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Firstly, please ignore..if you come across any spelling errors and the grammatical mistakes. WAS TOO ENGROSSED IN THE STORY TO NOTICE ANY ERRORS . SO THAT MEANS YOU DID A GOOD JOB
Secondly, sorry I know I'm late. BETTER LATE THAN NEVER
And I'm kind of disappointed with myself with this one. DON'T BE. THIS WAS GOOD!
It could have been so much better. But I couldn't make you guys wait any longer.
Guess I'm too tired and lazy right now. Please forgive me.
Thirdly, I've got a confession. It's hard for me to write portions where a lot of people are involved i.e. family scenes etc etc. I do not why, but capturing everybody's expressions and dialogues is kind of hard. I'm trying to make myself better though. ONLY ONE WAY TO GET BETTER AT IT. KEEP DOING IT. EASY FOR ME TO SAY THOUGH
Fourthly, in the last portion of the chapter, Khushi's just enjoying her moment. She could feel he was jealous an therefore she continued with the whole Aakash drama. But it backfires, like always, and she's the one hurt. Or we just don't see that Arnav's hurt too, and that's why he's rude. That's the only way he knows.
CAME ACROSS LOUD AND CLEAR THAT HE IS JEALOUS
Lastly, Yes I know Arnav is a Grade-A ass. And he shall continue to be so for some more time.
He was just real mad and jealous today, don't hate him, he's my baby
HE IS MY BABY TOO. LOVE HIM. PARTICULARLY IN THIS STORY.
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