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ISensedYou IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
omg they finally do it...
am waitin for their mornin reaction,...
awsum double update...
tanx 4 d pm...
continue soon

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barunslakku IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged

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RTlicious Goldie

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Searing Hot Appy! Wow...m sweating here! lolEmbarrassed
Loved the update...glad you finally wrote about their night together and I'm so glad that it was pleasurable for both of them and not awkward!Big smile
Looking forward to the next one!Smile

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Sony_1234 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
SmileI just started reading this FF and I am loving it. I am just in the first thread. I will comment as soon as i finish few parts Smile

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Natasha333 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Wooowww..update soon

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kuts IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Blushing    reserved for my comment


Sorry sorry sorry for late..

My comment for Part A'


Phew,finally am able to  comment after reading this almost 6th to 7th time'Embarrassed

Plz bear with my late comment'

Kya karu,mera dimag he bandh hojata tha'.Tongue aur baki k time,I dint have my lappy!!altought I comment using my mobile always,I loved this part,and wanted to give u my every take on it,so with out much bla-baring,here I go'Big smile

It was obvious for her to get scared, her relation was going to change'no matter how much they both would say, but they both knew somewhere inside them,that things are changing'

And WOW,her dress,which her Arnav presented her'she must be looking way 2 hott 4 Arnav to keep her hands off her'I am sweating her,imagining his situation'.Blushing   

And then started their journey to the hotel!!

I have always read these few lines of their drive from home to the hotel,with utmost patience'with a sweet smile,I continued..


And when they reached the hotel,and he looked at her,not only khushi, I was getting nervous too'but still,the smile covering my lips dint move'

And when he asked why aren't u talking 2 me,I was like'awww..she is taking,she is just nervous yar'Embarrassed

And the way he asked her permit to kiss her,mai toh wahi pe marr gayi di'kash mujhe bhi aisa koi mill jaaye'haay'Day Dreaming


but then she questioned him bout him being all lovey dovey,and the very next moment he called her "moti"'.ROFL

and then their first "actual passionate kiss"Blushing   

and then he picked her in his arms!!!so perfect beginning'.wow'

so romantic,so touchy!!

She is dating her best friend.

This very line was so known to me,yet,vey much more came to me while reding it'Smile


Well,I cant see,but definately imagine the look on her face when they both enteredred the presidential suite of the hotel!!

Arnav so much understands her,well, least he realized,loves her too'.

And then,another Awww moment for me when Arnav said-

I know I am not your husband but I am going to be your baby's father. I couldn't have chosen a better place than this to gift you our baby.

And then when he said "tumne pyar toh kiya hai na.."

I was just speechless'.although I was lost in this chapter from the very beginning,I lost my words for commenting over here!!

"loving me unconditionally"

This surely means a lot'.andthese words would be cherished later for sure..

And then came the kiss!!the perfect kiss'that dint make my mind go gutter,but made me feel how much friends can do for each other's happiness'Smile

Her fear was obvious when she stopped him'but he assured her bout their future'it was really touchin'

she was looking pretty, very pretty, just like a new bride who has never been kissed".

Di,aap aise dailogs laate kaaha se ho??

And then again his proposal to capture her lips,that made me say-

Aa,aaja,mujhe he kiss karle..Blushing   

And when I read this-

If there was any chance of getting pregnant just by kissing then she would have surely got pregnant tonight just by the way he was kissing her.

I wasBlushing   and ROFL too'sorry'but had to share my all thoughts with u'TongueEmbarrassed

And then,this PART A came to end'Smile

**Sigh** heart beat is still clear to my,making me aware,that its still beating to read more'and fianally am able to comment'I have covered my all feeling which I got from this part'.hope my views dint bore u..thnks so much for taking ur time and reading my views'

The title itself always gave me butterflies in my tummy'I have read this chapter over and over so many times!!loved it as many times I read it'

Keep up with ur work..i have always adored u,and always will'.love u loads di'Hug


Edited by trivedishraddha - 26 September 2012 at 12:46pm

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kuts IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
reserved again,only for my comment. .


Sorry sorry sorry for late..

Plz bear me,it will take a while..Embarrassed

Sorry for late comment'Ouch

Kya karu,mera dimag he bandh hojata tha'.Tongue aur baki k time,I dint have my lappy!!altought I comment using my mobile always,I loved this part,and wanted to give u my every take on it,so with out much bla-baring,here I go'Big smile

My comment for Part B'


And they kissed!!!Blushing   '.

And then he gifted her something'ahem ahem'mera gutter mind mode is on now'.

And when she protested to open the packet and arnav said-

if you open it here khushi, then I will make sure you wear it in front of me

I was blushing and ROFL both'Tongue

And OMG di,this nighty is really so sexy!!

Am having a big Big smile on my face thinkin bout next'.

And when I read that this was the first lingerie he had ever designed that he gifted her I was like Shocked wow!!

Khushi is herself such a perfect frame,and uon that his work on her art!!my my'Embarrassed

No doubt that arnav thought that she was look so f***ing gorgeous'

And then he picked her up'.am here,I am getting all hot!!


And now it starts'for what all were waiting from when'.

His body touching hers,this thought itself started heating my parts and gave me goose bumps'.Tongue

Here,there,her skin was burning,and here,my thinking capacity!!

The kiss was too loving'OMG!!

I could imagine his bites and his tounge on her very well'

And then he moved down'and my head was spinning'I was all time Big smile and blushing'.i know many times I would have said that till now'.bt ya, what can I do'aap ne lika he aisa hai!!

And I liked this wild side of her'A WILD CAT'Wink

And then,her fear of not showing herself to him'its so cute of her to be so innocent'I loved it how perfectly and maturely u made him handle the situation di!!

Very well 'Clap

His dailogs were making me go'awww again'I just loved this side of Arnav'

Each words were playing a havoc inside me,yet soothing them at the next instance..Smile

And then what she said.. "then suck it damn it"

I was like LOL'its all just started re'dhiraj rakh'aage aur bhi bahut kuch aayega'WinkTongue

And then u gave the answer of the bruises'I was Angry on khushi 4 a while'dammit,she should not date only such boys who cant understand or comfort her in the most needed things'

I absolutely am with arnav on this'.but when he said that-

It is equivalent to rape you know that?

 I was like oops, ab ASR mode pe mat chale jana yar'bechare already nervous hai'Confused

BUT AM GLAD WITH THE WAY HE HANDLED HER'.and this not so small issue..

And then,his need for her,yaa,I was waiting for this,not becoz I wanted to see lust,but wanted to see their love'.

And then came her honest confession'yeah,she was scared, and I was nervous,yet excited to read more'

But then he did what I did expect to read 'but when I read,it was all again new to me..Smile

Am glad to read arnav was her first to touch her there, but am equally ok with the fact that she aint a virgin'

His gestures was giving her heavens,par meri saasei yaha uud rahi hai,uska kya??nahi nahi,mei padhna toh bandh koi kimat pe nahi karungi'..Embarrassed

Ok'breadthe shradhha breathe'.sigh'.[:D]

And the position then changed'.making my wild thoughts go wilderBlushing   

When I read this-

It was more than 6 times now khushi was in a verge to erupt but that the very moment he stopped so that she doesnot climax.

I told my self,wah, kya energy level hai boss!!lucky khushi,and arnav,maan gayi tujhe,asli mard ki pehchaan hai tu'LOL

(no offence,this is what I thought when I read it 4 d first time'Tongue)

And then,OMG moment for me, in their love making session,they confessed their loveHeart what could have been more perfect!!!

Their,the deed is done!!their love had made its way!!

OMG di,it's one of THE AWESOME updates of ur work'

Full of lust if we see in one way..,yet there exsisted love'

No,the love was there from long back,but it was completed today!!!

Awesome update di'now I will be able to breathe'.

Edited by trivedishraddha - 26 September 2012 at 12:47pm

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kuts IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
uff,Appy_Indy Di,plz don't like my reserved post yar,otherwise when i edit them later,how will i know you have read my comment,tell me.,do i bore you with my long comments?
then i will try and keep it short. .Unhappy

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