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Roshkolovemusic Goldie

Joined: 09 February 2012
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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Very passionate update. They love each other. Hope at the end they will be together forever. 
Very beautifully written updates. Thanks for the pm.Smile

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aks555 Goldie

Joined: 11 March 2012
Posts: 2342

Posted: 17 September 2012 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
wow..super HOTTT update...
update soon the nxt part.
n thnx fr d PM BUDDY

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Badtameeez Senior Member

Joined: 15 February 2008
Posts: 720

Posted: 17 September 2012 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
FInally they did it; idk about Arnav-Khushi but I have waited long for them to do it LOL Arnav is so cute... like how he fulfills everything she wants Embarrassed I guess its gonna be awkward the morning after lol Great update!! thank you for the PM Smile

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ISensedYou IF-Rockerz

Joined: 19 June 2012
Posts: 5971

Posted: 17 September 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
omg they finally do it...
am waitin for their mornin reaction,...
awsum double update...
tanx 4 d pm...
continue soon

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RTlicious Goldie

Joined: 14 May 2006
Posts: 1796

Posted: 18 September 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Searing Hot Appy! Wow...m sweating here! lolEmbarrassed
Loved the update...glad you finally wrote about their night together and I'm so glad that it was pleasurable for both of them and not awkward!Big smile
Looking forward to the next one!Smile

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Sony_1234 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 April 2008
Posts: 4579

Posted: 18 September 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
SmileI just started reading this FF and I am loving it. I am just in the first thread. I will comment as soon as i finish few parts Smile

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Natasha333 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 July 2011
Posts: 1695

Posted: 18 September 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Wooowww..update soon

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kuts IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 April 2012
Posts: 11727

Posted: 18 September 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Blushing    reserved for my comment


Sorry sorry sorry for late..

My comment for Part A'


Phew,finally am able to  comment after reading this almost 6th to 7th time'Embarrassed

Plz bear with my late comment'

Kya karu,mera dimag he bandh hojata tha'.Tongue aur baki k time,I dint have my lappy!!altought I comment using my mobile always,I loved this part,and wanted to give u my every take on it,so with out much bla-baring,here I go'Big smile

It was obvious for her to get scared, her relation was going to change'no matter how much they both would say, but they both knew somewhere inside them,that things are changing'

And WOW,her dress,which her Arnav presented her'she must be looking way 2 hott 4 Arnav to keep her hands off her'I am sweating her,imagining his situation'.Blushing   

And then started their journey to the hotel!!

I have always read these few lines of their drive from home to the hotel,with utmost patience'with a sweet smile,I continued..


And when they reached the hotel,and he looked at her,not only khushi, I was getting nervous too'but still,the smile covering my lips dint move'

And when he asked why aren't u talking 2 me,I was like'awww..she is taking,she is just nervous yar'Embarrassed

And the way he asked her permit to kiss her,mai toh wahi pe marr gayi di'kash mujhe bhi aisa koi mill jaaye'haay'Day Dreaming


but then she questioned him bout him being all lovey dovey,and the very next moment he called her "moti"'.ROFL

and then their first "actual passionate kiss"Blushing   

and then he picked her in his arms!!!so perfect beginning'.wow'

so romantic,so touchy!!

She is dating her best friend.

This very line was so known to me,yet,vey much more came to me while reding it'Smile


Well,I cant see,but definately imagine the look on her face when they both enteredred the presidential suite of the hotel!!

Arnav so much understands her,well, least he realized,loves her too'.

And then,another Awww moment for me when Arnav said-

I know I am not your husband but I am going to be your baby's father. I couldn't have chosen a better place than this to gift you our baby.

And then when he said "tumne pyar toh kiya hai na.."

I was just speechless'.although I was lost in this chapter from the very beginning,I lost my words for commenting over here!!

"loving me unconditionally"

This surely means a lot'.andthese words would be cherished later for sure..

And then came the kiss!!the perfect kiss'that dint make my mind go gutter,but made me feel how much friends can do for each other's happiness'Smile

Her fear was obvious when she stopped him'but he assured her bout their future'it was really touchin'

she was looking pretty, very pretty, just like a new bride who has never been kissed".

Di,aap aise dailogs laate kaaha se ho??

And then again his proposal to capture her lips,that made me say-

Aa,aaja,mujhe he kiss karle..Blushing   

And when I read this-

If there was any chance of getting pregnant just by kissing then she would have surely got pregnant tonight just by the way he was kissing her.

I wasBlushing   and ROFL too'sorry'but had to share my all thoughts with u'TongueEmbarrassed

And then,this PART A came to end'Smile

**Sigh** heart beat is still clear to my,making me aware,that its still beating to read more'and fianally am able to comment'I have covered my all feeling which I got from this part'.hope my views dint bore u..thnks so much for taking ur time and reading my views'

The title itself always gave me butterflies in my tummy'I have read this chapter over and over so many times!!loved it as many times I read it'

Keep up with ur work..i have always adored u,and always will'.love u loads di'Hug


Edited by trivedishraddha - 26 September 2012 at 12:46pm

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