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ARSHI FF: BONDED 4 D WombII (cr) THREAD THREE (Page 141)

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
AWWW... CURIOUS FOR NEXT CHAPTER AFTER READING PRECAP...
UPDATE SOON...Smile

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:49am | IP Logged
amazing been long time for this one ... was missing it soo much ... love the bond of them and cute baby ... and Precap was nice and ur Hints was soo Amazing waiting to read  how there life gone be after this  

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Arshi_luv Senior Member
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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Awww!!!!!!! dis update was so cuteEmbarrassed
i luv our new responsible Arnav Tongue
D boy's name is kaushav!!!! it a cute name
Ur r rite u hve already shown d journey of their 9 months in BTFW1 so dere is no need to show it now
M glad dat u updated i was waiting so much fr dis update after i read d dark teaser of BTFW3 i thought dis story is going to end soon but m happy dat it isnt ending soon DancingParty
After all dere is lot to write nowTongue
Thanks fr d PM 
Continue soon...


Edited by Arshi_luv - 06 October 2012 at 8:50am

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Superbbb
Great update

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Awesome update... the had a baby boy.. so cute and looking forward to the next part

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged

Umm! Umm!

He touched his manhood, he was right he was hard. He frowned.

Umm! Umm!

Khu!!!! Umm! Khhh!

Umm!

He opened his eyes and saw Khushi all over him kissing him madly.

He pulled her close to him and smacked his lips on hers.

She grabbed some fistful of hair and pulled him close to his.

He touched her bossoms and caressed it.

"Its big!" Umm! He moaned inside her mouth.

He dragged himself down to claim her bosoms.

Some milk came in his mouth and he sucked it like a baby.

Ummh!

Arnav! Don't do this

"Its so different. It doesnot even taste like normal milk you know".

Khushi blushed a little "How will I know dumbo".

He nuzzled his face on her big bosoms and again claimed it "Umm!" he moaned.

I have read  so many FF's but the above part you wrote about Arnav tasting Khushi's milk was very appropriate according to the situation they were in ...none of the FF writers were bold enough to bring  this kind of reality in their FF's inspite of the demand of the scenes and the situation they were writing... These scenes are pretty commom and natural between the couples Wink 
 
very well  written ... a big round of applause ClapClapClapClap for conveying what an awesome  writer you are "BOLD AND BEAUTIFUL"Smile
The above scene is exactly as per the demand of the plot ,story ,characters and according to the situation  they were in ...
simply hats off ...

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Appy whole B4DW update was full aweee.

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Really!!!
I doubt that either of them will be able to get into a physical relationship with some one else.

It will fun to watch them trying on new dates but end of remembering the precious moments they hv spend.
And jealousy!

Cum on ..
That is natural.
Siblings get jealous of each other if parents love the other one more.

It is very normal emotion.
U are possessive of people u love most and on their attention and care.

But do not make it nasty...
It would be more fun when to watch them realizing their own feelings for each other without destroying their beautiful bond.

Show how frustrating it can be when they r trying to force themselves to date someone else..

While there own heart and soul is craving for the love of their lives.


Please update soon.

I like that u skipped the 9 months.

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