ARSHI FF: BONDED 4 D WombII (cr) THREAD THREE - Page 95

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Posted: 11 years ago
buhuha..paro di...u really scared me...at first whn i was reading...there is leap of 5 month...thn 9 month...baby boy come...i was thinking...u r ending it soon...but on last note it clears my doubt...nw relief...

wow! super lovely update...u named the baby khushav...wow! its really cute name..i loved it...its a baby boy...i thought it would a baby girl...but not to worry...they will plan another baby girl...πŸ˜‰
till nw they were living in one room wid junior...nw they r going back to their old term gf n bf...cycle...πŸ˜†...
they again n again made love...☺️...the way u wrote sucking n licking..it was really creates hot havoc...πŸ˜›..i know i know m getting naughtier..n totally shameless πŸ˜†..but di pink part was πŸ‘πŸΌ...πŸ˜‰...its age of get naughtier...πŸ˜†
eagerly waiting fr next exciting parts hw they handle the junior n their bf n gf...πŸ˜†
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome And Cute Update...Khushav is a Sweet name...waiting for the Next Update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am glad u made this decision of leaps...

yep u r rite the 9 months journey was already seen in BFTW1... 

this seemed so right!! perfect!!

looking fwd for the next update...

gawd u have created nail biting situations in all ur FFs ... 

this is no exception... but its gonna be exciting!!! 

bring it on!!

awaiting the next update!!

Preeti
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited on pg 137 πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWWW... CURIOUS FOR NEXT CHAPTER AFTER READING PRECAP...
UPDATE SOON...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing been long time for this one ... was missing it soo much ... love the bond of them and cute baby ... and Precap was nice and ur Hints was soo Amazing waiting to read  how there life gone be after this  
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww!!!!!!! dis update was so cute😳
i luv our new responsible Arnav πŸ˜›
D boy's name is kaushav!!!! it a cute name
Ur r rite u hve already shown d journey of their 9 months in BTFW1 so dere is no need to show it now
M glad dat u updated i was waiting so much fr dis update after i read d dark teaser of BTFW3 i thought dis story is going to end soon but m happy dat it isnt ending soon πŸ₯³
After all dere is lot to write nowπŸ˜›
Thanks fr d PM 
Continue soon...
Edited by Arshi_luv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update... the had a baby boy.. so cute and looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Umm! Umm!

He touched his manhood, he was right he was hard. He frowned.

Umm! Umm!

Khu!!!! Umm! Khhh!

Umm!

He opened his eyes and saw Khushi all over him kissing him madly.

He pulled her close to him and smacked his lips on hers.

She grabbed some fistful of hair and pulled him close to his.

He touched her bossoms and caressed it.

"Its big!" Umm! He moaned inside her mouth.

He dragged himself down to claim her bosoms.

Some milk came in his mouth and he sucked it like a baby.

Ummh!

Arnav! Don't do this

"Its so different. It doesnot even taste like normal milk you know".

Khushi blushed a little "How will I know dumbo".

He nuzzled his face on her big bosoms and again claimed it "Umm!" he moaned.

I have read  so many FF's but the above part you wrote about Arnav tasting Khushi's milk was very appropriate according to the situation they were in ...none of the FF writers were bold enough to bring  this kind of reality in their FF's inspite of the demand of the scenes and the situation they were writing... These scenes are pretty commom and natural between the couples πŸ˜‰ 
 
very well  written ... a big round of applause πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ for conveying what an awesome  writer you are "BOLD AND BEAUTIFUL"😊
The above scene is exactly as per the demand of the plot ,story ,characters and according to the situation  they were in ...
simply hats off ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Appy whole B4DW update was full aweee.