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OS "lagi aaj sawan ki phir wo jhadi hai"UPDT PG5

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:09pm | IP Logged

Ok guys I am here again with a new OS.. actually we always want a rain sequence in our serial'bt dnt know why cvs r not interested in it'anyways there is nothing impossible'if it is not happen in real so we can imagine na'as always I say'sochne k paise thode hi lagte hain bs thoda sa deemag kharch karna padta h'to bhai hamare pyare CVs to apna deemag kharch nhi karenge to humi kar lete hain''



This is for u lakhi & mani'.hope u like it'actually I am not a writer even not cv 'hahaha'so please ignore misteks & ovrthings'.its just a try to make u all happy'.

Here I go with''


                         


"lagi aaj sawan ki phir wo jhadi hai"





                                 


In india @ 10:30pm



Rat ka time h mausam pure bigde hue mizaz me shayad kuch dilo ki kasak h jo mausam k sath machal rhi hai bahar aane ko'pr logo ne in tufano ko seene me daba rakha hai'lekin tufan to tufan hi jitna dabaoge utni hi tezi se bahar aane ki koshis krta hai'.ek taraf priya apni window pe khadi thi dusri taraf ram'.dono mausam me apne dil ki hulchul mehsus kar rhe the'.



Priya sochti hai'.kitne salo baad bhi india waisa hi h 'mera apna jaise yha ki cheeze yha k log sab to mere apne hain'lekin phir bhi sab kuchh adhura hai qki won hi h jo use pura krta hai'wo insan jise wo apni jindagi me sabse jyada pyar krti hai'jiski wajah se wo apni jindagi me pyar ko jagah de payi'jiski wajah se usne pyar ko itna pyar kiya ki pyar uski jindgi ban gaya'.lekin aaj na wo insane uske pas na wo pyar uske pas h aur na hi wo zindgi uske pas hai'aaj priya ram ko itna yaad kar rhi h ki bas uski bechaini badhti jar hi h ek bar use dekhne k liye lekin wo chah k bhi aisa nhi kar sakti qki use to yhi pta h ki uske ram ab bht door nikal gye hain aur wo bht peechhe rh gyi h'..



Ram bhi priya ke khayalo me khoya h 'bar bar bechain ho rha h 'waise bhi barish ki ahat bhi use priya ki yaad dilane k liye kafi h qki uski priya ko barish bht pasand thi'aur priya ki koi pasand ram ko yad na ho ya pasand na ho ye to ho hi nhi sakta'to ram ko bhi barish bht pasand h aur wo intezar kr rha tha ki kab ye barse aur wo priya ka muskurata hua aur barish se bheenga hua chehra dekh sake'.agar priya ko ram ke chehre pe pasine ki char bunde pasand hain to ram ko bhi priya k chehre pr barish ki char bunde pasand hain'.



Aur mujhe indono ko ek jaise ehsas k sath machalte hue dekhna bht pasand hai'.khair  achanak  dono dilo ki hulchul aur mousam ki harkat kuchh jyada hi badh jati h'.


Priya'daijan 'bht bechaini mehsus ho rhi h'main thoda bahar ghum k aau ap pihu ka khyal rakhengi


Daijan'priyaaa kya hua bachhe 'koi problem h itni rat ko kaha jaogi mausam bhi bht kharab ho rha h


Priya'daijan aap tension mt lijiye main theek hub s aise thoda uneasy lag rha h..aur main india ko bht achhi tarah se janti hu'to aap tension mt lijiye bas pihu ka khyal rakhiyega main abhi aati hu'


Daijan'sure beta pr apna khyal rakhna


Udhar ram bhi hadbadi me kahin jar ha hota h'tabhi krishuji use rokti hain


Krishuji'ram itni rat ko itni jaldi me kaha ja rhe ho'


Ram' ma kuchh achha nhi lag rha tha 'thoda uneasy lag rha tha to socha bahar ghum aau kuchh mood change ho jayega'


Krishuji'hmmm achhi bat hai'


Ram'to jau main


Krishuji'ha pr mausam kharab ho rha h jyada der mt krna '.


Ab dono ghar se nikal chuke hain rat k 11 baje hain 'ek ajab si khamoshi ho gyi hai mausam me bhi aur dilo me bhi'shayad tufan ke aane ka ishara h'.dono apni raftar se badhe jar he the aur mausam bhi unka sath de rha tha'ab barish shuru ho gyi thi'barish ki bunde car ki window pe padti aur moti ki trh gir jati'.ab barish thodi jyada hi tez ho gyi thi aur dono k liye car aur pyar dono ko handle krna mushkil ho rha tha'aur finally whi hua jiska darr tha'aur intezar bhi'dono ki car takra jati h aur car k sath sapna bhi tut jata h'to obiously gussa bhi aayega to dono bht gusse me car se nikalte hain'aur obiously ladies first ko follow krte hue'priya pehle chillana shuru krti hai'


Priya'aap gadi dekh kr nhi chala sakte hai kya???...itni badi car h to kya puri sadak aapki ho gyi h..


Ram'priyaaa


Priya ram ka chehra dekhti hai aur uske hosh ud jate hain'ram k to pehle se hi ude hue the'aura b to mausam ko bhi jam k barsane ka baha na mil gya tha'.


Ram'priyaaa


Priya'sorryyy


Ram'priyaaa


Priya'excuse me'


Priya peechhe hat rhi thi aur ram aage badh rha tha'priya ko samajh nhi aa rha tha ki kya kare wo tez kadamo se car ki taraf badh jati h aur jaldi se car me baith jana chahti h'jaise hi door open krti h'ram uska hath pakad leta h aur khinch k use gale laga leta h'.ram priya ko bht hi majbuti se apni baho me le leta h aur priya bejan si uski baho me aa jati h 'pr samne se koi response nhi deti h dono bas roye ja rhe hote hain lekin priya apne ansu aur siskiyo ko bhi ram par jahir nhi hone deti h'dono kuchh der tak waise hi rhte hain'


                                    


Aaj ye tufan kuchh had se jyada hai'

Qki do dilo me pyar hadh se jyada hai

Kehne sunne ko hazar bate hain

Pr dhadkano ko shor hadh se jyada hai

Chahte hain bajuo me sara jahan samet lena..

Lekin aaj khushi to bahon me hadh se jyada hai'(by veena)


                                


Kuchh der bad jaise bahar k tufan k sath andr ka tufan bhi kuchh sant hota h to priya ko ehsas hota h ki wo kya kr rhi h'wo turant khud ko ram ki majbut baho se jabrdsti chhudati hai'ram priya k chehre ki taraf ishara krta h


Priya'kya???


Ram finger uske ansuo pe point out krta h


Priya'kya h???


Ram'ansu


Priya'ji nhi pani hai ye'aur jane lagti hai


Ram'priya


Priya'excuse me'main apki priya nhi hu'


Ram'achha to ye ansu kyun h


Priya'kitni bar bolu ye ansu nhi h barish ka pani h


Ram'priya'ansu aur pani me fark duniya nhi kr sakti h lekin pyar karne wale barish ki bundo se bhi ansuo ko alag kr sakte hain'.tum kyun jhuth bol rhi ho


Priya'main jhuth nhi bol rhi hum era nam pooja hai'apko koi galtfahmi hui h


Ram'mujhe galtfahmi hui h???


Priya'.ha


Ram'achha to kyun chali aayi thi meri baho me kyun nhi turant hata diya mujhe kyun nhi roka mujhe


Priya'.wo..wo main '.ghabra gyi thi'


Ram'achha'to tumhari dhadkane kyun mera nam le rhi thi'tumhari sanse kyun bar bar apne pyar ka izhar kr rhi thi


Priya'aisa kuchh nhi h ..shayad aap apni priya se bht jyada pyar krte hain isiliye apko aisa lag rha h'.jab ki aisa kuchh to hai hi nhi 'main to apka nam bhi nhi janti


Ram'achha to ye bat tum mujhse nazare milake kyun nhi keh rhi ho'nazare kyun chura rhi ho


Priya'main koi nazare nhi chura rhi hu


Ram priya ko pakad leta h aur use sawal pe sawal krta hai


Ram'achha nhi chura rhi ho to dekho meri taraf'kyun nhi dekh rhi ho'janti ho na ki tumhare dekhne k andaz se hi mujhe pta chal jayega kit um meri priya hi ho'janti ho na tum ki m jb tumhe chhuta hu aur tum is trh simat jati ho to mujhe pta chal jata h kit um mujhe kitna chahti ho'.janti ho na tum ki tumhari har sans har ansu har khushi ko main bina dekhe mehsus kr sakta hu 'janti ho na tum ki m tumhari dhadkano se tumhe pehchan sakta hu tumhari khushbu se pehchan sakta hu'.phir kyun jhuth bol rhi ho tum


Priya'ram mera hath chhodiye'its hurting me'


Ram'aahh tum mera nam nhi janti na'lo chhod diya'jao


Ram priya ko chhod deta h'priya k andar ka sara tufan barish me ansuo k raste bahar nikal rha h pr chehre pr koi shikan nhi h..wo jane lagti h apne dil ko majbut karke 'ram use dekhta rh jata hai'lekin pyar ka bichhad jana itna bhi asan nhi h aur itni mushkil se mil ke to bilkul bhi nhi'priya rukti h mud k ram ko dekhti h ram apni bahe faila deta h aur priya bhag k unme sama jati h 'aur dilo k andar ka sara tufan bahar aa jata h'bas pyar hi bachta h baki sab to barish k sath dhul jata h'.


Priya'.ha ram main aap ki hi priya hu bas apki priya' I so sorry'mujhe maf kar dijiye mne apko itni takleef di'ab kabhi aisa nhi karungi'I love u sooo much ram'& I miss u sooo much


Ram'I love u tooo priya'.bht pyar kiya tumhe aur bht yaad kiya tumhe'..

 

Ufff'ye pyar,'kitna dard deta h kitni takleef deta h'lekin phir bhi log ise hamesha maaf kr dete hain aur phir se pyar karte hain'.


Aaj to priya ka dialogue marne ka man kr rha h'.


Sach kehte hain'pyar bichhad sakta hai,kam ho sakta h,kho sakta h'lekin kabhi mar nhi sakta


Phir se dono ekdusre me sama jata h sare jaha ko bhul kar'ab to barish ki bunde bhi nach uthi h inki khushi me aur jhum jhum kr inpe baras rhi hai'.ufff

 

                                         



"koi kash dil pe mere hath rakh de

mere dil k tukdo ko ik sath rakh de

magar ye hain khabo khayalo ki bate

kabhi tut kar cheez koi judi hai

lagi aaj sawan ki phir wo jhadi hai 

wahi aag seene me phir jal padi hai"


                                              



Edited by veena23 - 10 September 2012 at 5:08am

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
That was very lovely veena...superb 

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
chalo aap ne finally likh diya thanq veena di 
even i want a rain seq between raya 
ab cv's ko zyada mehnat bhi nahi karni padegi bas yahi copy paste karke scene banade
perfect scene of raya meeting 
aapke dialogues bahut ache hain veena di Clap

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Veena This is awesome  thank u so much please continue karo i want to see RaYA reunion & also Ram Pihuu first meeting & Priya -Pihuu's entry in Kapoor Mention


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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:46am | IP Logged
awesome os dhi plz continue thanx for the os dhi

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Nice OS

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:58am | IP Logged
wow what a beautiful os. 

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ramsakshiroxxx

chalo aap ne finally likh diya thanq veena di 
even i want a rain seq between raya 
ab cv's ko zyada mehnat bhi nahi karni padegi bas yahi copy paste karke scene banade
perfect scene of raya meeting 
aapke dialogues bahut ache hain veena di Clap

Hug thank u sooo much darling...pr lagta hai tumne CC me padha nhi tha jo mne btaya tha ki mithu iske sath kya karegi...LOLWink

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