Balika Vadhu


Balika Vadhu
Balika Vadhu

SS: Wedding night-next day (UPDATING pg 7))

Pri_kinmuk Goldie

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
It was Anandi's and Shiv's wedding night...Star

Although 4 months had seemed long to Shiv...but he had come to realize that these 4 months were a boon to him as these months had not only given Anandi the space she needed to sort things out but also made her fall in love with him...she had got married to him not just because of her mother's wish but also because she wanted to- she had finally confessed she loved him...

They had both grown closer to each other over the past month...

The wedding had taken place in Jaitser. After all wedding ceremonies had been performed and after all the rasams...shiv's family had finally let go of him (mind you after all the teasing too) to his and anandi's room...Smile

He opened the door to the the she time anandi also opened the door...they almost banged into each other...Anandi was still in the bridal joda...'woh main paani bharne ...jaa rahee thi' although shiv had been staring at all all through out the wedding...he just could not take his eyes of her. They both were still still standing facing each other. Irawati came and broke the silence...'aree beta tum dono abhi tak yahin khade ho... kya hua...aree  dekho main paani hi laai tho tum dono ke liye...mujhe lagaa hi tha ki paani nahin hoga...lo anandi beta...chalo good night'.

Anandi moves inside...Shiv finally realizes he had been standing at the door...
He too goes in the room and closes the door behind him...Anandi is facing him...Shiv goes near her and takes her hand in his...'Anandi tum thak to nahin gayi na?' 'shaadi poor 4 din chali hai...tum thik ho na?' 'haan shiv main theek hoon' '

'jaantee ho aaj mujhe aisee khushi mehsoos ho rahee hai jaise mujhe pehle kabhi bhi nahin hui---tab bhi nahin hui jab tumne mujhse kahaa the ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho'
'...aaj tum har tarah se meree ho gayee ho...sirf meree' says shiv...touching her cheek with his hand while one hand still holding anandi's.

'Shiv'...anandi says in a soft voice and hugs him...her head resting on his chest...her one arm surrounding his waist and the other on his chest...

Both of them are lost in the moment. Anandi does not realize that she is silently crying..nor does shiv. However, Shiv hears her soft sob...he looks at her...cupping her face with his hands.. he asks 'kya hua anandi ?' 

Anandi is still looking down...silently crying... while Shiv is holding her face in his hands...
Shiv looks worried...he just cannot see his beautiful bride sad...Anandi just gives a small nod...but continues crying...Shiv makes her sit on the edge of the bed...he is worried...

Both of them are still in their wedding outfits...Anandi is wearing heavy jewellery and nathni(rajasthani nose ring: the big one)...

Shiv very gently removes her nose ring...and keeps it aside...Anandi looks up

Shiv then asks her 'kya hua anandi...? mujhe to batao'...'kuch nahin shiv...main bas bahut khush hoon...yeh toh bas ekdum se ronaa aa gaya...'  shiv is relieved...

Anandi then takes his hands...shiv is surprised...and says 'aap mere zindagi hain shiv...aur aaj mujhe apni zindagi mil gayi'...shiv always knew that anandi loved him but she was not always very vocal about it...

Shiv bends forwards taking her beautiful face in his hands...and kisses her on her lips...very gently and slowly...
Anandi's hand move to his shoulders...and then to his hair...
Shiv kisses her cheek..her eyes...Anandi is blushing...Shiv removes the heavy dupatta from her head...kisses her forehead...Shiv is so close to Anandi as he had never been before...he moves his hands towards the back of her neck to remove her necklace..while leaving the mangalsutra to be on her neck...he slowly removes her kada (-a form of heavy bangle)...

Shiv says...'anandi tum...' and Anandi hugs him...they are in this embrace for quite some time...
Anandi kisses kim...passionaltely...embracing him completely...her one hand caressing the back of his hair and the other around his broad shoulders...Shiv is on top of Anandi...he is making sure he does not put all his weight on her...after all she is so littleSmile...Shiv is gently holding Anandi's waist while kissing her deeply...and the other hand around her neck...
that night they truly become one Star...

The next day...Anandi opens her eyes...its 4:30 am she sees Shiv beside her...sleeping...his bare back shown even in the dark...she smiles to herself (had she ever been this happy- she asks herself)...She smiles and blushes thinking about last night...Oh my...she had to change before Shiv wakes up...she covers herself and goes to the washroom...slowly...without waking Shiv...she closes the door as slowly as possible...Anandi comes out...she is wearing a maroon bandhani saree...her hair are dripping wet...She comes out and sees Shiv is not on the bed or in the room...just as she is about to turn...Shiv holds her from the back...she gasps...but them immediately holds his hand which are on her waist and says 'shiv..aap'..she is deeply blushing Embarrassed...Shiv too whispers 'haan main...' and plants a kiss from the back in her cheek and caresses are neck...Embarrassed Anandi closes her eyes...

Anandi turns to face him. Shiv still does not have any shirt on. Anandi's eyes widen...but she controls them. She puts her arms around his neck and says...'ab bas bahut ho gaya...6 baj rahein gain...sab uth gaye honge' and moves towards the dressing table and sits in front of the mirror. Anandi is still smiling and blushing...she is just about to open the sindoor ka box when Shiv comes from behind takes the sindoor box opens it and puts it on her forehead...

'anandi...har roz sindoor main tumhe lagaoongaa' Shiv says this smiling... anandi's smile widens and says 'theek hai...ab aap jaaiye aur nahaa kar taiyaar ho jaiyee'...shiv says 'tum mujhe kuch denaa bhool rahee ho' and without waiting for her reply ...he takes her face in his hands and gives her a quick passionate kiss...

Anandi looks at him in an angry way yet smiling widely and says 'shaitan kahin ke..ab bas jaaiye...'and stands up to push him to the door Embarrassed

continued page 3 and 7 !!!!  Star

Edited by kinmuk - 30 September 2012 at 4:44pm

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Vishakha_Sakhi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Hey kinmuk, lovely start! Clap Clap
Eagerly waiting for your update! Big smile

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blushing IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Lovely start...Clap


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aamirkhanfan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
lovely start

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VerboseG IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 2:41am | IP Logged
Very nice... waiting for more!

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coolgirl3 Senior Member

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Awesome start can't wait to read more

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KwitKatts IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 4:20am | IP Logged
You have to continueBig smileBig smileBig smileLOLLOLLOL Sorry thats an orderStern Smile Wink
Please dont leave us most of the fiction writersCryCryCry
PS: I really hope Anandi falls in love with Shiv before their weddingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedBig smile [in the serial]

Edited by katts - 08 September 2012 at 4:19am

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Please continue soon.

Loved it

Edited by A2ZV - 08 September 2012 at 4:22am

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