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Madhubala - Ek Ishq Ek Junoon

SS || Irresistibly Charming || Ch 1, Pg 1 (Page 5)

Gouthami.b Goldie
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
very nice yaar

Get-Lost IF-Sizzlerz
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Get-Lost

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Wow... you have amazing writing skills.. !!!
Waiting for more!!
..Shweta.. IF-Rockerz
..Shweta..
..Shweta..

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Ahh! A well written story aka a Shwetzy magnet!

Critique:
-I loved how you transitioned through events and yeah, AD's do get treated like trash.
-RK's charm. Loved it! It's not described in the cheesy, sleezy way. In other words, no cheesy lines like, "You're so hot you put the Desi in Desirable." LOL Trust me, people use that.
-Liked how you described her "giddiness"

Personal Comments:
-Update soon woman!
-PM me pwease! I liked that post of yours and I think your on my buddylist. (I'll be stalking this post even if you don't cause I'm just awesome like that, don't be creeped.)

Shweta <3
My_VivJaan IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
nice nd interestng story...

plz pm me also whenever u write further...
palluhegde Senior Member
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Woww! Intresting. Looking frwd to more of RK n his HOTSTUFF Big smile
PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
A new beginning...

Nice concept. Rishbala meeting... Wow

Do continue soon.
Santhu.The.King IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Nice One.. Continue Soon.. 
Vsoujanya IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
haha what a wonderful concept! I love it! Can't wait to read more! Day DreamingHeart please pm when you update! ;)

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