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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
This was outstanding. You write so amazing. Keep it up hun and write more:) Would love to read ur writings!:D

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 12:45am | IP Logged
wow u expressed each n everything ...every emotion every pain every anger ...PERFECTLY...Clap this might just be an understatement for ur OS...loved it to the core...the passion n the emotions were so pure n real...i actually thought i was watching  a movie... n my ARIYA ...even i can't get them out of my mind...they r one hot couple...n my latest obsession...Day Dreaming
waiting for more work coming from ur side...n all the best for ur exams...Smile

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Super stuff!

Loved the OS, loved Arjun's style and the final touch with his patent dialogue "samjhe ya samjaooun" had me grinning! :D

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Girl, u r effing awesome! I mean just mindblowing. What a beautiful piece of writing!
 And BTW I too loveee MaYur. I have been a huge huge fan of MJHT. Hope to see more good stuff from your side!!

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
that was awesome, loved itSmile
Please do continue to write more, and update this one if possibleWink

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meghasingh

hey...first to comment... it was absolutely mesmerizing...

Thanks a lot. :)
xoxo

Originally posted by Liza.

A M A Z I N G ! Clap
Love, love, looove it !
You're a really talented writer :)

Hope to read more by you on this forum .

Thank you, Liza! :) 
xoxo

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

wow  this is so amazing ...Wink

this post must take in the show

just awesome , i just love it Embarrassed

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Aw, so sweet of you to say that. Thank you. :)
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Originally posted by Fiza28

omg i just loved it ... 10/10 damn good arjun ka gussa ...riya her pain her tug if war with how he treated her ...n the care n the romance that was hot loved it too goood im a fan of ur writing plzzz write moreee

Thanks a lot, sweety. I'm so glad you liked it. I would try my best to write more. :)
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Originally posted by sweetdoc

i could go on and write an essay sepicting how beautiful it was...
so i think these smileys may reveal wat i feelThumbs UpClap

lovvveeelllyyy

Thank you. :)
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Originally posted by Arieltabi

It's amazing. U r an awsome writer. Pls write more.

Thanks a lot. I would try :)
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Originally posted by R66725

Nice !!!

Thanks :)
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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sizzysehrish

its so lovelyy
just loved it al ottt
u r awesome writer 

Thank you :)
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Originally posted by sravz23

lovely do write more.

Thank you. Would try to write more. :)
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Originally posted by Aukview

Very well written. Loved it! Hope you'll write more of these in this forum. :)

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it. :)
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Originally posted by sbp1971

I loved, loved your OS, fantastic, so emotional yet the passion was palpable. I couldn't take my eyes of the screen as I scrolled down. It left me with a smile at the last sentence.

I hope you plan to write more on them.

Thanks.

Thanks a lot, sweety! Your review left me with a smile too. :)
xoxo

Originally posted by princess14

That was really really good...good luck on your exams and do write more

Thank you. :) Thanks for your wishes. I would try to write more, I promise. :)
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Originally posted by Faayey

wooow that was just mind blowing...i loved it...Day Dreaming
Arjun is just perfect in every wayWink
Keep writing lovely Os's like thisClap

Thanks a lot! i'm glad you liked it. :)
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Originally posted by sherdilali

read half part amazing yar keep it up

Oh was it too long? Uh, I'm sorry about that. I like to write in bulk rather than in parts. Hope you had the time to read the whole of it. And thank you. :)
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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ButterflyEffect

Reading something that you write is always a pleasure. Reading your comment is a pleasure too. :) It was so good to read your OS after a long time. I could immediately sense the writer of WOWY and AYNIL. That's good to hear, for this is my only piece of work after months!!

You are an amazing writer, period! You get into the skin of the characters so well that your OS or your FF's characters don't just remain show-based characters. They absorb the show's characters and evolve their own. So the readers engage in your stories without knowing the show. Thumbs Up Aw, thats a huge compliment. Thank you. :)
 
Precisely the reason why I loved this OS. I don't know the show, I don't know the characters. But while reading the OS, I could imagine Arjun and Ria in front of me. They were more MN (ours) to me than AR. But it worked on my mind as a reader. Arjun was khadoos...angry..but passionate.. and Ria was...well Ria! Hopelessly in love with Arjun and unaware of his feelings. She was very sure that a guy like him wouldn't fall in love with her. She was confused how he orders her around and takes care of her as if she was his property and he has some kind of right on her... and that is the very thing she loves about him. It hurts...not knowing what feelings he has for her. The medicine applying scene was beautiful... her tears.. his noticing her tears.. and the hurt... intense and beautiful. Ah, intensity, now isnt that what we both love? So yes, I look for intensity everywhere. I'm glad you could connect. :) 
 
And the last scene in the car where she asks him why do you care... and the need in her eyes to find out the answer from him... you wrote that part beautifully. And what better way of answering her question!... A passionate kiss to implant the truth in her heart that he loves her. Embarrassed
 
It was beautiful. Thank you. i've missed these reviews of yours. You butter me up good!!
 
Keep writing more. I would. :)

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