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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
its so lovelyy
just loved it al ottt
u r awesome writer 

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:17am | IP Logged
lovely do write more.

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Very well written. Loved it! Hope you'll write more of these in this forum. :)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:57am | IP Logged
I loved, loved your OS, fantastic, so emotional yet the passion was palpable. I couldn't take my eyes of the screen as I scrolled down. It left me with a smile at the last sentence.

I hope you plan to write more on them.

Thanks.

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:09am | IP Logged
That was really really good...good luck on your exams and do write more

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
wooow that was just mind blowing...i loved it...Day Dreaming
Arjun is just perfect in every wayWink
Keep writing lovely Os's like thisClap

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
read half part amazing yar keep it up

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 9:05pm | IP Logged

Reading something that you write is always a pleasure. It was so good to read your OS after a long time. I could immediately sense the writer of WOWY and AYNIL.

You are an amazing writer, period! You get into the skin of the characters so well that your OS or your FF's characters don't just remain show-based characters. They absorb the show's characters and evolve their own. So the readers engage in your stories without knowing the show. Thumbs Up
 
Precisely the reason why I loved this OS. I don't know the show, I don't know the characters. But while reading the OS, I could imagine Arjun and Ria in front of me. They were more MN (ours) to me than AR. But it worked on my mind as a reader. Arjun was khadoos...angry..but passionate.. and Ria was...well Ria! Hopelessly in love with Arjun and unaware of his feelings. She was very sure that a guy like him wouldn't fall in love with her. She was confused how he orders her around and takes care of her as if she was his property and he has some kind of right on her... and that is the very thing she loves about him. It hurts...not knowing what feelings he has for her. The medicine applying scene was beautiful... her tears.. his noticing her tears.. and the hurt... intense and beautiful.
 
And the last scene in the car where she asks him why do you care... and the need in her eyes to find out the answer from him... you wrote that part beautifully. And what better way of answering her question!... A passionate kiss to implant the truth in her heart that he loves her. Embarrassed
 
It was beautiful.
 
Keep writing more.


Edited by ButterflyEffect - 09 September 2012 at 9:06pm

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