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My FIRST EVER AR OS : SACCHA PYAAR. (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Nice OS. You should try writing more. 

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Heyyy yaar
Tumne bataya nahi tht u write OS n this lovely too
I have to praise u
Itss sooo fab
It was romantic,
Funny n very armaan riddhima
Loll
Loved how armaan ne sid ki pitayi ki.
He deserved tht
N AR's kiss
Keep on writin more.
N pm me Smile

Edited by Sammaraxx - 08 September 2012 at 5:27pm
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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Sid i hate him so much. That crazy baby face. He deserved it. He deserved more.
SHANKY . Akhir samajh he gya woh.

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hail_Van_Helsin

Originally posted by sgksg

[QUOTE=Hail_Van_Helsin]
 
sorry fr the late reply mate !...wasnt online...anyways simple maths huh !  hell stupid me ...y didnt I utd such a simple calculation !!!  sorry sorry !
& I was absolutely nt mocking u !  ...did my comnts sound like tht ! ...dont be confused ! 
 
Only the Armaan entry part ...u cud ve added more spicy lines ...like punching , kicking Sid  those things were o.k  but  he cud ve mouthed more lines like ...'' Yeh lay  kameenay ...aa gaya main  Armaan  ...ab karunga tera dhulai banke  main   Salmaan ...dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika re ''  !     again pardon me ...my hindi is awefull !  & Shanky falling at Armaans feet ...wow wat a scene ! ...by now u mst be assured Im not mocking u ...see how minutely I read each & every word !
& btw u shd PM  my gud frnd Moeen...he goes by the i.d krazykiller ...if u knw him then pls do PM him ...i m sure hes going to enjoy yr OS very much !  
Continue writing OS  ...I can guarantee u I will surely read them & comment ! 
 
& one last thing ...I am sure u r satisfied with  wat u wrote ...  then thts the most imp thing !!!
 
 
@ bold  what was that dude ROFLROFLROFLROFL  never knew you write such super hit  dialogues .WinkLOL 
@TM  You know since Hail Van Helsin  has encouraged you the most I think you should always PM him as soon as you write any FFs or OS . I think he will be more than pleased .
I also read your OS nd  I think you need to improve a lot. Please no offense meant. But one thing I loved is Sid ki  pitai nd  him as a negative character.   I read some of the AR ffs   nd I see though its AR luvstory but still Sid is portrayed as a good human being. But not so in the case of SR ffs . There Armaan is usually a selfish, psycho & totally evil guy. So I stopped reading the SR ffs.  But you turned him evil . Now when you write the next one make him the most heinious guy & get him beaten by Armaan black nd blue. 
 
PS   Any help reqd for dialogues please take the help of Van Helsin WinkLOLLOL
 

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Nice OS.Smile
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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Nice one.
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Posted: 28 December 2012 at 11:59am | IP Logged
nice os

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