KTLKMiniFF:Comin Together..Pt-11/Pg-45(Romance) - Page 22

Ana @..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by niniborn2rule

fab update ana...

thanku so much Nini dear😳😳😳

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Ana @..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by turags

wow ana...that was really great...but a cliff hanging stop...ab Nidhi kya bolne wali hain...jaldi jaldi next chap post kardo...please please pretty please

thanku so much dear...
hehe...i love cliff hanging stop...😆
next chap abh aik do din main...right now need to work on my OS😳

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Ana @..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by Libra

Hey Ana

Beautiful Chap.

I loved the little kid. Nidhi's interaction with the kid were adorable.

Ashutosh poor thing is still hanging. Loved the way he says sorry.

And Ahana, as usual a pain.

Loved Priyanka, and Janki Bai's role.

All in all super, i loved it.

waiting for the next update.😃

thanku so much anu...
i really wanted to show nidhi interacting with a baby...
hehe...he need to mend her heart😳
am glad you enjoyed this part dear...n i love your comments always

luv ya
ana😃

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Ana @..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by ssktlk

Very nice update. Love Ashu's efforts to go near Nidhi, hope she stops resisting and gives in now 😉

thanku so much dear...
ashu need to make up with her so have to try hard...
lets see what she have to say😉😆

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Ana @..oneOone.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by hilarious44

Awww sweety that was another very sweet update...😛

U are a very nice writer...i just wish to go on n on while reading the chapter...dont want it to stop but its all in ur hand n u always leave us at a cliffhanger...not fair😉

Ashu said sorry in such an adorable way...i wish all this can be shown in the show too...

Will be waiting eagerly foe the next part...already love it😳

thanku so much fatima...
i m glad you liked my way of writing yaar...though i still lacked in many places...
i really wanna show ashu feeling bad and say sorry in a way that could melt her...
will update asap for me😃😛

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ZedZee @ZedZee Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Awww... Soo nice 😳

Loved the update 👏 It was really cute😳

Ooh..Please continue soon... I am sooo Eager to know what happens next😳

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OneWish @OneWish Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Ana, I just loved it. I could see Sharad and Kritika re-enacting their roles as I read your story. And that is the key to any good writer. When they provide just the right amount of detail where you can see their words fine to life. Congrats!

Ashu's good night was compelling. Nidhi's morning after the shower was rejuvenating. And the Nidhi/Raghav scenes were out if this world. Lastly, Ashu's apology/realization was cute but I wish it was more emotional/passionate. Perhaps it'll evolve into that in the next part.

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