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Yuvreen os:love will find it's way upd pg 11 (Page 6)

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavnah

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awesome dear...but i thot u were gonna update your SS Tongue koi naa..this was also very gudd..lage rahoo..aise hi accha accha likhte raho Big smile

 
Ss will b updated mayb Tomorrow Smile
Hehe thnx 4 z comment Big smile

wow ur going to update ur ss tomorrow thats good news 

Day Dreaming

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
guys here a small part.. hope u like it... part b shall be soon updated Smile 

give ur feedbacksSmile

no proof reading Big smile

kaveri hope it's ok?Wink


Part 3 A

One year passed, today it was the final year ball. All the students of DPSC were really happy as it was only one occasion wer they could enjoy themselves. Yuvraj was really happy like last year he has suvreen as his partner. He quickly adjusted his tie and went out to take his partner. He went towards her room, and knocked the door.

ROOM

Suvreen was dressed in a beautiful dress, she made her hairs curly, she was about to apply her lip gloss, wen she heard a knock

"come in"

"arey topper kitna time logi? We're late!"

"oho wait! Lemme just put on my lip gloss!"

"uff girls &  their make up! Kya jodi hai!"

"oye chup kar!"

With that she put on her lip gloss,  and turned towards yuvraj who was grinning at her

"kya baat hai! Ur looking non- topper today! Let's say Barbie girl!"

"haha! Thank u!"

After a few yuvraj extended his hand and bend slightly and said softly

"toh chalein ma'am"

Suvreen placed her hand on his and said

"yes let's go!"

 Yuvraj entwined  his fingers with her's and went out.

BALL ROOM

Soon the duo went in the ball room, they approached the other couples.  Indeed everything changed during this one year, Annie & Rathi were in a relationship, even Naro & Mannu were in a relationship. Finally approaching them annie squealed 

"aww suvi! Ur looking extremely beautiful!" kyun yuvi?"

Yuvraj took his hand and slowly touched his hairs and replied

"haan she's looking great!"

"sirf great?"

"naa! Bahoot achi lag rahi hai! Now don't ask sirf  bahoot achi! Cause am ain't gonna say anyfing more!"

"typical yuvi!"

The group began to talk among themselves, soon it was time for the dance to start, yuvraj was about to ask suvreen, wen suddenly someone else came and asked suvreen for a dance, It was none other than aneesh

"miss guggal may I dance wiz u!"

Suvreen looked unsure as she knew that yuvraj wanted to dance wiz her

"bhai! Lemme dance wiz her plz!"

"no yuvi u got ur chance last year! Now it's my turn! Challo miss guggal!"

With that Aneesh grabbed suvreen's hand and took her to the dance floor, yuvraj went in a corner and watched them dance, he felt restless, on the dance floor suvreen's concentration was only on yuvraj, she wasn't paying attention on the dance steps wiz aneesh.

Yuvraj stayed in his corner thinking about the beautiful moments that he spent wiz his topper during last year, their first dance in the last year's ball. How happy they were together he remembered about the pranks he used to make wiz her, their Romeo & Juliet, how happy they were, he glanced at suvreen one last time and went out of the hall, he himself didn't know why he was feeling restless like that. While he was going out, suvreen saw him going out, she began to wonder wat made him go out like this.

"aneesh just excuse me!"

With that she went out. She saw yuvraj standing, his shoulders were stiff, she immediately understood zat he was angry about something! But wat was it?


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Edited by bhavnah - 30 September 2012 at 8:12am

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
Please update soon...really waiting for the next update 

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
hey Thanks u keep promise i like it 

yuvi is now going to realise his feeling towards suvi Embarrassed
this is going to amazing now ...lovely written dearTongue

hmmm anish is now top of the hit list of yuviAngry




Edited by kaveriw2008 - 20 September 2012 at 10:14pm

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Wow brilliant job Smile

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaveriw2008

hey Thanks u keep promise i like it 

yuvi is now going to realise his feeling towards suvi Embarrassed
this is going to amazing now ...lovely written dearTongue

hmmm anish is now top of the hit list of yuviAngry



Thnx dear Smile

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazylover786

Please update soon...really waiting for the next update 

Will update soon Smile
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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhunilu

Wow brilliant job Smile

Fnx dear Smile

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