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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: akshayR

awesome dear...but i thot u were gonna update your SS 😛 koi naa..this was also very gudd..lage rahoo..aise hi accha accha likhte raho 😃


 
Ss will b updated mayb Tomorrow 😊
Hehe thnx 4 z comment 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wow

u really make my dream come true 🥳
this is just awesome yaar
thank you so much
i really imagine the fight in the DPSC empli, how they fight together 
lovely

ur work is just awesome...
👏


Aww thnx dear 😊
But zer is also ur ideas in it so congrats to u 2 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: sahashrabdi22

really gr8 yaar...I was too surprised by da fights but it was too good also...

Fnx sis 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: bhavnah


 
Ss will b updated mayb Tomorrow 😊
Hehe thnx 4 z comment 😃


where did u go from fb suddenly ??.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: akshayR


where did u go from fb suddenly ??.


Oho w8 am coming online 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome yaar!! Do PM me wen you continu :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: bhavnah


Aww thnx dear 😊
But zer is also ur ideas in it so congrats to u 2 👏


Thank you so much

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: bhavnah


 
Ss will b updated mayb Tomorrow 😊
Hehe thnx 4 z comment 😃


wow ur going to update ur ss tomorrow thats good news 


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Posted: 11 years ago
guys here a small part.. hope u like it... part b shall be soon updated 😊 

give ur feedbacks😊

no proof reading 😃

kaveri hope it's ok?😉


Part 3 A

One year passed, today it was the final year ball. All the students of DPSC were really happy as it was only one occasion wer they could enjoy themselves. Yuvraj was really happy like last year he has suvreen as his partner. He quickly adjusted his tie and went out to take his partner. He went towards her room, and knocked the door.

ROOM

Suvreen was dressed in a beautiful dress, she made her hairs curly, she was about to apply her lip gloss, wen she heard a knock

"come in"

"arey topper kitna time logi? We're late!"

"oho wait! Lemme just put on my lip gloss!"

"uff girls &  their make up! Kya jodi hai!"

"oye chup kar!"

With that she put on her lip gloss,  and turned towards yuvraj who was grinning at her

"kya baat hai! Ur looking non- topper today! Let's say Barbie girl!"

"haha! Thank u!"

After a few yuvraj extended his hand and bend slightly and said softly

"toh chalein ma'am"

Suvreen placed her hand on his and said

"yes let's go!"

 Yuvraj entwined  his fingers with her's and went out.

BALL ROOM

Soon the duo went in the ball room, they approached the other couples.  Indeed everything changed during this one year, Annie & Rathi were in a relationship, even Naro & Mannu were in a relationship. Finally approaching them annie squealed 

"aww suvi! Ur looking extremely beautiful!" kyun yuvi?"

Yuvraj took his hand and slowly touched his hairs and replied

"haan she's looking great!"

"sirf great?"

"naa! Bahoot achi lag rahi hai! Now don't ask sirf  bahoot achi! Cause am ain't gonna say anyfing more!"

"typical yuvi!"

The group began to talk among themselves, soon it was time for the dance to start, yuvraj was about to ask suvreen, wen suddenly someone else came and asked suvreen for a dance, It was none other than aneesh

"miss guggal may I dance wiz u!"

Suvreen looked unsure as she knew that yuvraj wanted to dance wiz her

"bhai! Lemme dance wiz her plz!"

"no yuvi u got ur chance last year! Now it's my turn! Challo miss guggal!"

With that Aneesh grabbed suvreen's hand and took her to the dance floor, yuvraj went in a corner and watched them dance, he felt restless, on the dance floor suvreen's concentration was only on yuvraj, she wasn't paying attention on the dance steps wiz aneesh.

Yuvraj stayed in his corner thinking about the beautiful moments that he spent wiz his topper during last year, their first dance in the last year's ball. How happy they were together he remembered about the pranks he used to make wiz her, their Romeo & Juliet, how happy they were, he glanced at suvreen one last time and went out of the hall, he himself didn't know why he was feeling restless like that. While he was going out, suvreen saw him going out, she began to wonder wat made him go out like this.

"aneesh just excuse me!"

With that she went out. She saw yuvraj standing, his shoulders were stiff, she immediately understood zat he was angry about something! But wat was it?


give ur feedbacks 😊

Edited by bhavnah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please update soon...really waiting for the next update