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Yuvreen os:love will find it's way upd pg 11

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
p.s: i would like to thanks kaveri to have accepted to write this os wiz me.Wink this os has been decided by me and kaveri (kaveriw2008). So it will have around 5 parts or less.

pp.s: those who r waiting an update for teri meri kahaani would have to wait. i'll update wen i'll have timeEmbarrassed

little note: yuvraj's dialogue in blue
                  suvreen's dialogue in pink


part 1

It was raining like cats and dogs outside, suvreen was coming out of her house to catch her bus as she had to go her aunt's place. She went out and saw it was raining heavily, as she loved the rain she wanted to enjoy. She went on the road, she spread her arms as if she was hugging the rain, after a few seconds she began to jump up and down, giggling like a small girl. Suddenly she heard a loud screech sound, wen she turned she saw a red jeep, after a few seconds she saw a guy coming out of the jeep, he was tall, fair and was wearing a pair of blue faded jeans and a checkered  shirt with a waist coat which was open.

He was approaching rapidly towards her, she could make out by his appearance that he was coming to  blast her. She stayed glued on the spot where she was standing. The guy approached her and caught her arms in a vice grip and yelled at her

"wat r u doing! Do u wanna die or wat! U just got my jeep to execute your plan or wat!"

"listen plz leave me, it's hurting."

"really! U should have think about it before standing in the middle of the road!"

"plz! Leave me, plz u r hurting me!"

The guy left her arms and stood in front of her while his arms were crossed on his chest.

"listen missy! Am waiting for ur answer!  Wat were u doing in the middle of the road! Planning to die or wat?"

"no! I was enjoying the rain! Actually I love rain zat's why I am on the road!"

"it's in the middle of the road! Are u mad?"

Suddenly suvreen saw her bus, she went past the boy, but he grabbed her wrist. She tried to wriggle her wrist from his grip, but he didn't, he pushed her towards his, their chests collided, he wounded his arms around her waist to prevent her from going away.

"wer do u fink ur going! Am not finished wiz u!"

"plz let me go my bus is going!"

"no first answer me!"

"plz let me go!"

"no! am not finished wiz u!"

she was trying to wriggle out of his arms but he was not letting her go, wen she looked for the bus, it was going, she lost hope and stopped her actions.

"zat's good zat u've stop to struggle! Now u'll answer me!"

"wat! Wat do u want to know now! Bekuz of u I missed my bus!"

"alright u missed ur bus it doesn't matter! U'll get another one! Now answer me! Wat's ur name?"

"huh!"

"name! ur name?"

"my name is suvreen! Suvreen guggal!"

"oh! Well am Yuvraj! Yuvraj Singh! Well nice to know u miss Guggal!"

With that he left her, and was going towards his jeep, suvreen was now angry because of him she missed her bus, and now he was going without saying anyfing, she went after him and stood in front of his jeep and spoke

"bekuz of u I missed my bus! How can u just leave like zis!"

"wat am I supposed to do then! Wait for another bus!"

"the bus will come in 2 hours! Wat will I do in within these two hours! I need to go to my aunt's place soon! N just bekuz of u  I missed my bus! U ignorant!"

Wen she said zat word 'ignorant' he came out of the jeep and spoke

"wat did u call me! Ignorant! What the! How dare u!"

"y r u doing what the! It's true whatever am saying! Ur an ignorant if u'll have let me go I would not have missed my bus! How am I suppose to manage now!"

With that she began to sob hard, yuvraj was shocked seeing her sobbing

"hey! Miss guggal stop crying! Grr for God sake girl's and their drama!"

"am not doing any drama! I missed my bus! How will I go to my aunt's place now!"

"hmm! Listen I'll drop u werever u need to go! Now plz cut the crying! I hate seeing people crying!"

With that suvreen  just took her hand and wiped of her tears, she looked at yuvraj and nudged him to start the jeep, he looked at her and went towards the jeep, suvreen followed him and stood by the jeep wen he spoked

"Are you waiting for an invitation or wat!  Just hop in!"

Suvreen went in the jeep and took her seat on the passenger seat. Yuvraj started the engine and asked her

"wer do u have to go?"

"my aunt's place"

"oh so ur aunty is mine na! I'll know wer she lives!"

"oh sorry, let me tell u!"

"ok!"

"thank u!"

"acha! For wat?"

"the lift!"

"oh it was because u were crying! Zat's all! I felt pity!"

"oh really! Still thank you yuvraj!"

"oh you r welcome I guess zen!"

Soon they reached their destination, while suvreen was getting down yuvraj held her hand and spoke to her softly

"look am really sorry suvreen for wat happened! Bekuz of me u missed ur bus!"

"it's ok yuvraj! N thnx 4 z lift! Bye!"

"ur welcome suvreen! Hmm bye!"

Wen suvreen got down and was about to go, yuvraj called her

"hmm suvreen if u don't mind can I--"

"yes yuvraj wat is it?"

"well can I have ur number! Only if u want to!"

"hmm normally I don't give my number to  a stranger! But u can be an exception!"

Suvreen and yuvraj exchanged their numbers, suvreen went in her aunt's place and yuvraj turned his jeep and went away. Both having the sentiment that's it's just not their only meeting, there will be more.

hope it was not boring.. will write more if u like it Embarrassed
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part 2: pg 4

part 3 A: pg 6

part 3B: pg 7

part 4 A :pg 9 

part 4 B : pg 11



Edited by bhavnah - 24 October 2012 at 1:38pm

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
wow yaar this so amazing 
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once again u proved that u r my favorite romantic writer
i just love it this is so beautiful i'm thinking that all this front of meDay Dreaming


Thank you so much

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaveriw2008

wow yaar this so amazing 
Party
once again u proved that u r my favorite romantic writer
i just love it this is so beautiful i'm thinking that all this front of meDay Dreaming


Thank you so much


hey thnx dear... u also contributed to it Big smile
so u too u r awesome dear... Clap

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
its nice yaar...Smile

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavnah

Originally posted by kaveriw2008

wow yaar this so amazing 
Party
once again u proved that u r my favorite romantic writer
i just love it this is so beautiful i'm thinking that all this front of meDay Dreaming


Thank you so much


hey thnx dear... u also contributed to it Big smile
so u too u r awesome dear... Clap

thank you

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
hahah...wat the-u also included arnav's dialogue in it... n its not boring...its super intrstng...luved dere 1st neeting...gud job di n kaveri...update da next part plzzz

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Love it plzzz pm me
U r very good!!!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahashrabdi22

hahah...wat the-u also included arnav's dialogue in it... n its not boring...its super intrstng...luved dere 1st neeting...gud job di n kaveri...update da next part plzzz

hey which dialog is same as arnav dialog 

thank you for the comment 


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