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OS-Hold me in your arms! - last part pg 8 (Page 7)

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"Le jayenge le jayenge dilwale dulhaniya le jayenge!"

The goon had sung leeringly at me..

"Just shut up, okay!"

"Kya shut up...ab aankhon ke saamne koi film dikharaha toh...hum background music nahi de sakte hain kya...I love you, Nidhi...main aaraha hoon...jaise Dabanng ka Chulbul Pandey  hai...I love you too...hahahahaha!"

I had thrown a piece of wood at him. He had lunged at me in retaliation and Amar had intervened and been knocked out for his efforts!

I don't know what I am going to do next, how I am going to get out of here and yet, I am sitting here now with this sappy smile on my face.

"I love you, sweetheart..main aaraha hoon!"

He had said that and he would come. No force on earth could keep him away from me now. I know he is no Chulbul Pandey or Salman Khan. But he is my Ashutosh, the man who loves me beyond life itself, and his love will make him move mountains if he has to in order to get to me.

A pebble lands close to where I am sitting. I look towards the window in shock. Just in time to see another one sail in.

Thankfully they haven't thought to tie us up. So, I get up and walk upto the window. I peep out of it and am shocked to see a man hanging on to the drainpipe.

"Kaun ho tum? Aur aise kyun latke ho?"

"Bas kasrat kar raha hoon...aur kya...arre...left side kone mei ek darwaza hai...zara use kholdo  yaar!"

"Main kyun kholoon? Matlab tum kaun ho...main kaise janoon  ki tum dost ho ki dushman?"

"Arre yaar...main Bajrang hoon!"

"Bajrang? Dadi Bua ke Bajrang?"

"Tum miya biwi donon paagal ho kya?"

I am miffed before I realize he is talking about my husband.

"Miya? Matlab tum unko jaante ho?"

"Haan yaar...jaanta hoon...andar tere saath jo akalmand baita hain na...unhi ka bhai hoon main...tum donon ko yahan se le jaane aaya hoon?"

"Main kaise maanloon tumhari baat? Maine tumhe isse pehle kabhi nahi dekha hain...?"

"Ab kya karein...time nahi hai na...jaan pehchan karake, chai paani poochke uske baad rescue operation shuru karne ki...ab kholo yaar darwaza...aur mera bhai kahan hai?"

"Woh behosh hain...par don't worry...pulse steady hai...!"

"Kya pulse...kiski pulse...ab tu darwaza kholti hai ki nahi...?"

"Par main kaise maanloon ki aap sach mei Amar ke bhai ho...I mean koi ID proof hai aapke paas?"

"Kya karein...hamare gangsters association wale abhi tak ID dena shuru nahi kiye na...ab meherbani karke mujhe andar aane doge...mujhe tum donon ko bachana hai!"

"Par mere pati kahan...unhone mujhse kaha ki woh khud aakar mujhe bachayenge...!"

"Yaar,...unhi ka agent hoon main..ab please darwaza kholo!"

"Main kaise maanloon ki aap unke agent ho?"

"Kya Karen...agar mujhe pata hota ki Sita Devi Ramji ka mudra angooti maangegi toh main le aata...philhaal isi se kaam chalalete hain!"

 

He struggles to pull his mobile from his pocket and calls someone, before handing over the phone to me.

"Yeh lo Ramji...apni Sita maiyya se baat karlo!"

"Hello baby!"

"Hello Dr Ashutosh...aap kahan ho?"

"Baby..zara apne left mei dekho...woh peepal ka ped hai dekho...main usi ke neeche kada hoon !"

"Is andhere mein mujhe kuch nahi dikhraha hai!"

"Baby...main hoon na...lo...main haath bhi hilaraha hoon...dikhraha hoon ki nahin...!"

"OMG...haan,...ab dikhrahe hain...I love you, Dr Ashutosh!"

"I love you too, baby. Ab please tum mujhe maaf kardo,...am sorry for everything I said and did...bas tum laut aao mere paas...iske baad main tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi apne aap se alag hone nahi doonga!"

"Main bhi bohot sorry hoon...maine bhi toh aapko hurt kiya...us stupid Ahana ko uksaya...waise aap us ke saath flirt kyun kiye...chee...!"

"Sorry baby...main kya karta...,mujhe pata chal gaya ki tumhi usko uksarahi ho...to maine socha tumhe irritate karne keliye uske saath flirt karoon!"

"Koi mature insaan aise behave karta hain kya?"

"Kya Karen, baby...main bhi bohot immature hogaya hoon!"

"Main bhi matlab...ab aap mujhe immature keh rahe ho?"

"No way...tum jaise mature is duniya mei koi nahin hai...main hi buddhu hoon...main hi idiot hoon...main hi sab kuch hoon...tum bas meri pari ho...!"

I am pleased with that reply.

"Woh sab teekh hai...par aap mujhe lene upar kyun nahi aaye?"

Bajrang Bhaiyya has lost it by now and intervenes.

"Kyunki mujh jaise ek ullu ka patta mila hai na usse...jisse andhere mei drain pipe se latkane se maza aata hai...bas isiliye...ab aap logon ki pyaar bari baatein khatam hogayi toh kya kripya karke aap darwaza khol sakte hain?

"Haan baby...please khol do na...phir Bajrang andar aake mere liye ground floor wali darwaza kholdega...taaki main andar aake tujhe apni bahon mei le sakoon...!"

"Par Bajrang ke jaga aap aa sakte te na...mera matlab drain pipe se...mere liye ped pe chade te na  aap...hamare HM ke time!"

"Nidhi...maine us time tumhe keh nahi paaya...par actually mujhe vertigo ka complaint hai...!"

"Kya ...agar aap ko chakkar aagaya hota aur aap gir jaate toh?"

"Maine tumse indirectly kaha bhi...ki agar main gir jaata toh hamara HM ka kya hoga?"

"Main hi nasamaj ti...main hi aap ko teekh se samaj nahi paayi...am so sorry, Dr AShutosh!"

"Mohatarma... aap dono ek doosre ke naam ek puri maafi nama likhke dedena baad mei...ab please mere liye woh darwaza kholdena!"

I rush to open the door that had hitherto been concealed by the darkness.

Bajrang Bhai makes his way in and rushes straight to Amar, who is still lying unconscious.

"Abe akalmand...aankhein khol...teekh toh hain na...kahi mar var toh nahi gaya...aisa hai toh main Amma se kaise bachoonga...woh tere saath mujhe bhi yamlog bhejke rahegi!"

"Maine kaha na...woh teekh hain...pulse steady hain...main doctor hoon...aap meri baat nahi manoge...!"

"Haan...haan...teekh hai...par bhai hai mera...kya Karen...dil gabrajata hai na...bhai ko is halat mei dekh ke!"

"Ab aap please kisi bhi tarah yeh darwaza kholdo...ya kuch bhi karke mujhe mere Dr Ashutosh se milvado...uske baad aap jaane aur aapke bhai jaane...!"

"Kaise khudgarz doctor ho tum mohatarma!"

"Doctor nahi...bas ek khudgarz biwi hoon...mujhe ab bas mere pati chahiye...!"

"Ab aap donon ek dusre se itna pyar karte ho toh phir chakkar kya ta...kyun hua ta ladai tum donon ke beech?"

"Ab puri Ram kahani sunne ke baad hi mere pati ko andar aane denge kya...mujhe Dr Ashutosh ke paas jaana hai!"

My voice breaks and Bajrang Bhai looks alarmed.

"Mohatarma, aap please rona shuru mat kijiye...main seene mei goli bhi leloonga...par yeh aansoo mujhse bardasht nahi hote...woh kya hai na...I hate tears...!"

Bajrang Bhai does a bad imitation of Rajesh Khanna before expertly picking the lock from inside. He manages to open the door and runs down the side staircase to let Dr Ashutosh.

I start running down the stairs and throw myself into his arms. He picks me up and hugs me fiercely to his chest and starts raining kisses down my face. Not one to be left behind, I return his kisses with equal ferocity.

Behind us, Bajrang bhai clears his throat.

"Ab yeh sab baad mei ghar jaake bhi hosakta hai na...ab nikhliye yahaan se...!"

I grab at his arm and am ready to move when he stops.

"Par aap aur Amar...woh abhi bhi puri tarah se teekh nahi hua na..is haalat mei hum use yahan chodkar kaise jaa sakte hain?"

Bajrang Bhai looks at him admiringly.

"Doctor, aap sach much acche ho! Aap hamara fikar karna chod do...bas aapki biwi ko lekar yahan se niklo...hamare aadmi aate hi honge...hum bhi nikal jayenge jaldi hi...par firing wiring hogi...ab Daktarni sahiba ka yahan rehna teekh nahi hoga...!"

Dr Ashutosh nods and pulls at my hand.

We are just about getting ready to flee through the side entrance when the firing begins outside!



Edited by Sujatha.rao - 09 September 2012 at 4:45am

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Clown what a story! CHASMEBADDUR MOVie ki yad a gayi. Vah bhai Vah. but MILAN  thoda serious mangta hai. thankyou Sujataji.

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Thank you Vidya...the reason why I am lacing it with so much of humour is because I think the show intends to take that route...and I want to stick as close to the original in terms of treatment...also I would like to make good use of these new entrants...

But yes, the reunion needs to be touching and romantic and all that..Smile

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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Superb chapter Sujatha ji ...hilariousLOL
Waiting for a completely romantic  re unionEmbarrassed

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Nidhi is clearly rattled by the sound of the gun shots. She starts shaking and her nerves, already on an edge, are now completely shot. Ashutosh tries to pry her hand out of his.

"Nidhi...tum thodi der ruko...main zara bahar ka situation dekhke aata hoon...and then we can make a run for it!"

"Nahi...main aapko  jaane nahin doongi...!"

"Nidhi...zid mat kar...we can't stay here forever...they could break their way in,...we need to get away while we can...!"

"I know...but take me with you...I won't let you go alone...I won't !"

Ashutosh tries to calm her down.

"Nidhi...am just going to take a peek outside...will be back with you in a minute!"

"Kaha na...nahi jaane doongi...ab aapko mujhse door nahi jaane doongi!"

"Door thodi jaa raha hoon. Baba...bas ek ...!"                                                          

She flings herself into his arms and her arms are tight around his neck.

"Please...I can't bear to lose you again...don't leave me ever again!"

Ashutosh can only hold her close to his heart and drop kisses on her head.

"Teekh hai baba...main kahi nahi jaaoonga...hum dono saath chalte hain...!"

He holds her close to him and moves towards the doorway when he feels her flinch in pain.

"Kya hua hai, darling?"

"Kuch nahin..I think I must have twisted it slightly when I ran down the staircase!"

"You idiot, why did you have to run?"

"I couldn't wait to be back in your arms again!"

Such a simple answer and yet it encompassed her undying love for him and also the pangs of separation that she had undergone.

What had he done to this young girl? How would he make up to her for all the pain that he had caused her?

"You could start by carrying me in your arms. My knees are giving way too and I am scared I may not even be able to walk steady, let alone run!"

She had read his mind and voiced her desire in the same beat!

Ashutosh lifts her into his arms and she looks at him with so much of love in his eyes that he is transfixed. He is unable to take a step further when he hears Bajrang's voice from the top of the stairs.

"Daktar sahib...please aapke paas abhi romance ke liye waqt nahin hai...nikliye warna...!"

That is enough to spur him into action.

He holds her close to his heart and cautiously makes his way outside. The gunshots are heard to the front of the house. He had parked his car to the side lane and he needs to somehow get them there before they are attacked. He had never in his life thought that he would be caught in a crossfire. It all seems like a bad dream except for the part where his love is being held in his arms. She seems oblivious to everything around her as she buries her face into his neck and breathes his scent in. He would not have believed it possible to feel the stirrings of desire when you could well be dead from a gunshot the next minute. But he was feeling it and wished he had the time to act on it too. He wondered if he should just forget everything else and kiss her senseless. Now was not the time or the place and so he trudged on. He suddenly heard a gunshot very close. He was paralysed for a second. He did not know what to do. He had not much time to think but his first instinct was to protect her at any cost. So he tried to shift her on his back in order to carry her piggy back style. So any bullet would have to pass through him first before it could get to her. Nidhi appeared to be in a slightly delirious state now, possibly the aftershock of the day's events. She murmured in protest but refused to budge. Her hands clung tighter to his neck and so he had no choice but to carry on.

Just as he is about to make a dash for the car, he has a gun pressed to his temple.

"Don't move or I will shoot!"

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Sujatha, if indeed this is the track thats going to be taken in the serial, i have no complaints i tell you...its seriously hilarious!!! ROFL ROFL

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Ashutosh freezes for a second. His entire life plays out in front of his eyes. The most beautiful times that he had spent with Nidhi but also the horrid moments when he had hurt her beyond belief!

"Please...aap ek nirdosh aurat par goli nahi chala sakte...Nidhi ko jaane dijiye...main rehta hoon aapke quaid mei...!"

Nidhi's arms around his neck tighten and she whispers.

"Nahi...main aapko chodke kahin nahin jaaongi...main aap hi ke saath rahoongi!"

"Nidhi...please ...meri baat suno...!"

"Doctor...aap please hamari baat suniye!"

It is the senior cop whom he had met that afternoon!

"Aap log...?!"                                                 

"Aap itna ki chaunk gaye, Sir...criminals ko arrest karna police ki hi duty hai na...!"

"Par aapko kaise pata chala ki...?"

"Doctor...aapne kabhi nahin socha ki filmon mei climax ke waqy police kaise pahunchti hai...woh kya hai na hum hero ko bas follow karte hain...!"

Ashutosh shakes his head.

"Humein pata ta...ki apni biwi ko bachane ke liye aap koi na koi kadam utayenge...so hum apne plainclothesmen ko aap ke ghar ke bahar kade kardiye...and as expected, aap hero banne chale aur hum aaye aapke peeche peeche..waise Bajrang kahan hai?"

"Bajrang...kaun Bajrang?"

As if on cue, Nidhi begins to whimper in his arms.

"Officer...as you can see, my wife is in shock and in need of immediate medical treatment...so if you can please keep your interrogation for later...!"

The officer cannot do much as I walk away with the precious cargo in his arms.

He places her gently on the front seat of the car and then walks around to other side to seat himself.

Just as he is about to belt himself, she launches herself into his arms and kisses him hard.

He is taken aback but that does not prevent him from responding enthusiastically.

"Are you okay, baby?"

"What do you think that kiss was for? It was my energy booster. That should keep me going for the next half an hour or so. Before I need recharging again!"

"I don't know if I can wait another half an hour! But  I think we need to go to the hospital to get you checked up...I mean that ankle may want strapping, you know!"

"All I need now is you. And since I can't have you till we get home, I tried to make do with that kiss!"

Her words reveal the depth of her longing, desire and hunger. It kindles in him a response that is reflected in his eyes.

"I want to make a quick detour if you don't mind?"

"Where do you want to go? To see your dad and Dadi Bua?"

"No...i want to go to the chai ka dukaan!"

"What?"

"Please!"

"Okay!"

They draw up near the tea shop. The owner greets them with a smile and gets on with making them their favourite adrak wali chai.

"What is it , Nidhi?"

"Dr Ashutosh, this is where our love story began, we renewed here once after the families approved of our relationship. Now, that we are getting together after so much of heartburn, I just thought we should start from here again!"

He smiles at her and gently caresses her cheek.

"Nidhi, I have made swo many mistakes that i have lost count. Sorry seems like a very meaningless word in the face of my crimes. I don't want to explain myself because some of my acts defy explanation. I just want you to know one thing. Even when it seemed that I did not care, trust me, I cared so much that it hurt. There was never a time when I did not love you or loved you any less. My acts may not have substantiated my words but believe me, for me, you and I are one. We may be two physical entities but we are one soul. So, I hurt every time you hurt. Maybe I have masochistic tendencies given the amount of hurt I have caused you and thereby to myself! But beneath all the hurt, all the anger, all the ego and all the betrayal, there is only...!"

"Love!"

She completes his words and places her hand on his lips.

"I know, Dr Ashutosh. I never doubted your love or your commitment. I just wanted you all to myself. I did not want to share on any grounds. I wanted to be your sun, your moon and your stars!"

"You are my whole galaxy, Nidhi...trust me on that!"

"I do...just that I like to be told that, to be reassured of that more often than you do!"

"I am going to reassure you so much and so often that you are going to complain of excess attention!"

"No way...not in this lifetime...not even when I am eighty and you are ninety-eight...I will still want to be reassured!"

He bursts out laughing.

"Reassurances at ninety-eight...am gonna have to start taking something right away to last till then!"

"Isn't our love enough?"

"Love is enough and not enough...love is enough when you respect and treasure and cherish it...love is not enough when you ignore it and treat it shabbily and let it shrivel...!"

"Neither of us will let that happen...I will kick you hard where it hurts the next time you consent to my leaving you!"

"And I will carry you over my shoulder, drop you in our bed and keep you there till you cry for mercy the next time you talk of leaving!"

"See...how simple it all is,...and we went and complicated it with our stupid egos...poor Baba had to go to such extreme lengths to try and get us back together!"

"What did Baba do now?"

"Who do you think Amar was?"

She tells him the whole story and by the end of it, all he can do is shake his head in disbelief.

"Let us take a pledge here and now!"

"Whatever you say, Ndihi!"

She giggles before adopting a straight face.

"You are already on the right path...now repeat after me!"

"I promise to be completely honest and transparent with you on all counts. To share my innermost fears, dreams, desires and wants with you. I promise never to keep secrets from you. To protect your feelings and emotions but not necessarily at the cost of mine! I promise that I will share all my thoughts with you hereon and we will take all your decisions with our interests in mind and not just yours or mine. I promise that I shall love you above all others from here until eternity and never be parted from you from this day onwards!"

There are tears in his eyes as he repeats the words after her. She tenderly pats his eyes dry with her dupatta.

"Ab ghar chalein?"

He just nods.

"Jaldi kijiye...I am really hungry!"

She gives him such a searing look that the blood rushes to his face not to forget his nether regions!

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It was superb.  I read all three updates in one go.
You FF had everything. It was Hilarious, romantic, action packed, and had a bit of sizzle also.
Thoroughly entertaining.
I would love to see this in our show.Smile

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