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FF The New World of Arnav&Khushi Pt 21 PG 118 NEW (Page 44)

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

yipeee you are back with this and still continuing with it cool
well just think if we got this without much proof reading what master piece would come if you did proof read it
wow that wasnt bad at all
loved it how she was tearing everywhere and that arnie missed her like hell
well that was bound to happen as she is like a drug to him
wait he got him arrested for a day
and what did his dadi mean
god i dont like what she is implying
god knows what she will come up with to separate the two



Hey Chavvi,,, yes I am not discontinuing with this one.. but I am not happy with the update... Yes Khushi is like Arnav's habit.. he needs her all the time... and dadi is referring to the picture of Garima and Arnav's dad she has with him.

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rhysenn

I'm awaiting Arnav and Khushi's master plan! Not so much of Dadi's though...great update!


villians will be unmasked soon... thanksSmile
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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bansaldiya55

plzzz prio dnt updte the nxt prt letrr plzz plzz .. i am a nw readr jst read ur stories ...

plzz pm me whnevr u will updte the nxt prt <3 <3

byeee ..

-diya


Hey diya... I will try to post this one soon.. will pm you

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by HK90

read all the chapters in one go, and they are fabulous, amazing, loved each of them. 
Original story loved it very very much, like Dadu's charecter, and the other effect of story, like Raizada family planning agaist Shyam, Garimas secret, and Khushi-Arnav's connected part.
The most funny part were: 
1) when Mami ji want's to cut Shyam in pieces, human aachar LOL
2) Hari Prakash put the pill in Shyam's waterROFL
3) Davi Maiya punish Subadhra, for being evil Big smile
Awesome story, and plus wroye very well, good job Thumbs Up continue soon.


welcome to my ff.. I am glad you liked it
@ bold I really had fun writing these pranks
@blue I am a huge believer of devi maiya.. she had to help.

will post soon.
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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dmg123

Hi Priyo!
I just saw this ff and I read it in one go! I really really like it!! The love between Arnav and Khushi is too good!
The way you introduced Dadu was really nice as well!.
I love how the entire family is working against Shyam. HP and Mami are so funny:)
 
I also like how you showed the women being independent (ex. Payal getting a degree!)
 
When I read about Arnav and Khushi, I just have this really big smile on my face!! It is so sweet!
 
Awesome job, keep up the great work!
Please continue soon if possible, I am now a fan!
 
Simran


Hey Simran welcome to my story.. glad you liked it
@bold I am big believer of women being independant... so I had to atleast made them working women unlike the show...
will continue soonSmile

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged
loved d update
thanx for pmSmileSmileSmile
update soon
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 7:33am | IP Logged
it was awesome !
loved reading this ff...
n i have a feeling that khushi is arnav's mom's best friends daughter.. !
update soon ..
thank yu for the pm... :)
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
awesome !!!!!!!!!

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