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FF The New World of Arnav&Khushi Pt 21 PG 118 NEW (Page 26)

segad IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
ROFL
Jamal ghota for shyam!  that is a new one.  would love to see that on screen

Loved the update

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
awesome
really liked it
do update soon
nina282 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
love it! love it! love it!
Fairylights26 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
Indigestion Pills...Seriously ROFL
vikadesigirl Goldie
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
Hey Priyo,

Lovely update.. love the way the story is progressing.. wow the Raizada's against Shyam.. what a lovely fight... Mami is truly a riot... ha ha ha..

It looks like everyone is on Raizada's side in helping masking the true evil that Shyam is. So it seems the seed has been planted in ever goody two shoes Anjali about her hubby's lie.

Oh love Hari prakash... indigestion pill.. LOL I can't stop cracking up...

Wonder what Dadu will bring into.. maybe an insight to the past..

Arhi chemistry is fab... and NK he is like my fav.. so amazing.

PS: U r doing amazing job writing the story.. Even if it is ur first time., it is brilliant. keep at it... I'm def enjoying reading this.

-Vika
bhadraprasad IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Wow...A fabulous update...Undoubtedly Nk is the hero here and HP is a genius...
 
I really wish the CV's had  a look at your work...
 
After the Rona-Dhona track ,they can use this track for screen.
 
Hats off to you and thanks for the PM


Edited by bhadraprasad - 15 September 2012 at 9:18pm
mz.brar Senior Member
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Hey sweety, I'm a new reader and read all 9 parts in one go! I just wanted to tell you that i love the fact that Arnav and Khushi decided to move out. The slow progress of finding evidence and tracking down leads adds to the legitimacy of the story.
I loved the scene btw Mamiji and Payal, her telling Payal off and scolding her to go study.brilliant!

I cant believe that garima has khushis first shagun!!! does she know that Arnav is the same boy?-she may have figured it out because of dadi.

I loved the fact that khushi's jealousy had her attempting to get Arnav's attention in such a way!while he was on the phone!!LOL

Something that dosnt click for me is the background story of Dadu Prakash sending his son and DIL to work with the Riazadas[for free]; reason being, it doesn't fit with Arnavs views on "middle class mentality"(although hes only ever blasted khushi on this-not the rest of the guptas)
If hes has people like this in his life, they would have had some sort of impact on how he saw people of a lower statue.Granted khushi did rub him the wrong way a majority of the time.

anywho looking forward to the next chapter!
TinkJia Senior Member
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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Nice FF! brilliant more likely read it in one go!

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