Originally posted by: InduG64@Red: One of these days I am going to try writing like you...nahin, seriously. The flow is like the water slides in waterworld...smooth twists and turns, guided with an exciting ease...and you land with a one-liner splash, only to want to go right back up...(The glitch is if I try, I might fly tangentially in the first turn itself...🤔 😃)
I liked the Aman part you wrote. That Aman is like you...you know. All casual...but he got through to Yash like none before. That was some reality check he gave Yash.@Indu: Wow! That IS high praise coming from you. Thanks! I loved that water slide analogy. Only you could compare a take to it. 👏👏 And I am so happy to be compared to Aman. I love this guy!😆Besides, you are just being modest. I'm sure you could easily write like me.And loved your take, particularly Aarti's. My favorite lines..."When you had walked toward the edge of truth and stepped into the darkness of lies, you believed you will either find a small ground to stand on or you will teach yourself to fly. You got both...yet all the standing and all the soaring was in darkness...and the light was just waiting to break through. It did...and how. You lost all the ground and the wings in one stroke."When she realized that the Scindias were lied to, her first action was to set it right. After the wedding, her first action was to try to confess. She retreated only after Yash's own confession. And then when she realized that she wanted to work on this marriage, her first action was to rush to Shobha to try to deal with the lie. How could Yash know all this if he becomes Gandhi's monkeys?Poor Aarti yet again faces the consequences of everyone else's erroneous actions. Shobha hoped that Aarti would make a place in Yash's heart and all would be forgiven. But the same idealistic stance that she overheard Yash take and fell in love with is coming to bite her behind. If he was right then, he's right now. Why was he lied to? He was not an unreasonable man. He'd have understood another's point of view if put forward upfront. That's how he saw himself. He likes to think he's the straight-up and noble guy (heroes are in utopia) but his life was so comfortable that he could indulge his nobility and self-righteousness. And hence his severe limitations in the understanding of complexity and fragility of relationships.Wonderful progress.
Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..Now that leads to the last scene or so. Ohmagaddd Yash!! S P I T it out Dude!"Uss Raat..."
Yeah and then...?
"Mumbai Main..."Yes it was in Mumbai not in America! Then what?"Aarti Ji Ne..."Yes yes I know it was Aarti and not that maid!! Then what happened?!End of episode 😳As much as I love Yash ji, I wanted to punch his face then. So so so so Slow...Jesus..@Sadia...: You are as adorable as your monkeys. What a wonderful weekend treat! 👏😆Loved the above. I can almost imagine you along with the drunkard saleh bombarding Yash in your own style.
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