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Not Among the Stars

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Hey every one I have written a new poem. Hope you guys like it. If you do not do tell me too.

Not among the Stars

When I am among the stars
Will have no more scars
Will love myself without a farce
My soul will sing and dance

                     

My eyes full of tears
Fill our lives with fears
Wound our hearts with spears
When will these evils I disperse



Not among the stars
Right here right now will heal my scars
Every second
Will be a celebration
Full of mutual love, joy and admiration



Then when I am gone
Not sure if I will be reborn
But I will leave you with my song
To keep your soul happy and warm

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
really wonderful poem, covers the three different scenarios well right form start, and also loved the part where despite not being in the starts, there is still the will and power to heal. .

very well done Clap Clap ClapClap Clap

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vinder90

really wonderful poem, covers the three different scenarios well right form start, and also loved the part where despite not being in the starts, there is still the will and power to heal. .

very well done Clap



Thank you Vinder. Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Thanks Anna ...for beautiful stars,,,,

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhavya

Thanks Anna ...for beautiful stars,,,,

You are welcome Bhavya

Edited by A2ZV - 07 September 2012 at 10:28pm

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