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Originally posted by MaaNeeTLuV

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Originally posted by meerubzara

its ok ...
alina as abhay sis... like  this idea
 
thank you
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Heya its gr8...plz pm me weneva u update...

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Originally posted by bellaaa

its ok yar and that gud if alina as abhay sis
 
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Originally posted by tara.singhania

Heya its gr8...plz pm me weneva u update...
 
thanx dear
 
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Part-3

Piya's pov

Another date with Richie rich I am so excited but why I am thinking about that Richie rich and blushing trying to reason her thoughts

His eyes are so deep I just want to get drown in his eyes I thought

God piya you are getting mad go to sleep now I told myself and went to sleep but to be get lost in his dreams

Next morning

Piya woke up with a jerk when her alarm rang

OMG Richie rich will be waiting for me at the basketball court I thought and rush to get ready

After checking how I was looking for the tenth time I left for the basketball court

Where is he? I asked to myself while looking for him but couldn't find him anywhere but then see saw him

Abhay's pov

Today is my big match and I am thinking about Sexy but why? I thought

Abhay where are you lost buddy? Get your head in the game kabir said

Nothing dude lets go and practice I said and we moved to the court

Will she come? But why would she come? No she had promised she will come all this was going on my mind when I saw her looking like an angel in white salwar suit

I smiled waved at her and she smile and waved back in return and went to seat

Kabir was observing them very keenly asked abhay who is she?

Piya dobriyal, my friend I replied

Friend, really dude? It looks more than friendship to me kabir said

No nothing like that let's go the game is about to start I said and moved to the court

During the whole game I was lost  was thinking about what kabir said and was again and again staring at Sexy

Dude I know you are in love but that doesn't mean you will forget about the game get back to reality kabir whisper in my ear and I shot a glare at him

I was about to reply when I heard siddharth of virus commenting on my Sexy

I looked back and saw him staring at her

I lost my cool and just grab him by shoulder and started beating him

How dare you look at my Sexy? I asked

Whoa, dude relax I was just looking I didn't do anything yet he replied

That I punched him hard and he fall on the floor 

I was asked to leave the court which I obeyed

While heading back I saw Sexy staring at me didn't say anything and went to locker room to change

Why I am behaving like a possessive lover? Does this mean I am in love with Sexy? I asked myself

God help me I prayed and closed my eyes and saw sexy's face

I immediately open my eyes and thank god to help me realize I feelings

I love you Sexy I declared

Piya's pov

Why are Richie rich staring at me again and again? Does he also feel the same thing that I feel for him? I thought and again looked towards the game

Who is that guy staring at me? Why has Richie rich started beating him like a possessive lover? I again thought

Just then I heard the referee asking Richie rich to leave the court

I thought he will argue back but he didn't he just went away to the locker room

I went outside and waited for him

I saw him coming with a wide smile on his face

You were just asked to leave the court and here you are smiling may I know the reason? I asked him

Nothing Sexy he said and kissed my cheek

I looked at him in shocked and then blushed

Shall we leave? I have important work at home I asked

Sure he smiling replied

Abhay's pov

She blushed that means she enjoyed the kiss. Does she also feel the same for me? I thought while walking with her to her home

I suddenly stopped walking and held her hand and asked for her mobile number

Why? She asked

So that I can talk to you anytime I want I replied

We exchanged our numbers and again started moving towards our destination

After reaching her place she looked at me and said goodbye

I didn't want to leave her and wanted to kiss her so I just went with flow and pulled her towards me by her waist

She looked at me with a surprise face and then blushed

We slowly lean towards each other and started to gently kiss each other and then our passion took over, we kissed each other hungrily. We broke the kiss after 10 mins

Thanks she said and kissed my cheek and went inside

I caress the place where she had kissed and left for my place

After I reached home I saw kabir waiting for me by playing a game with samrat and adhiraj

So, enjoyed your date? Kabir asked

Date with whom? Adhiraj enquired

Piya dobriyal kabir replied

The one who studies in maurya? Adhiraj asked

Piya dobriyal, the music student in maurya samrat conformed

I didn't replied and went inside my room

She kissed me back that mean she also loves me I thought and dialed her number

Piya's pov

He kissed me does that means he loves me? I thought just then my cell rang up

Hi Richie rich I said

Hey Sexy I want to ask you something? He replied

What does he want to ask me?  Ithoght

What is it? I asked

What will you say if I say that I love you? He asked me

I would say you are out of your mind  I replied and hung up

He loves me I jumped with joy

I love you too Richie rich I declared

Precap –abhay and his dad's conversation

I know guys its not big but I am buzy in colleges so I don't when I will be able to give next update

Will try to give asap and bigger one too

Do comment and criticize

 

 

 

 



Edited by additive_monaya - 10 November 2012 at 4:06pm

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Posted: 15 October 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged
very nice..

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Sorry commenting so late but awesome updt and alina as abhay's sis gr8 idea. It's ok we can understand. Loved abhiya date. Update asap. Thanks for the pm.

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