OS: Shyam exposed and Dadi out (edited) - Page 3

awesome os...

well done...

when will this Shyam's true face will be revealed infront of Anjali and Dadi in show...don't know but i quite like your version  

Fantastic OS .. Rashika babyy.. yuu r a genius.. luvdd evry bit of itt ..!) Wish,wish,wish.. *FingerzZ CrOssd* Dz kums true in da real epis.. !) Holy god.. put sum brainz in our IPKKND CV's head.. :) Love ya babe.. :* Nd yoO.. Tnx a loOott fo da pm !)

Awesome!

lovely, however since i don't read hindi i found some of the dialogue hard to follow.

wish it happens 

thanks 4 d pm

wow that was long that was a nice OS and your Hindi was fine :)

I KNOW RIGHT THIS IS NEVER GONNA HAPPEN MAN
NONETHELESS IT WAS FUN TO READ ALL ABOUT IT THOUGH
WHAT AN OS DEAR THIS IS SO NEEDED BUT IT WONT HAPPEN
AT LEAST WE GOT TO READ ALL ABOUT IT IF NOT SEE IT
I MUST SAY THAT WAS MINDBLOWINGLY BRILLIANT

A/N this is not my first os but with the whole translation into english i have just written over 5000 words in this os. So please do comment even if it is a simple thank you.