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TANHA HEN HUM...updated part 13 pg 53 (Page 31)

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
nice ff :)
pm me too, would love to continue reading it ..

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 11:52am | IP Logged
update soon.

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Posted: 25 November 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Pls update...thanks

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UV: RISHI today i will kill u and start hitting hm and rishi starts

runing

 

Rishi while runing : are yar Uv is me meri kya ghalti he . Mujhe thori na pata the k u didn't wish hr yet .

He hide behind geet: geet yar tu mujhe pit ty hove dekh rai he bachana yar apne is rakhshas bhai se.

 

Uv: princess samne se hato aj tu is ki kher nai

 

Geet: dada maaf kardo na bichare ko ghalte ho gai age se nai ho gi.

 

Uv: ye or bechara iski tu me

And again try to hit hm

 

Geet: dada plz or apne mujhe wish b nai kiya.

Uv making sad face: ok

 

Geet: i love u

And kiss hs cheek

 

Uv smiles and hug hr: my cute little doll , happy birthday and love u to

 

Uv breaking hug

Ok let me meet hm atleast itne dino bad aya he let me hug hm.

He said this while giving a dadly glair to rishi and a cute smile to geet

While rishi was gulping hard and shaking hs head in denial

 

Geet : ok ap baat karo

And she went to meet hr brothers

 

Rishi try to run but Uv holds hm in a bone crushing hug and squiz hm hard

Rishi was unable to breath: uv. . . kya kar raha he . . .yar jaan le ga kya.?

 

Uv breaking the hug: beta tu mujhse tu bach gaya par tujhe princess se kon bachai ga?

 

Rishi: kya matlab?

 

Uv: wo tu tujhe abi pata chal jai ga

 

Uv came towards geet: princess u know rishi gets award for his last project, that is why he was gone to mumbai.

But why i m telling this to u tumhe tu isne sab se pehle bataya ho ga hena

Uv smirk knowing very well what is going to happen next and mouthed good luck to rishi.

 

Rishi cursed hm for ruining hs surprise and making it all worse

 

Amy to vicky: now rishi bhai is gone .

 

Geet goes towards hm and start hitting hm : u dhokebaz, donky , ullu, monkey , u said that u r going for personal work and this was ur personal work .

You kanjoos mujhe treat b nai di mujhe bataya b nai ehsaan faramosh mene kitni help ki thi tumhari os project me and u.. I hate u for this

 

Still wakcing his arm

 

Rishi: are geet me tu tujhe . . . OUCH. . surprise dena chahta tha par is uv ne sab bigar diya sorry. . . Ouch. . . sorry maaf karde yar plz

Geet still wacking hm: no

 

Rishi: sorry plz yar

Geet stop hitting hm and turn away still angry

 

Rishi: geet tu jo treat mange gi na me wo donga or tu chahe tu mujhe punishment b dede par plz maaf karde na.

Geet still angry

 

Uv came towards hr and said something in hr ear . She smile an evil smile and bichara rishi , he knows that he did a big mistake by asking punishment.

 

Geet : u want me to forgive u ?

Rishi nods hs head like a kid

 

Geet: then do sit ups

 

Rishi : WHAT!!!

 

 

Geet: yes or wo b yahan sab k samne

 

Rishi: geet if u forgot then let me remind u that i m Rishab Rajwansh the famous bussiness man and u want me to do sit ups wo b sab k samne yar meri reputation ka sawal he log kya kahen ge

 

Geet ignoring hs talks: 10 sit ups

Rishi : me nai karne wala

 

Geet: 15 sit ups

Rishi panic: geet no plz yar

 

Geet: 20 sit ups

 

Veer , amy and vicky came to hm

 

Veer: rishi time waste mat kar yar warna 100 tak phunch jai gi.

 

Amy: come on bro just 20 sit ups hi to hen

 

Vicky: yes bro wese b ye body shody kis din kam ai gi

 

Geet: 25 sit ups

 

Rishi: ok ok i will do it.

 

Geet : hold ur ears and do it

 

Rishi holds hs ears and start doing sit ups while uv and every one was enjoying and all the other people were giggling at hm.

 

 

After making lots of promises and doing extra work out (sit ups) geet finaly forgive hm

 

 

Maan reached hs mansion in paris which he bought reacently

He thought about the kiss and touche hs lips

He can still feel her soft petals on hs lips .

A smile covered hs M shaped lips

 

Maan: Geet i know u still love me agar tum mujhse pyaar nai karti tu mujhe ese apne pas na ane deti

But i know it will take time for u to bleave me, to bleave my love

Par me tumhe apne pyar ka yaqeen dila kar rahon ga and that is my promis to u.

 

Geet reached home

 

Geet: Mumma ... Mumma

Swati came and hug her tight and wish her: happy birthday angel

Geet receprocating her hug: thank u mumma and missed u so much

A voice came from behind: han han mujhe tu koi miss hi nai karta hena.

Geet: dad

Geet runs and hug hm tight and he to receprocate lovingly

Dad: kesa he mera bacha?

Geet: i m fine dad 

Dad : happy birthday bachha

Geet: thanks dad

they all sit in the living room 

 

 

pata he me wahan par bore ho gai thi or mene ap logo ko kitna miss kiya . Bro ne tu wahan. . . . . .

And she gose on speaking anything and everything while all the family members listen to hr enjoying hr talks.

After alot of talking they all bid gud night to each other and retired to there room.

 

Precape:

Maan and geet meeting again

Maan without shirt

Party at the disco

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Nice update
loved it
Rishi getting punishment
continue soon

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 6:01am | IP Logged
awesome update
geet has move on with her life
nd poor rishi have to do 25 sit ups in front of public
nd maan scene was cho cheewt
love that scene
all the best maan

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Beautiful update...so geet has move on with her life.Smile
nice writing...continue soon.Embarrassed

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