Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

TANHA HEN HUM...updated part 13 pg 53 - Page 22

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 part 11

 

 

Morning sun rises in Paris making everything shine with his glory 

 

Tossing and turning on her bed she open her eyes irritated with the rays falling on her face making her

Look more beautiful with her messed up state and pouting face. 

 

Maria close the curtains I want to sleep more

 

Geet said to her maid while turning away from the rays. 

 

Maria did what she was told and left the room 

 

Geet felt a soothing touch on her head. 

 

She smiles snuggling closer and closer. 

 

Good morning princess said swati creasing her head 

 

swati

 

Good night mamma she replied playfully and shifted in her lap giggling a little. 

 

Swati smile at her and try to wake her up 

 

Princess wake up see it's getting late for breakfast.  

 

Mamma bas 5 minutes more  

 

Geet u didn't had ur dinner also beta and everyone else is waiting for u at the breakfast table.  

 

She get up lazily ok mamma u go i m coming in 5 minutes. Swati leave the room and Geet goes to get ready.

 

She came down after some time. 

 

Good morning  

 

She wishes everyone at the breakfast table 

 

Lo a gai mahrani. Ye hamesha late karti he geet kisi din teri waja se hum sab bhoke mar jain ge said rishi to irritate her.

 

rishi

 

He loves to see her changing expression one minute angry, one minute happy one minute irritated. And

next minute pouting like a cute baby. 

 

Oy bhikari tere ghar me khana nai milta he jo tu har waqt yahan para rehta he. She said taking a seat

beside him 

 

Excuse me ye mere uncle ka ghar he tu meri marzi me jab b yahan aon tujhe kya he said indicating towards her dad 

 

Dekh she said pointing butter knife towards hm 

 

Dikha he said leaning towards her 

 

She picks up glass full of water and throws it on his pant 

 

Geeet  

 

Chhichhora  

 

 

All laugh seeing them fighting like kids 

 

Uv interrupt princess aj ka kya plan he and what kind of party u wont 

 

uday veer ( UV)(dada)

 

Geet immediately replied no party dada. 

 

Everyone was shocked specially the brother 

 

WHAT!!!  

 

No party said veer  

 

veer(bhai )

 

No celebration said shivam 

 

shivam(bro)

 

No fun said Amy and Vicky 

 

VICKY (champ)

 

armaan (amy)

 

Yes said Geet but why princess ask uv 

 

Dada I don't want to share my birthday with strangers so I decided that we all will go to disc and will do

party and celebrate my birthday among us only. 

 

Yes screamed Vicky and Amy 

 

Princess u r to good and that is an awesome idea said Amy 

 

Par disc, princess are u sure said shivam not liking the idea of Geet going to a place which is full of boys

Loll bichara can't say no to her nor could control on his possessive nature 

 

Uff bro why r u taking tension I m not going alone u all r coming with me so chill  

 

Ok princess but disc me select karon ga said shivam 

 

Geet roll her eyes ok bro as u wish and bhai u r also coming with us to disc so no bahana 

 

Ab tu jana hi pare ga tumhari birthday jo celebrate karni he said veer 

 

Ok so i m going to call shriya, tamy and sia said geet moving towards the stairs but stop and said to rishi

and u Mister wet pant u r also invited but plz pant sukha kar ana dekhne wale ghalat sochen

ge kahen ge itna bara ho gaya he lekin bachpan ki adat abi tak nai gai 

 

All burst out laughing 

 

Geet tu aj gai said rishi and start running to catch her while Geet also ran towards her room laughing 

 

Later sia, tamy and shriya came to RM (Raizada mansion) 

 

They were selecting dresses for disc 

 

Yar geet i think this black dress will look hot on u what say sia said shriya but before sia can answer tamy intrupt

 

sia(UV's fiance )

 

No yar why dress i think we all should wear pants and tops this golden top will look nice on Geet  

 

tamanna(tammy)

 

Oy hum disc ja rai hen geet ki birthday party me teri birthday party nai he jo hum pagal bhotniya ban karjain 

 

shriya(shivam's GF)

 

said shriya while snatching the top from tamy's hand 

 

Oy meri birthday party teri party se tu achhi hoti hy kum se kum os me log bikini pehen kar tu nai ate

Tamy fight back 

 

Just shut up or else I will. . . I will . . .han i will stitch your phata hova jeans shriya said eyeing her jeans  

 

Dare u touch my jeans i cut it with blade and it took me whole day to cut it like that and this is fashion u

 

bimbo said tamy

 

U called me bimbo? U. . . U. . . Grrr geet look tamy is irritating me she complained to geet but geet

was lost in her thoughts i dont love him anymore. He dont affect me now. He was wrong. Un k hone ya

na hone se mujhe koi faraq nai parta. I m happy without him and i will prove it tonight haan

i dont love

hm, I don't love him  

 

She is struggling with her feelings, she still loves him madly but don't want to accept it. She wants to

prove it to him and others that she is happy without him, but the truth is she is unable to prove it to

herself so how could she think that other believe on her lai. 

 

Geeet shriya scream in her ear 

 

WHAT!!! Said geet coming out of her thoughts 

 

Geet shriya tujhe kab se awaaz de rai he kahan gum he tu said sia 

 

Nai kuchh nai bas party k bare me soch rai thi she said moving her hair behind her ear. Sia saw her

 

ring but before she can ask her shriya scream

 

OMG geet it's so beautiful she said taking her hand so that she can have a clear look on her ring

 

Where did u get it from she asked. Geet look here and there don't know what to say. She can't say

 

that maan gifted her

 

 woh . . . woh. . . Han Mauritius se li thi 

 

She pats herself mentally. 

 

Wow geet it's so pretty. Can i wear it for the party today plz plz ask shriya

 

WHAT!!! She snatched her hand back no way this is mine. Tum koi or le lo mere pas is se b

pretty rings hen but I m not going to give this ring to anyone. Said Geet, getting hell possessive

for the ring.

 

 

Geet this is just a ring yar plz just for today shriya pleads 

 

No no No a big no Geet replied stubbornly 

 

Lekin kuo shriya asked

 

Now Geet was fully trapped she don't know what to say. She even don't know why she is feeling hell

 

possessive for this ring. This ring is gifted by Maan na so according to her she should hate it. But how

 

could she hate it. How could she hate the first gift of her love? She accept it or not but this is a reality

 

that she still loves Maan. But she is hurt because of his past act and his heart wrenching words which he

 

threw on her innocent heart. But her heart is not listening to her. Her heart wanted to feel the love which

 

she saw in Maan's eyes, her heart wanted to trust  him again, wanted to give him a chance.

 

Geeet where are u shriya shook her u didn't tell me the reason

 

Woh ….. Woh…. It's not coming off.

 

What … but before shriya can complete sia interrupt

Yar plzz continue your talks later. Now decide what to wear

 

Geet tell me u want to wear pants or dress

 

Geet think for some time and said

 

girls today you select a short dress for me but remember it should look hot on me ok

 

Geet are u all right. kahin tujhe fever tu nai he na said sia getting concerned and checking her forehead

 

Cut it out yar I m perfectly all right. Ab drama band kar and tell me are u all going to help me or not

 

Hell yes geet. neki or poch poch said shriya getting excited  

 

geet thought . I know that maan will defiantly come to disk but I will show him that he is wrong I don't love him and I m enjoying my life without him and then he will go away and will never come back  

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So my kiwi fruit is going to celebrate her birthday without me... hmm to bad jaan

 

But don't worry. MAAN SINGH KHURANA does not need any invitation to meet his kiwi fruit.

 

maan was sitting on sofa seeing geet's picture and listening her talks with her friends through the

 

microphone which is hidden inside her ring . A sweet smile was playing on his lips listening the lies she

 

was saying to protect the ring . 

 

see u at the party jaan and I love u

 

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yar ye larkiyan itni der kun lagati hen  said rishi to all the brothers

 

they all are ready to leave for disc but waiting for their princess and all the girls from past 2 hours but as

 

usual they are busy grooming them selves

 

shut up rishi said uv getting irritated with his continues cribbing

 

yar tu ja k on ko………. but his words stuck in his throat seeing  geet descending down😲

 

shivam was laying on the couch but seeing geet he falls on the ground😆

 

 

chalen dada we are ready    

 

said geet standing in front of them

 

but all were so shocked to react seeing their little sis in this much revealing dress😲

 

 

Rishi's mouth fell open and he was staring at her as if seeing her for the first time

 

Shivam look at him staring at his baby doll. He ran and put his both hands on rishi's eyes 

 

U idiot stop staring at her😡

 

All came back to their senses

 

Bro lets go we are getting late said Geet getting confused with their behavior

 

Geet u r not going anywhere in these cloths said shivam getting angry

 

 

Geet was too shocked. No one ever get angry on her and especially on her birthday

 

She was going to cry any time but uv give a glair to shivam and said immediately

 

Princess this dress is not looking good plz change it

 

Par dada ye tu achhi lag rai he said geet checking herself again

 

Plzz princess mere liye bhi nai change kar sakti said UV

 

Now how could she not listen to her brother

Ok said geet running back to her room to change

 

They all took a relief breath😛

 

Shivam gave an angry glair to shriya knowing that it was all her efforts😡

 

After half an hour geet came down

 

 

 Now princess is looking like a princess said uv to chair her up

 

It's better than before thought shivam giving a smile to geet but she look away showing that she is

 

angry with him

 

shivam give a puppy pleading look to uv asking for help

 

but uv shook his head saying he can't

 

they all went from there to disc

 

precape : maneet face to face again  


also added CS as u all are getting confused 


hit like and comment and if u want to give suggestion than u r most welcome  

Edited by ylaraib - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ...
Lovely story ...
continue soon ...
Add me 4 PM pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting to see Maaneet meeting.

Thanx for d CS again.
Its also nice to see how Geet is possessive abt d ring.

Gr8 update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
ossum part..
geet want 2 prove maan she is happy without him
but she is madly in love with him n cant hide it
the ring part shows it..
lol..maan has hidden microphone in her ring..
brilliant
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thanks for giving after a long time nd a big update
update was 
geet want o prove maan that she is not in love with him
but wo kise buddhu bana rahi hai she love him a lot
nd she hell possessive about his gift too
love risgi nd geet scene
hope rishi geet se pyaar na karta hoon

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maan hide a camera in geet;s ring!!!!!!!!!!
geet possessive for ring..
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
love geet possessiveness
beautiful update
plz give regular updates
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
precap is lovely
continue soon