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TaaRey SS : Bombay to Jothpur Updated Pg 44 (Page 5)

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wow...lovely...eagerly waiting for next part...update soon...

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Scene 1 :

Rey woke up with a start…It took him a few moments to realize that it had just been a dream, the same dream. Again. He groaned in frustration and threw the cover over his face.

"Why, why can't I get Taani out of my head?" he muttered to himself.

He sat up and rubbed his face with his hands "Bohot ho gaya…I can't be like this anymore. Taani se milkar sab kuch sort out karna hi padhega…..warna who roz sapne mein aakar sorry bol bol kar mujhe guilty feel karvaegi" he says angrily.

He takes his phone and calls Swayam.

Swayam : (sleepily) Kya hua, Rey? Itni subah subah phone kyun kiya….

Rey : Aaj 4 pm, my place! Saari group ko ek saath hang out karke bohot time ho gaya isliyeh aaj sabko apne ghar invite kar rahaan hoon.

Swayam : Yeh bolne ke liye tune mujhe itni subah call kiya! Yaar sone de plz.

Rey : (outraged) Itni subah!!! Swayam, its 2 pm!

Swayam : (smiles) Rey, its summer vacation!

Rey : (sighs) Okay Fine! Mat aa….Main aur time waste nahi kar sakta, mujhe abhi SHARON ko bhi invite karna hai.

Swayam : (perks up) Sharon bhi aayegi?

Rey: Saale! Sharon ka naam sunte hi saari neend udh gayi, right?...Haan woh aa rahi hai, ab toh aayega na?

Swayam : (dreamily) Ofcourse!

Rey : Hmm…Aur sun (clears his throat) apni behen ko bhi saath lana…

Swayam : (dreamily) Ofcourse!

Rey : (smiles) Good! Bye then!

He cuts the call and Swayam comes out of his trance.

Swayam : Wait! Behen! Magar Taani toh chali gayi...(sighs)

Scene 2 :

Rey sits on his couch, waiting for his friends to arrive…or rather waiting for Taani to arrive. He taps his fingers on his leg in impatience and a little excitement. He hadn't seen Taani since he had stormed out of school after giving Shivam a punch. He wondered if things would be different between him and Taani now that Shivam was out of the picture. He couldn't wait to…….

Rey : (frustrated) God! Main phir uske bare mein soch raha hoon…..Rey remember ki tu sirf sab sort out karke apne mind ko peace dene ke liye usse mil raha and nothing else!

"Nothing else, nothing else, nothing else…." He kept reassuring himself as the doorbell rang.

He got up in an instant and ran to the door only to be disappointed when he found Vicky and Nilesh on the other side.

Rey : Oh! Tum log!...Hi! (he hugs them)

Vicky : Kyun tu kisi aur ko expect kar raha tha kya?

Rey : (fake laughs) Ofcourse not!

Nil puts an arm around Rey's shoulder and says "Toh chal na….."

The doorbell rings again and Rey slips out of Nil's arm immediately and opens the door. His face falls again.

Rey : Hi Girls!

Neha : Matter kya hai? Disappointed you looking?

Sharon : Yeah, Rey! Whats wrong?

Rey : Nothing! (fake smiles) Andar chalo na!

They all go inside and Rey gets drinks and snacks for everyone as they sit around him chatting while he wonders "Where the hell is Swayam?" He nods and smiles to everyone, half listening while keeping a watch on the door. He exhales a sigh of relief when finally the doorbell rings again at almost 4:30. He opens the door and finds a panicked Swayam.

Rey : Kahaan mar gaya that u? Pehle toh kabhi itni late nahi ki….aaj hi late karni thi? (looks around for Taani)

Swayam comes inside quickly

Swayam : Cycle ka tire puncture ho gaya tha. Sharon aa gayi kya? She must be so angry!

Rey : No, she's fine! But Taani kahaan hai?

Swayam mutters "Jothpur mein" and walks away towards Sharon.

Rey : (shocked) Swayam! Wait! Jothpur mein matlab kya? Kyun? Kaise?

Rey goes to his room in frustration, picks up his phone and dials Taani's number.

Rey : Switched off! (sighs)….I messed up! Big time!


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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
awosome pm me waiting for your next part

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...Natasha... IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
Awesome update, I love Rey and Swayam conversation and Rey sooo impatient waiting for his Taani Embarrassed
Plz write more parts in English if that's not a problem for u Embarrassed can't wait to see what Mr Rey do next

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 5:08pm | IP Logged
amaziin.. loved iit.. cnt waiit 4 next part.. update quiick plzzz lolx

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
Both the parts are Awesome. Cont soon. Waiting to read more

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
ZOMGEE! This is so intense. I am loving it :D Abb kya ho gaaa? Tension building up...

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yayyy! <333 it! now update again! haha lol ;D

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