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TaaRey SS : Bombay to Jothpur Updated Pg 44 (Page 39)

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 2:52am | IP Logged
sana awsum update yaar!!!

rey telling tumharee krishna ji ne bheja haiROFL

Loved All TR scens awesum !!!

tht icecream and outing scene mujhe chahiye d3 meCry

loved it!!! update soon ah waititngBig smile


Edited by blue_cherub - 24 November 2012 at 10:23pm

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 3:19am | IP Logged
OMG Fianlly u updated Sana ! :D 
ITNA TYM :o Koi nahi i no u had exams so its kai :D 
but u better update the next one soon ! :) 


Getting to the update <3 
OMGG it was such an adorable one ! 
Wat i loved the most was how he catches her hand and refuses to let go and does evrythn wid one hand <3 D'aawww :D 

And Possessive Swayam aww man <3 I so love him like dat and wen Sharon winks , Haha , She's so smart ;) Cant wait for the dance now . Great Update Sana <3 I loved It :DD
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zara.92

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U wrote it for me and I'm the first one to comment :p see the looove ? LOL :p

WOW !!! I simply loved it !!!! The way rey goes to taani's room inspite of swayam warning him :p hw desperately he wants to be wid taani (blushes) and the pipe climbin (epic) and then ice-cream (awww) it was the sweetest yet weirdest thing he wantd in the middle of the night and finally they kiissseddd *yippee* !! Awesome awesome update sano :p
Can't wait for the next one :p m ready to spam :p :p xoxoxo
Yes, yes bohot love dikh raha hai LOL
And thank u sooo much Zara! Hug Yeh le ek kiss tere liye bhi

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shreyay

awesome update...!!! i should say.. sabr ka phal meetha tha hamare liye..!!!
but that dosn't mean nxt update late dena.. update fast..!!! this update was just tooo gud..!!! luv u for this..!!!
Thank u so much Shreya! Big smile (i'm assuming that ur name from the username)
And i dnt knw wen i'll be able to update next Cry but i'll try to update asap! Smile
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sreelu094

awesome update sanaClap
but it was a looong wait for us.so early update LOL
really loved naughty reyWink.it was superb sana.can't wait for taarey confession.try to update soon dr
Thanks Sree! Heart Hug
I'll try to update asap! Smile

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dipu_taarey

finally u updatde it. . . . . .
really nice update. . . . . .
love possesive bhai swayam. . .
taani has to dance with rey. . . . .
confession in next update. . . . .
update soon. . . . .
Thanks Dipu! Hug
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
oww sana finally update mil gaya ,,,,,,wow awesome ,,,,,,,nd d kissHeart
gr8 update ,,,,i hpe next update jaldi milegaBig smile
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SanaR1108

Rey : Umm, woh'woh I am kind of'kind of missing Taani! I know this is crazy, abhi two hours, three minutes aur (he looks at his watch) 48 seconds pehle toh usse mile tha but I'm already missing her.

aww this was way beyond cuteDay Dreaming


Swayam : Warna main'main Taani ko tere khilaaf bhadka dunga.

haye hamara possessive bhaiLOL


Rey : We're in the same house but pipe se chad ke tumhe surprise karne ka maza hi kuch aur hoga.

He goes to the pipe, keeps a leg on it and says "Hey Krishna Ji, bacha lena"

omg omg omg pipe and rey saying krishna jiDay Dreaming...apni cutely weird Ms.GS ka asarLOL


He walks over to her bed and lies on it, one hand resting on his chest and the other behind his head, "Aur jaldi karna, mere paas zyaada time nahi hai"

i died laughing hereLOL


Rey : No sarcasm allowed! Feel ke saath bolo Taani'Come on, you can do it!

yes taani u can do itWinkLOL


Taani : (shouts) Ki aap bhaad mein jao! Mujhe aapke saath koi dance wance nahi karna hai, I'll tell Pinky Didi ke aap convince nahi hue.

again died laughingLOL


He shuffles through her dresses, selects a red churidar and gives it to her, "Yeh pehno"

awwDay Dreaming


Taani sees Rey following her and sticks out her tounge at him, "Catch me if you can"

Blushing

Rey says and wipes her tears with a thumb, his eyes welling up too. He leans closer to her and presses his lips against her one cheek and then the other, kissing her tears away. Taani clutches Rey's arm as they look at each other passionately and Rey finally brings down his lips to hers. Taani closes her eyes, melting into the kiss. Rey deepens the kiss and his fingers slide down the back of her neck, tracing its shape and every place they touched was electric. Taani tightened her hold on him and'
i am literally dead after thisDeadBlushingLOL


"I don't know" Rey says with a grin. "But I'm pretty sure you were doing it too"

Blushing


Promo :

TaaRey Confession <3


omg"faints"


in short i am dead after such an awesome SS u r a very entertaining writer sana kaash tum D3 ki writer hotiLOL...awesoem job u r back with a bangBig smile

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