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TaaRey SS : Bombay to Jothpur Updated Pg 44 (Page 21)

KhayalonKiMalik IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 12:10am | IP Logged
PlZz update!!!

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
Hello TRians! Hug Sorry for the late and short update! I'll update again tomorrow, promise! Par aaj suspense pe end karna zaroori tha LOL


Taani' mom : Taani jaldi utho! Kitni der tak sogi, breakfast ka time ho gaya hai'

Taani : (yawns) Haan, 5 minutes! Uth rahi hoon Mamma.

Taani's mom : Jaldi! Tayaar ho kar mujhe niche help karne aana

Taani : Hmmm'

Taani's mom shakes her head and goes away.

Taani sits up quickly and takes out her laptop from under the blanket. She switches it off.

Taani : Phew! Bach gayi, agar mamma mere laptop par Rey ki photos dekh leti toh I would have been dead by now!...Rey aap na mujhe pagal karke chodo ge! Pehle aap the toh aapke gayab hone ke liye pray kar rahi thi aur  ab nahi ho toh I'm missing you!

She sighs and gets up from her bed, showers and changes her clothes. She rushes out of her room and goes into the kitchen to find Rey casually standing and drinking water there.

Taani : (thinks) Oh Great! I'm seeing him again.

Taani's mom : Kahaan thi tum? 5 minutes bol kar itni late kardi, chalo ab jaldi help karo meri.

She reluctantly goes to help her mother, pretending not to see Rey.

Rey smiles.

Rey : (thinks) Oh, so Taani still thinks she is imagining me!

He smiles mischievously, goes to her and asks "Can I help too?"

Taani looks up at him, sighs and gets back to work.

Rey : Hello, Taani! Main help karoon'.

Taani ignores him. Rey shrugs and walks over to her mom.

Rey : Aunty, main aapki koi help kar sakta hoon?

Taani's mom : (smiles) No Beta! Its okay!

Taani's jaw drops open, she stares from Rey to her mother, then back to Rey while Rey tries to control his laughter.

"Mamma" Taani says finally, after she has gotten over the initial shock.

Taani's mom : Hmmm'.

Taani : Aap'.Aap inhe dekh sakti hain?

Taani's mom gives her a weird look.

Taani's mom : Ofcourse dekh sakti hoon! Main andhi nahi hoon.

Taani blushes with embarrassment and looks away. She makes up an excuse and goes back to her room

Rey tries to follow her out but Taani's cousins stop him and take him away. He sighs and goes with them.

Rey sneaks into the corridor silently, he had run away from Taani's cousins again. He quickly slips into his room and breathes a sigh of relief.  He fumbles with the lock just as someone grabs his arm and corners him by the wall.

Taani : How dare you?

Rey looks at Taani in disbelief.

Rey : Taani, tum! (sighs) Mujhe laga tumhare cousins hai'.Bohot irritating hai who sab!

"Aapse toh bohot better hain" Taani says angrily, still holding Rey's hand firmly.

Rey looks at his hand and then at Taani. She looked really angry and really beautiful. He just stared at her while she kept on saying something. He forces himself to concentrate on what she was saying rather than how pretty she looked.

Taani : You're so insensitive! Apne alava aaj tak kisi aur ke bare mein socha hai aapne kabhi'..

Rey : Socha hai na'.Tumhare baare mein!

Taani stares at him.

Rey : Infact, jabse tum Jothpur aayi ho tabse I've only thought about you!

Taani gives him a wary look.

Taani : I don't believe you!

She leaves his hand and turns to go away but Rey blocks her path.

"Taani, you have to listen to me" Rey says, frustrated.

Rey : Haar baar ya tum chali jati ho ya main, we have never talked peacefully'.But I'm not letting u go today! We have to sort everything out!

Taani looks at Rey and sees how desperately he wanted this. She could feel herself softening, wanting to give in, wanting to sit here and talk to him all day but she couldn't forget what he had done today. She knew he meant it as a joke but she couldn't help but feel hurt.

"Nahi, Rey! I don't want to talk'I'm done with you" She forces the words out of her mouth.

Rey jerks back at the coldness in her voice and eyes. He had never seen her so angry or so hurt.

Rey : Taani, Mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum itna hurt ho jaogi. I didn't mean to'.

Taani cuts him off.

"Mean to what? Make fun of my feelings?...But guess what?! Har baar ki tarah aapne aaj bhi wohi kiya hai" she says bitterly as a tear rolls down her cheek.

Rey involuntarily reaches out to touch it but Taani moves away. Rey withdraws his hand, feeling dejected and Taani runs out of the room. He hits the wall with his hand in frustration, then takes a deep calming breath.

"Baat tumhe karni hi padegi, Taani. I've come this far and I'm not going to give up now" He smiles as an idea strikes him.

Plz Hit the "Like" Button! Smile

Edited by SanaR1108 - 21 September 2012 at 5:43pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
WOW it was really amazing luved the variations first part was tooo cute the kitchen scene sooo cute them the ending to intense n sad very curious to know rey's plan although it was kinda short but luved it Big smile will wait for tommorow for u next update Wink Big smile

Edited by Sara_Taarey22 - 21 September 2012 at 6:46pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:07pm | IP Logged
Amazing update :D The kitchen bit was really cute and funny :D
It got really intense in the end :O Can't wait for the next update.

Sana you are an amazing writer so keep up the good work :)

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
omggg yayyy u updated Dancing

the kitchen scene Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming 
so cute taani kept ignoring him and her mom's answer when she asked if she can see him ROFL

the ending was so intense!!! gosh u have to update soon pls pls plsss soon!

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL just realized me and fatzz have similar reactions to this update

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
sana drHug i enjoyed the updateEmbarrassed

taani rey kitchen scene and the last emotional scene loved it so much,...Heart

eager to know about rey's idea!!

update soonHug

Edited by blue_cherub - 22 September 2012 at 12:34am
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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by desigirlx5

ROFL just realized me and fatzz have similar reactions to this update

HAHA! Yes we do :p Great minds think alike Wink

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