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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 91)

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:44am | IP Logged
awesome...hope they trust eachother soon...

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by memyselfandrshi

hey devi maiyya I go for bath and lose my stalker position...to priya and kookie...

Unresingum 

K I must say the wait for worth it. Khushi doesnt realize right how pretty she is and how attracted her husband is to her.. Considering the way they married I really liked the way u kept the Grihapravesh etc simple.  M irritated by shyam but I can ignore him for today.

Again u gave an insight into the complications that make this man. SO there is something about his parents marriage in addition to La and her betrayal that does not let him believe in relationships and marriage in general.

Kavi there is one thing which I did not understand about arnav though. He is so much connected to his roots, he loves Rajasthan appreciates the beauty which evidently La was never able to see yet y his own room, his private sanctuary makes a break with this. The guest house and his room here both show his attachment to may b America. 

K u r awesome the way u bring in little glimpses of him. I really like the way u talked about his liking towards photography. So other than running a businesss empire and gardening there is something else which the man loves may b acquired during his days in the US..

The wardrobe scene was simply brilliant. Somewhere I feel both had not thought things through. Arnav underestimated his attraction towards her and khushi underestimated the effect he will have on her now that she realizes she loves him

BRILLIANT GIRL...

Now coming to important part...

We want throbbingum together not alag alag ...LOL

Good question B... you know I wrote this instinctively because this little aspect is something close to my heart as well.

I don't know if I will make much sense but I will try.

For Arnav, America represented "freedom" - the freedom to be and do what he really liked in his life as opposed to what he was saddled with due the untimely death of his parents.

He wants to hold on to those memories in some way or the other, to remind him that his dreams had meant something to him.

But he does love his roots as well. Rajasthan, - the pace of his birth is very close to his heart. He identifies with this vast, inhospitable landscape and eventually this is the place he would always come back to.

I think he is trying to get the best of both worlds.

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by memyselfandrshi

Originally posted by Soloperson

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Originally posted by memyselfandrshi

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hey devi maiyya I go for bath and lose my stalker position...to priya and kookie...


Bhakti, good morning! We are learning a thing or too from you and shal about stalking skills...Wink


Hahah how abt it BDS_P come to together with a plan to petition for proper Thumpingum, throbingum, pumpingum from K...lets join forcesLOL



I am sure K will bring up her defense saying she gave throbbingum in this update, we should clearly make the clause in the petition about thumpingum, throbbingum and pumpingum involving both Arnav and Khushi, not Arnav and chotey's in showerEmbarrassedROFL



I second ya...Iss baar we will write our demands clearly...chotte's chotey and khushi's nanhi khushi together thunpingum, throbingum, mangta hai[/QUOTE]

Aap logon ka bas chale toh I will have to rename my story to ER (Erotic Rose) aur har update mein hogi... midnight masala LOL 

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peepli

Originally posted by Soloperson

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Originally posted by memyselfandrshi

res

hey devi maiyya I go for bath and lose my stalker position...to priya and kookie...


Bhakti, good morning! We are learning a thing or too from you and shal about stalking skills...Wink


Hahah how abt it BDS_P come to together with a plan to petition for proper Thumpingum, throbingum, pumpingum from K...lets join forcesLOL



I am sure K will bring up her defense saying she gave throbbingum in this update, we should clearly make the clause in the petition about thumpingum, throbbingum and pumpingum involving both Arnav and Khushi, not Arnav and chotey's in showerEmbarrassedROFL



ROFL ..oh yeah.. chote thumpingum, khushi throbbingum, we jumpingum... And no more "kuch nahin" kavi... LOL[/QUOTE]

I just told B ki this FF will soon turn into an midnight masala erotica Wink

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
awesome update..oh i am just loving it!!

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
When will these misunderstandins clear between t hem??
Shyam is such a creep...trying to create distance between them...
Loved the cute fight between the couple...
Superb update...

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Loved the part. I am glad that all the rasam were simple n not grand as of now . I really feel bad for Arnav when he's arguing with Nani n Di. He had already seen his parent's mrg fell apart. And i am sure he's a sense that somewhere Shyam is not the right person for his di. I didn't see any kind of interaction between Shyam n Arnav yet . I could understand how miserable Arnav was feeling when the realization of his words drawn upon him after his fight with Anjali.
What a couple they are really. Khusi thinks Arnav got mrd to her to keep her dignity in place and to help Payal and Arnav thinks she got mrd to him only for Payal. The moment Khusi was thinking about Arnav's freedom is the same time Arnav realized how Khusi is trapped in this whole thing.
The closet scene was nice .. I wonder till how long they will be able to keep the distance from each other. The passion between them is clearly seen. Khusi already in love with him and Arnav is attracted to her like hell. The last scene was really cute.

Shyam is really a cheap person. He's trying to create MU between Khusi n Arnav is such a cheap trick. I just hope Arnav realize his advance towards Khusi soon.
I know it's pretty soon to say but please continue soon Wink

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Awesome!!

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