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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 90)

vandana.sagar IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged
I am stalking your story waiting for an update...and then just found it...great part...missed the suhaag raat! 

Their attraction is so intense...it's not going to be long before they can stay away from each other !  
Felt Khsuhi s pain when she finds out from Shaym that arnav spent the night with someone else...which I know he did not...but poor Khushi! 

Want to see a possessive Arnav...

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amritab Senior Member
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Loved the chapter!
You've done such a great job of capturing the intensity of the attraction and the pain of the misunderstanding between Arnav and Khushi.  Arnav taking out his anger on Nani and Anjali - so expected as he has no other outlet. Their emotions, their feelings are simmering and it makes the chapter such a pleasure to read.

I don't know how but I will hope that Khushi finds a way to avoid Shyam - although I love your Anjali and I want her to be happy, either alone or possibly with Dr. Manav and so I want someone to discover Shyam's dastardly ways and of course vanquish his presence in this home.  He's already begun his campaign to impair the relationship between Arnav and Khushi - I can only hope he is never successful.

Will we be finding out more about Akash and Payal and their relationship?

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soloperson

UOTE=memyselfandrshi]
Originally posted by Soloperson

Originally posted by memyselfandrshi

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hey devi maiyya I go for bath and lose my stalker position...to priya and kookie...


Bhakti, good morning! We are learning a thing or too from you and shal about stalking skills...Wink


Hahah how abt it BDS_P come to together with a plan to petition for proper Thumpingum, throbingum, pumpingum from K...lets join forcesLOL



I am sure K will bring up her defense saying she gave throbbingum in this update, we should clearly make the clause in the petition about thumpingum, throbbingum and pumpingum involving both Arnav and Khushi, not Arnav and chotey's in showerEmbarrassedROFL

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I second ya...Iss baar we will write our demands clearly...chotte's chotey and khushi's nanhi khushi together thunpingum, throbingum, mangta hai

Edited by memyselfandrshi - 04 October 2012 at 10:12am

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soloperson

UOTE=memyselfandrshi]
Originally posted by Soloperson

Originally posted by memyselfandrshi

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hey devi maiyya I go for bath and lose my stalker position...to priya and kookie...


Bhakti, good morning! We are learning a thing or too from you and shal about stalking skills...Wink


Hahah how abt it BDS_P come to together with a plan to petition for proper Thumpingum, throbingum, pumpingum from K...lets join forcesLOL



I am sure K will bring up her defense saying she gave throbbingum in this update, we should clearly make the clause in the petition about thumpingum, throbbingum and pumpingum involving both Arnav and Khushi, not Arnav and chotey's in showerEmbarrassedROFL

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ROFL ..oh yeah.. chote thumpingum, khushi throbbingum, we jumpingum... And no more "kuch nahin" kavi... LOL

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annab Goldie
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Wonderful update..loved the description u given to arnav's bedroom.i can picturise the details when reading...
                     shyam is a real pest..i hate him..Angry.he thinks every man is like himm...i really dont think arnav is spending nights with someone else...poor khushi it breaks her heart...hp they understand each other soon and realise their love for each other...

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Annie12 Senior Member
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Very nice update

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esmeralda111 Senior Member
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
it wz some update, I m always looking forward 2...Shyam is sickly sweet n sowing seeds of doubt n hatred in Khushi's heart 4 Arnav. he w do it more, I know it. I hope Arnav soon realizes his sum of a bro-in-law's leacherous intentions 2wards Khushi...dialogues of Arnav n Khushi always carries the magic in them...Smile...Brilliant as always Clap

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Shalve IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
superb update

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