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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 9)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by peepli

Whoa whoa..when you said bold, I didn't expect this...and so soon...

Khushi loves him, so I guess she wouldn't regret it..but then she has essentially made the same mistake she blamed payal for..

Arnav, seeing how he put up with La each time, seems very honourable, so expect him to propose to khushi as he has realized he is her first..

good, they realized their first meeting..and the way you draw comparisons each time to the desert rose, makes me wish to see one..could you please post a picture of it the next time you update, if its not too much trouble..

My main concern is what will be arnav s reaction when he finds out about the deception...

Great update dear..btw wanted to ask you long back, what's with you and Rajasthan..remember you had written about a rajasthani carnival in DKD..


Yes she made the same mistake didn't she? After falling in love she understood how Payal could take that step.

Well in DND the fair theme was Assam ... remember the Bihu dance and the Muga Silk saree?
Here it is Rajasthan because I found out that Raizadas are actually Rajputs... and can it get any more exotic than Rajasthan with their costumes, haveli, jewellery and the Thar?
I have updated my profile picture to Desert Rose ... don't know if it looks as exotic as it soundedSmileTake a look...



The pic is beautiful...and your idea of comparing it to khushi is refreshingly unique..

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Ohh, God Complicated :( Broken Heart

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
brilliant...

this chapter covered for the whole series...their first meet, arnavs past with La, khushi's love and emotions towards Arnav. It even explains the reason why Arnav finds it difficult to accept Payal or her child...

their love making was sensual...utterly satisfactory. But what's in store for tomorrow...? Arnav won't change his opinion ...but khushi is emotionally involved, it was her first time with the person she loves...it'll stay with her forever...this bit was written very well...

as always the description of Rajasthan and its culture is fantastic. You surely do research b4 writing. Maybe you have visited the place to know what to write?

thx 4 pm. Take care

sri.

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Wonderful update. I am glad he opened up to her. I just hope they don't regret what happened between them.

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged

Awesome update. Waiting for more.

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
The sensuality, passion, emotion and rawness of this update make it totally astounding read. Simply brilliant!!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
GOOOD...UPDATE SOON...

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
congrats on new thread...

oh freak! did that really happen? things are going to be so complicated..i was initially glad that arnav opened up to khushi and told her about her past..but then, after love making, i am worried sick for both arnav and khushi..how are they going to react to it later on..i hope none of them regrets...

but for the update..it was amazing...i so loved it...

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