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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
R...kavi, your most irritating stalker at your service LOL ..will unres at night as I am tired after all this stalking LOL


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First of all, your kuch bhi nahin broke my heart LOL

Arnav s words to anjali regarding herself and shyam staying apart ..is it because he has some doubts..??

Your detailed description of the bedroom and bathroom were great, but that is one of the strong points in the way you write..could perfectly inpicture it in my mind..btw, such a spacious bathroom has me hoping that we might see, according to priya s words, throbbingum n jumpingum there.. LOL

Regarding the delicious incident in the closet, khushi wanted to arnav to kiss her, we wanted arnav to kiss her..but.. Angry ..kavi, when did you become so evil..

shyam strikes .. Poor khushi, must have felt really bad.. Hope Shyam goes away on one of his visits soon..

The last paragraph was cute..they are behaving like a normal couple.. And kinda glad for khushi..payal is getting married, she is married to a man she loves...think this is much better than her previous conditions..

Great update, kavi.. Loved it

Edited by peepli - 04 October 2012 at 7:35am

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
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Yupi,I am secondSmile. I am happy.I tend to ignore the fact that peepali got the first number because after all she has been awarded th DR stalker of the yearLOL.

I thoroghly enjoyed reading the update. Ooops,there was no Suhagrat. I am sad and dejected as I had developed so many fantasies for Arhi's wedding-night.

What,I can't believe,you forgot one ritual of Grihapravesh i.e Arnav had to carry Khushi in the house(I know you tried to make it different from the show but that was too cute and romantic of an occasion to be discardedCry).

I can't believe that Arnav passed whole Suhagrat away from Khuhsi,well this propels the need of PROPER suhagrat at the start of PROPER relationship.

Oh,Arnav I am happy for the fact that you are trying to induce some sense in your sister,but my intuition is that Anjali is well aware of all the kartoots of Shymu.

Shyam,I hate youAngry and I don't want you to succeed in this ff the way CV's are making you successful in the actual serial.

I loved the part where arnav made Khushi sleep on the bed,absolutely adorable.


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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peepli

R...kavi, your most irritating stalker at your service LOL ..will unres at night as I am tired after all this stalking LOL

How do you do this? Shocked

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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:47am | IP Logged
See I am too getting the hang of shal's stalking skills...

Much awaited update ...even though I am one of those who fall into that " kuch Nahi" clan, I seriously loved this update...first things first, girl friend , your aesthetic taste in sarees and jewellery is just awesome... Loved the description u gave for that grihapravesh saree...
A man ruthless with words, perfect example is Arnav, guy does not spare anyone even his Di and Nani..

Shyam is just getting on my nerves...Angry...Bas...


Thanks for that throbbingum part but we wanted two people involved in that throbbingum not only ChotteEmbarrassed...

Great update!!! Hug




Edited by Soloperson - 04 October 2012 at 7:31am

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bhaiting...bhaiting...bhaiting...RES.
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Posted: 04 October 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
hey devi maiyya I go for bath and lose my stalker position...to priya and kookie...

Unresingum 

K I must say the wait for worth it. Khushi doesnt realize right how pretty she is and how attracted her husband is to her.. Considering the way they married I really liked the way u kept the Grihapravesh etc simple.  M irritated by shyam but I can ignore him for today.

Again u gave an insight into the complications that make this man. SO there is something about his parents marriage in addition to La and her betrayal that does not let him believe in relationships and marriage in general.

Kavi there is one thing which I did not understand about arnav though. He is so much connected to his roots, he loves Rajasthan appreciates the beauty which evidently La was never able to see yet y his own room, his private sanctuary makes a break with this. The guest house and his room here both show his attachment to may b America. 

K u r awesome the way u bring in little glimpses of him. I really like the way u talked about his liking towards photography. So other than running a businesss empire and gardening there is something else which the man loves may b acquired during his days in the US..

The wardrobe scene was simply brilliant. Somewhere I feel both had not thought things through. Arnav underestimated his attraction towards her and khushi underestimated the effect he will have on her now that she realizes she loves him

BRILLIANT GIRL...

Now coming to important part...

We want throbbingum together not alag alag ...LOL


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