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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 66)

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
awesome updateee...
arhiii both are so compilcated people they feel for eachother
even though not respondingg ...uffD'oh
thinking doing for their sibilingsStern Smile
update soon
thnx 4 pmBig smile

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
another excellent update...eagerly waiting fr the next as now they are together what will happen next...

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 8:29pm | IP Logged
K I finally unres-ed and updated my comment. Here is the link. 

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
dude where my pm any loved the update asr showing mami he place was the best part awesome khushi already feeling funny around snake hope she confide in asr but knowing him he won't believe her and she is mrs asr now she is already thinking how to get out of the marriege awesome update

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by memyselfandrshi


K  what an awesome update. I don't know where to start with this one so m going to say muaah for getting them married...yeyeyey  m happy happy. My mood improved so much after the reading the update again.

Ok coming back..

When u say "Her thoughts went back to the night in the desert. Things had gone downhill after their lovemaking, when he had found out she was not the sophisticated older woman, who knew what she was getting into when she had asked to go out with him" am I right in interpreting that Khushi feels he regrets or worse that the experience was unsatisfactory for him. Honestly speaking in the last update my mind did linger on Arnav's reaction after the lovemaking session. WHen he asked her why she pretended to be elder than her age. I understand he assumed she working in Fashin Industry may have been experienced but I feel that question conveyed to Khushi that she was not able to satisfy him. When in reality the poor chap is pleasantly surprised and may b feels guilty. I think this point is very crucial becos it lays the foundation of the marriage. No wonder she feels surprised that he wants to marry her. No wonder the most obvious explanation is not obvious to her. I think her statement that "'But you'll not get any pleasure out of it Mr.Raizada.'  points to this insecurity. No wonder she feels Ria more apt at satisfying him. Wish she could see how attracted he is to her and that somewhere he stops himself only bcos of her inexperience and not wanting to hurt her.

K this update more than justifies my deewanapan for this guy. I really liked the way he stood up for his wife (wish I get to see this in the serial, I have always wanted Arnav to put a stop to Mami's phati saree BS). I really like that he can state facts to mami withhout letting burden of guilt overcome him.

I absolutely love that he realizes his responsibility not only for his family but for this girl who did trust him that day. He cares for what the world thinks of her, his first instinct is also to protect her from the pain that the world views will cause her. YEs he does not realize its love but bcos he does not realize, the existence of love cannot be denied. U brought out wonderfully the mettle Arnav singh Raizada is made up of.

Hatts off buddy...simply brilliant. Looking forward to hearing from u if my comments make sense...its the first thing which impacted me with this update..

I am always overwhelmed when someone perfectly interprets what I want to say. 
The reason Arnav tells her that he thought she was older is to explain why he had been so forward with her from the beginning ie; from the first day they met. His assumption about her age and profession were the key factors. 
Her response to his advances had a little "abandonment" in them because for Khushi, there is this intrinsic knowledge that, with Arnav it somehow feels right, her inexperience notwithstanding.
Hence our Arnav is shocked to discover that this girl is "pure" and reacts with anger which is driven by guilt for making those presumptions.
You have correctly understood Khushi's interpretation of his anger. She does think that her lack of experience is what has caused him to burst out like that.
She says "I am sorry I was not equipped to entertain you" or something to that effect. 
Here Arnav says "who in the right mind will not want to marry you?" But poor Khushi doesn't really understand it...
But all these things will get cleared now slowly as they are married and are going to share a room Wink

Yes this Arnav is a little more expressive about his feelings without saying the actual words. 

Thanks B, I loved it that you understand.

-K

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dumas

dude where my pm any loved the update asr showing mami he place was the best part awesome khushi already feeling funny around snake hope she confide in asr but knowing him he won't believe her and she is mrs asr now she is already thinking how to get out of the marriege awesome update


haven't sent any PMs yet ... will get round to it today... as today is supposed to be the actual update day Wink
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by memyselfandrshi


K  what an awesome update. I don't know where to start with this one so m going to say muaah for getting them married...yeyeyey  m happy happy. My mood improved so much after the reading the update again.

Ok coming back..

When u say "Her thoughts went back to the night in the desert. Things had gone downhill after their lovemaking, when he had found out she was not the sophisticated older woman, who knew what she was getting into when she had asked to go out with him" am I right in interpreting that Khushi feels he regrets or worse that the experience was unsatisfactory for him. Honestly speaking in the last update my mind did linger on Arnav's reaction after the lovemaking session. WHen he asked her why she pretended to be elder than her age. I understand he assumed she working in Fashin Industry may have been experienced but I feel that question conveyed to Khushi that she was not able to satisfy him. When in reality the poor chap is pleasantly surprised and may b feels guilty. I think this point is very crucial becos it lays the foundation of the marriage. No wonder she feels surprised that he wants to marry her. No wonder the most obvious explanation is not obvious to her. I think her statement that "'But you'll not get any pleasure out of it Mr.Raizada.'  points to this insecurity. No wonder she feels Ria more apt at satisfying him. Wish she could see how attracted he is to her and that somewhere he stops himself only bcos of her inexperience and not wanting to hurt her.

K this update more than justifies my deewanapan for this guy. I really liked the way he stood up for his wife (wish I get to see this in the serial, I have always wanted Arnav to put a stop to Mami's phati saree BS). I really like that he can state facts to mami withhout letting burden of guilt overcome him.

I absolutely love that he realizes his responsibility not only for his family but for this girl who did trust him that day. He cares for what the world thinks of her, his first instinct is also to protect her from the pain that the world views will cause her. YEs he does not realize its love but bcos he does not realize, the existence of love cannot be denied. U brought out wonderfully the mettle Arnav singh Raizada is made up of.

Hatts off buddy...simply brilliant. Looking forward to hearing from u if my comments make sense...its the first thing which impacted me with this update..

I am always overwhelmed when someone perfectly interprets what I want to say. 
The reason Arnav tells her that he thought she was older is to explain why he had been so forward with her from the beginning ie; from the first day they met. His assumption about her age and profession were the key factors. 
Her response to his advances had a little "abandonment" in them because for Khushi, there is this intrinsic knowledge that, with Arnav it somehow feels right, her inexperience notwithstanding.
Hence our Arnav is shocked to discover that this girl is "pure" and reacts with anger which is driven by guilt for making those presumptions.
You have correctly understood Khushi's interpretation of his anger. She does think that her lack of experience is what has caused him to burst out like that.
She says "I am sorry I was not equipped to entertain you" or something to that effect. 
Here Arnav says "who in the right mind will not want to marry you?" But poor Khushi doesn't really understand it...
But all these things will get cleared now slowly as they are married and are going to share a room Wink

Yes this Arnav is a little more expressive about his feelings without saying the actual words. 

Thanks B, I loved it that you understand.

-K

@bold 
 
Hey Devi Maiyya!!! K after this statement  u know the intezaar for the next update feels too long... U r brilliant my lady, u make it is so easy to understand.

This Arnav is a man in all senses, he knows his responsibility, his rights, he has it in him to face guilt but not let that overshadow his judgement and in the other v imp sense too ofcourse Blushing, thats y m deewani..

Thanks for reading my comment,
M off to sleep with a smile now, 
Gnite. Oops ! Good morning to u have an awesome day

- B

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by memyselfandrshi

Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by memyselfandrshi


K  what an awesome update. I don't know where to start with this one so m going to say muaah for getting them married...yeyeyey  m happy happy. My mood improved so much after the reading the update again.

Ok coming back..

When u say "Her thoughts went back to the night in the desert. Things had gone downhill after their lovemaking, when he had found out she was not the sophisticated older woman, who knew what she was getting into when she had asked to go out with him" am I right in interpreting that Khushi feels he regrets or worse that the experience was unsatisfactory for him. Honestly speaking in the last update my mind did linger on Arnav's reaction after the lovemaking session. WHen he asked her why she pretended to be elder than her age. I understand he assumed she working in Fashin Industry may have been experienced but I feel that question conveyed to Khushi that she was not able to satisfy him. When in reality the poor chap is pleasantly surprised and may b feels guilty. I think this point is very crucial becos it lays the foundation of the marriage. No wonder she feels surprised that he wants to marry her. No wonder the most obvious explanation is not obvious to her. I think her statement that "'But you'll not get any pleasure out of it Mr.Raizada.'  points to this insecurity. No wonder she feels Ria more apt at satisfying him. Wish she could see how attracted he is to her and that somewhere he stops himself only bcos of her inexperience and not wanting to hurt her.

K this update more than justifies my deewanapan for this guy. I really liked the way he stood up for his wife (wish I get to see this in the serial, I have always wanted Arnav to put a stop to Mami's phati saree BS). I really like that he can state facts to mami withhout letting burden of guilt overcome him.

I absolutely love that he realizes his responsibility not only for his family but for this girl who did trust him that day. He cares for what the world thinks of her, his first instinct is also to protect her from the pain that the world views will cause her. YEs he does not realize its love but bcos he does not realize, the existence of love cannot be denied. U brought out wonderfully the mettle Arnav singh Raizada is made up of.

Hatts off buddy...simply brilliant. Looking forward to hearing from u if my comments make sense...its the first thing which impacted me with this update..

I am always overwhelmed when someone perfectly interprets what I want to say. 
The reason Arnav tells her that he thought she was older is to explain why he had been so forward with her from the beginning ie; from the first day they met. His assumption about her age and profession were the key factors. 
Her response to his advances had a little "abandonment" in them because for Khushi, there is this intrinsic knowledge that, with Arnav it somehow feels right, her inexperience notwithstanding.
Hence our Arnav is shocked to discover that this girl is "pure" and reacts with anger which is driven by guilt for making those presumptions.
You have correctly understood Khushi's interpretation of his anger. She does think that her lack of experience is what has caused him to burst out like that.
She says "I am sorry I was not equipped to entertain you" or something to that effect. 
Here Arnav says "who in the right mind will not want to marry you?" But poor Khushi doesn't really understand it...
But all these things will get cleared now slowly as they are married and are going to share a room Wink

Yes this Arnav is a little more expressive about his feelings without saying the actual words. 

Thanks B, I loved it that you understand.

-K

@bold 
 
Hey Devi Maiyya!!! K after this statement  u know the intezaar for the next update feels too long... U r brilliant my lady, u make it is so easy to understand.

This Arnav is a man in all senses, he knows his responsibility, his rights, he has it in him to face guilt but not let that overshadow his judgement and in the other v imp sense too ofcourse Blushing, thats y m deewani..

Thanks for reading my comment,
M off to sleep with a smile now, 
Gnite. Oops ! Good morning to u have an awesome day

- B

Good night B and after your comment my day is definitely going to be awesome. Needed this after the heartbreaking episode yesterday.

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