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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 61)

SansShyam Senior Member
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
ohhh..god!!!! hey you,yes you...!!why why do you have to stop with such a cliffhanger...??? Ouch Ouch 
now how can we wait ?? Angry

 i do feel that you deserves more and more likes and  comments..truly you write beautifully. the language is subtle and touching...you have gripped your faithful readers in a tight grip so that they wont ever leave im sure...it may not be shown in comments..i feel with the characters,and sometimes even forget that they are fictitious. the background,emotions all are overwhelming.

when it comes to the chapter kushi is perfectly her character...always coming in to conclusions after working thing irrationally on her own...always unaware of how she effects men,especially males like shyam..and their story hints there is more to happen...i'm soo happy that there are misunderstandings and twists..that means the story has far to go...Embarrassed
anyway keep up the good work...i do hope that you update soon...ClapClap oh and i forgot...i loved it..Smile

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amritab Senior Member
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
So it begins - I really enjoyed the ebb and flow of the moments in the chapter - the terse agreement to marry, the passion behind the kiss, the clinical marriage ceremony and then the impact of the conversation with Mami (especially when he warns Mami about her manner of speaking about Khushi) and then the last moment - Arnav observing Khushi and possibly drawing the wrong conclusion.  It's all so so good.  

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Very well done.
its sad that they are in this situation, but it seems to be the only resort doesn't it?
 
Anyway, Arnav was absolutely mindblowing with Maamiji. And aahhh, protective instincts, eh? Anjali is an absolute darling, and so is Naaniji. But Im glad that Khushi recognizes what a creep Shyam is. Prevents her from making foolhardy errors now.
 
So she has an understanding of why Arnav has done this, thats a good start.
 
And she thinks she must end this marriage to "redeem" him?
 
How typically Khushi.
 
Liked it very much Smile
 
Avi

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
What a beautiful update absolutlly loved it :-)

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Loved the update... Sorry for not commenting on the previous one but I am so happy that they r married now and plz Khushi try to curb your suicidal tendencies and if she knows that how seriously he takes his responsibilities then why does she think that he is gonna divorce her after akash and Payal's wedding since she has become his responsibility although from Arnav's point of view he loves her but doesn't admit it yet... Khushi should be wary of Shyam though bcz I've got a feeling that Arnav and Khushi will have a massive showdown bcz of Shyam.

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 7:30am | IP Logged
OMG OMG arnav and kushi are married now.. awesome.. atleast it gonna keep shyam at a distance util he will try to be big villain... and loved that arnav wants akash and payal to get married and he talked or rather blackmailed mami... hehe... loved the update





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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 7:30am | IP Logged
awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Wow amazing turn of events.. l loved the update.. Thanks for updating quick.. One of the FF I desperately wait for an update..

Arnav and khushi are married..

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