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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 6)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
beautiful chapter.it was like river of different emotions.flowing .when i read the festival  i felt that i'm actually there ...their intimate science was sensual and poetic...well scared to know his reaction after this. i'm sure he will break her heart..  

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Beautiful...!!!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
thanks for the PM

Fabulous update

They remembered about their first meeting (Destiny)

His past with Lavanya came out and Khushi comforted him. But would he think she played him
when he finds out why she went with him for the day.

The made love and it was sensual but I'm scared to find out his reactions.

She did it because she loves him but he may think she wants to trap him


Edited by seeta_naips - 07 September 2012 at 7:53am

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 7:57am | IP Logged
you are born to kill us... with this slow and deliberate way of narrating this story!!!
mind blowing update carol...
love-making explained with extreme sensuality that im feeling a bit hot and bothered u know...!!!!
INCREDIBLE... the power of ur words i mean...
loved it to the core!!!!

~~~ sam xoxo

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
that was really very hot...loved it!Blushing

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Nice part
Oops hop they dnt regret spcly Khushi

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Lovely chapter from several angles.  
One the descriptions of the festival are incredibly realistic and create the milieu.  
Two, his volunteering his history with Lavanya makes it easier to understand his reaction to Akash-Payal.  Once bitten, twice shy.  
Three, the two of them together was a foregone conclusion.  Too much chemistry under exotic conditions can only lead to one conclusion.

I think it is good that they both realized where they first met and that the first time they made love was free of the situations created by family that are sure to crop up.  I only hope that Khushi does not end up in a similar situation to Payal.  Given that the storm of family is likely to hit on their return home, what with Akash-Payal and then Shyam planning a visit, this might be all they have to hold on to sanity for a while.  

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
The way you described the desert festival made me wish I was there... I could almost imagine it! LOL Loved the romantic parts too! Embarrassed

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