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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 54)

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shonagudia

Can we have an update soon please...Pretty please with Arnav on the top Wink( I am sure you ll like this) 
He was on top even the last time ... *blinks like a tubelight*

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by shonagudia

Can we have an update soon please...Pretty please with Arnav on the topWink( I am sure you ll like this)

He was on top even the last time ... *blinks like a tubelight*


Then, can we have khushi on top this time...*blushing tomato red*

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peepli

Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by shonagudia

Can we have an update soon please...Pretty please with Arnav on the topWink( I am sure you ll like this)

He was on top even the last time ... *blinks like a tubelight*


Then, can we have khushi on top this time...*blushing tomato red*


I don't mind who's on TOP as long as the work is done Wink

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by segad

First of all thank you for being consistent in your updating frequency.  It helps maintain interest in a story.

Glad that Arnav is back and Shyam was put in his place.  LOVED that Anjali called a spade a spade and even identified herself as a freeloader.  Sorely missing in the serial itself.
Khushi does not realise that Pandora's box has opened for her by turning down the marriage proposal.  Shyam is a vulture.  Suraj does not have what it takes to fight off the vultures.  Besides Arnav raises a fair point about Suraj accepting her.  If things can get back from the desert then I am sure Shyam will ensure that they reach Delhi as well to achieve his goal.

I like the fact that in your story Shyam is motivated purely by lust.  There is nothing pure about lust but once the root cause is identified, it can be dealt with.  

Arnav's assessment of Akash was very interesting to read.

Being consistent is thanks to a group of friends who don't forget to remind me Smile
For a change I want Anjali to just be a loving sister. Yes Sham is purely motivated by lust and yes there is absolutely nothing pure about it.
Root cause?? 

Root cause comes from my investigator background.  Root cause as in the real reason for a chain of events. The reason a chain of events unfolded.


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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shonagudia

Originally posted by peepli

Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by shonagudia

Can we have an update soon please...Pretty please with Arnav on the topWink( I am sure you ll like this)

He was on top even the last time ... *blinks like a tubelight*


Then, can we have khushi on top this time...*blushing tomato red*


I don't mind who's on TOP as long as the work is done Wink
Point noted Smile

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by segad

Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by segad

First of all thank you for being consistent in your updating frequency.  It helps maintain interest in a story.

Glad that Arnav is back and Shyam was put in his place.  LOVED that Anjali called a spade a spade and even identified herself as a freeloader.  Sorely missing in the serial itself.
Khushi does not realise that Pandora's box has opened for her by turning down the marriage proposal.  Shyam is a vulture.  Suraj does not have what it takes to fight off the vultures.  Besides Arnav raises a fair point about Suraj accepting her.  If things can get back from the desert then I am sure Shyam will ensure that they reach Delhi as well to achieve his goal.

I like the fact that in your story Shyam is motivated purely by lust.  There is nothing pure about lust but once the root cause is identified, it can be dealt with.  

Arnav's assessment of Akash was very interesting to read.

Being consistent is thanks to a group of friends who don't forget to remind me Smile
For a change I want Anjali to just be a loving sister. Yes Sham is purely motivated by lust and yes there is absolutely nothing pure about it.
Root cause?? 

Root cause comes from my investigator background.  Root cause as in the real reason for a chain of events. The reason a chain of events unfolded.



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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by shonagudia

Originally posted by peepli

Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by shonagudia

Can we have an update soon please...Pretty please with Arnav on the topWink( I am sure you ll like this)

He was on top even the last time ... *blinks like a tubelight*


Then, can we have khushi on top this time...*blushing tomato red*


I don't mind who's on TOP as long as the work is done Wink

Point notedSmile


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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
just adore ur story and style
look forward to the next fab update

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