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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 46)

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Lovely update!

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 9:27am | IP Logged

'That has healed,' she said softly, as she pulled her feet back from his grasp. It is the wound in the heart that hasn't healed, she added silently..."

 
Thats the predicament of the heart. What it should show it doesnt yet we are betrayed through by ours eyes. In that one sentence Khushi encompassed all her pain. Its always the wound in the heart that takes the pleasure of slowly and sadistically draw out the pain hoping that the eyes can show its torture. It just wants to be found rescued. Beautiful work!


Edited by AllSmiles86 - 21 September 2012 at 3:05pm

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
First of all thank you for being consistent in your updating frequency.  It helps maintain interest in a story.

Glad that Arnav is back and Shyam was put in his place.  LOVED that Anjali called a spade a spade and even identified herself as a freeloader.  Sorely missing in the serial itself.
Khushi does not realise that Pandora's box has opened for her by turning down the marriage proposal.  Shyam is a vulture.  Suraj does not have what it takes to fight off the vultures.  Besides Arnav raises a fair point about Suraj accepting her.  If things can get back from the desert then I am sure Shyam will ensure that they reach Delhi as well to achieve his goal.

I like the fact that in your story Shyam is motivated purely by lust.  There is nothing pure about lust but once the root cause is identified, it can be dealt with.  

Arnav's assessment of Akash was very interesting to read.

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 9:46am | IP Logged
I don't know what to say...just let them be together...then fate will decide their journey...excellent and most waited update...thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Wonderful update, just hope Khushi accepts Arnav offer

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 10:08am | IP Logged
OMG so arnav n kushi will get married ...
i want to see shayam's faceLOL
loved it yaar...
but plz plz update soon with more arshiEmbarrassed

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 10:13am | IP Logged
I got the feeling that Arnav was going to ask her to marry him anyway because he felt honor-bound and of course Mami and Shyam's comments seemed to seal the deal - Shyam is a catalyst in your story as he is in the show! and am I right that Khushi will come around to the idea for Payal's sake?  I do admire Khushi for refusing him now though.  The ghost of girlfriends past has come back to haunt Arnav - he needs some closure from Lavanya, that is for sure.  A great chapter - really looking forward to the next one so I do hope you update soon Day Dreaming

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Will Arnav find anything in the package ( Lavanya's) that will lead him to Shyam? 

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