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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 41)

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by msin

I love this ff.. But 2 weeks and still no kissy wispy from the two... Comeon... U 2... Charlotte .. Can we have a quick short update...

Steam Arabian nights ke baad...thoda waqt to lagta hai... too much mess going on in the household... sort out kareka padi Smile

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kookie2020

This was a Maha episode update.
Loved every bit of it when Khushi threw back his proposal back to his face.
I love this Khushi of yours dammit.
Felt bad for a sec for ASR  when Maami taunted him for not being the responsible one.
Shyam - Once a creep, Always a creep.
I like this Anjali better than the one on the show.
Let's see what happens now.

Hungry again for another dose.
Kya yaar Kavi, Your FF is so damn addictive.

Thanks Kookieji... looks like I am aiming for Mahaepisode every week. And that is why difficulty in posting. I shall try to update shorter ones in the future...but sometimes haath rukta hi nahi ...kya karoon?LOL

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 4:55am | IP Logged
It was soo good cherry!
I mean the part where he asks her to marry is like AWWW!

But I like the dialogues during that part I think you have written the beautifully!

Lets see what happens next!

Please update soon or I swear to god that your thread will be mercilessly spammed or your inbox!

Please I due to read your work man, please update soon! Please!


Cheers! :D

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 4:56am | IP Logged
loved it ! loved it !! loved it !!!
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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by kookie2020

This was a Maha episode update.
Loved every bit of it when Khushi threw back his proposal back to his face.
I love this Khushi of yours dammit.
Felt bad for a sec for ASR  when Maami taunted him for not being the responsible one.
Shyam - Once a creep, Always a creep.
I like this Anjali better than the one on the show.
Let's see what happens now.

Hungry again for another dose.
Kya yaar Kavi, Your FF is so damn addictive.

Thanks Kookieji... looks like I am aiming for Mahaepisode every week. And that is why difficulty in posting. I shall try to update shorter ones in the future...but sometimes haath rukta hi nahi ...kya karoon?LOL


No no please update Maha Episode once a week if you give short updates I will wrack my brain on what will happen next and break my head! Confused 
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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soloperson

Kavi, I haven't read the update yet, but soo excited ... Will read now and be back...Hug

Edited...

Nice long update , loved it...intense drama and kinda surprised that mamiji made all that hoopla bcos some relatives saw Arnav and Khushi together, she has no clue that her son knocked up payal is it?. while reading that part I knew for sure he was going to ask her to marry...Wink felt kinda bad for Arnav being taunted saying there was no role model...Awesome update!..will wait patiently for the next update ...


Hi Priya,

Thanks Priya!  Mami has no clue about her laadla beta's kartoot... and yes it's her job to make everyone around her feel bad... 

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
you updated!! :) That was great! :)) Loved it!

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Thank you for another awesome chapter!!!! I hope the Snake gets caught before Arnav starts accusing Khushi of being a marriage breaker or something. Looking forward to the next one! :)

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