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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 31)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
After reading the update for second time, i have a feeling that shyam is the one behind lavanya's death..!! Did he drug her purposely to satisfy his lust..?

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 2:18am | IP Logged
I loved the way Khusi was all brave n mature in the beginning . Arnav actually thought she's older than Payal and all these must n't be too new to her. I has thought they will be awkward after last chapter but the scene changed entirely. though i am really happy that Akash had regained his memory but the timing was really bad. I can't blame Arnav for thinking what he has in his mind for Khusi n left like this. He's bound to be angry to be deceived in this manner by his family n specially by Khusi after he let his heart open in front of her. But i am really really feeling bad for Khusi. I knew in the last Khusi will be the one who will loose everything, who ll be misunderstood, who ll be accused.
And to her fate Shyam has to come back now. I just hate the way Shyam thought she will be available for him to fulfill his lust. such a cheap thought about women.
I know it's not easy for Arnav to forget everything but atleast hope that he will be able save Khusi from that cheap human.
Even i have a feeling that Shyam is responsible for Lav's death and the baby was his.
Continue soonn Is Arnav coming back with Ria this time...    

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 4:34am | IP Logged
loved it..!!! i was a silent reader and started commenting only recently because i'm on a big vacation.. have only found out this ff lately..and your writing  is almost on par with our great IF writers such as devi aka public enemy and head over heels...(They are my venerated writers..they take you for a superb and exciting ride of reading. so it was a compliment okay..Winkthey are very unique writers that are hard to come by.Smile

I loved reading desert rose...i love the setting which is unlike many other ffs and Arnav,his past and also the way you write..its breath taking..i should say that it is a best piece of writing that i have read recently...i hope you continue with this soon.but  after all its your baby so i know that you would make our wait worth it at the end... .keep up the good workClap

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SansShyam

loved it..!!! i was a silent reader and started commenting only recently because i'm on a big vacation.. have only found out this ff lately..and your writing  is almost on par with our great IF writers such as devi aka public enemy and head over heels...(They are my venerated writers..they take you for a superb and exciting ride of reading. so it was a compliment okay..Winkthey are very unique writers that are hard to come by.Smile

I loved reading desert rose...i love the setting which is unlike many other ffs and Arnav,his past and also the way you write..its breath taking..i should say that it is a best piece of writing that i have read recently...i hope you continue with this soon.but  after all its your baby so i know that you would make our wait worth it at the end... .keep up the good workClap

I do take that as a compliment...thanks!

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Amazing. Just waiting for Nannav to return. :D

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 10:58am | IP Logged
When is the next update buddy ?

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
wooowww lovely story...

But pleeez dont give us Arnavless updates.. it hurts...

just kidding... i know its the need of the story..

awesome track..

update soon...

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Posted: 14 September 2012 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by samster03

When is the next update buddy ?

Hopefully by friday... lots of commitments next week Disapprove

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