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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 28)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Arnav's past has colored his way of thinking so much so that he thinks that Khushi had used her body to manipulate him...
Damn!
And Khushi has fallen in love with him...what a mess!
Glad that Akash has regained his memory and wants to marry Payal...at least one problem is solved.
Now Shyam is back and he wants Khushi...
His plan would probably end up in getting Payash married but I wonder what kind of problems it would create for Khushi...

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
I love this FF, u are a brilliant writer. I have read all your stories in the past couple off days, awesome. Please PM when u update, thanks. 

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged
I don't know about others...but I really liked this chapter...I felt khushi's emotions could be painted in morose colors...

to start with the realisation of what she had done, and she even expressed her love...which was not only reciprocated but harshly replied by Arnav...well at no point I am blaming arnav...but the multitude of khushi's twisted heart and the pain she felt till she reached the haveli was written very well...

even later when he leaves her and goes from the room...there is some mention of curtain etc...it held so much meaning like the show came to an end abruptly and with nothing in favor to her...

khushi's happiness at seeing Anjali enter the house during Shyam's visit, speaks well about her principles...she is not here to get hooked to anyone but to solely solve Payash problem...little did she know that her heart would get hammered in the process...

I've always liked your work...especially Himalayan Magic...

thx

Sri.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Very good chapter

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Shyam can lust over Khushi all he wants...I just hope that his uncouth behavior does not put more strain on the already delicate bond between Arnav and Khushi (star plus gives us enough of that) and hopefully Shyam's not so pristine plans will fall flat on their face very soon...such a CREEP!!!

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
awesome
 
superb
 
that sucker shyam
 
khushi shld kick him hard
 
n whts the prob of ASRAngry
 

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
A brilliant brilliant update!! I'm stumped! Seriously a blockbuster update! The whole arnav-khushi thng had me biting nails..n ofcrse i felt bad for her..bt i undrstand arnav's point too..he was cheated no doubt, n its knwn dat he isnt goin to tk dis well, plus his past is also there..all in all, m too excited abt wats gonna hppn..
dis shyam..he's a creep here tooAngry n i hope dat he helps bring arnav n khushi 2gthr by his stupid plans, like d way it hppns on d show..bt he seems dangerous here..
m intrigued..cnt cntrol my xcitemnt..so update soon!

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Read it all in 1 go but found it 2 b breathtakingly beautiful piece of writing.
It was truly awesome reading it.
Plz do add me coz I wanna read it more.
W8ing 4 ur pm n update.

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