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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 23)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Loved the display of anguish. How he felt cheated but Khushi felt helpless to tell him how she feels.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Oh god, Shyam is a creep in this story too? Wonderful update!

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:02am | IP Logged
loved the update, very nicely written
glad that aakash got his memory back and he loves payal, and also he stood up in his decision to be with her lifetime in front of arnav.  poor khushi always misunderstood, inspite of her good deeds. creep shyam as always.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
my hands shook when i was scrolling down to read your today's update.
Still curious to know what is gonna happen next ...

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Holy crap! This is becoming a maze. Shyam's rxn I m not surprised. Almost expected it. But te way things r going, it would not be too pretty. Gosh., I feel for khushi n yet for Arnav.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged
wat i was scared did happen...Cry now i cn only see them drifting more n more apart... nd more misundrstndings too,, oh noo... Cry
nd aarghhh shyaaam...grrr... sch a moroon!!!!
wen is anythng gnna get evn a lil bttr btw arnav n khushi.. i guess nt any soon...hmmm
well , dear as always fab update...quite intense...

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged
The conversation between Arnav and Khushi was heart wrenching. You have written it very beautifully.
Akash got his memory back and he stood up for Payal in front of Arnav.

Poor Arnav and Khushi ...both are suffering due to the misunderstanding.

Welcome to Shyam...The Cupid. He entered at the right time. So now Arnav and Khushi will get closer ...only because of him. 
( waiting to see the mighty ASR kicking his a** for lusting after Khushi ) .

Thanks for the beautiful update and pm.
Pls update soon dear.Smile


Edited by Roshkolovemusic - 13 September 2012 at 6:30am

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Yikes Shyam again..lol. I so was hoping khushi would have told Arnav about the reason for the sudden trip herself, but then that would have made it too easy. Nice to see Aakash recovering and having a spine. Wonder what Arnav is doing in Delhi...ria factor is not sounding convincing...will khushi have a new boss upon returnBig smile...I love this story...so will zip it and leave it to ur creativity. 

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