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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 22)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
The dialogues between Arnav and Khushi were zabardast,you wrote them in great accordance with their mental state and situation.I am a bit sad that Arnav didnot believe Khushi,but why fear when our cupidwa i.e snakewa is here.I am sure that whatever Shyam baba would do,it would always help in bringing Arhi closer because he is so stupid of a villan to think that he can get Khushi who will be close relative of Akash and his rani sahiba and still remain uncaught.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
that wad a touching update..  =)

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Shyam the sleaze ball!!!!! One good thing is he will make sure aakash n Payal get married!!!


After that our darling Arnav is ther to save the day for khushi!!!!!! Kahan jayega bachke!!!! Has to come back!!!!!

Great update!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Fabulous update.. Arnav feeling deceived is quite reasonable considering khushi made Arnav feel that their love making was nothing more than a distraction for her.

I so glad that Akash after recognizing Payal accepted her and the child. I couldn't imagine how would have felt if Akash was a pussy to not fight for his love..

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Wow, awesome update surely worth the wait...you seriously pen down their emotions very realistically...thanks for the PM..

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
this was so painful...

what' a plight for khushi, having arnav think that she used her body to get him away from haveli and to get Payash together. Its like someone is laughing at her love for him...she loves him and everything has gone absolutely wrong...what a mess...irreparable,

to top it Shyam adding to the misery...what a lecherous guy...wicked too...

thanks for the wonderful update...pm too.

sri.

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Great update

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Posted: 13 September 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Nice update

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