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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 127)

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
wow good update. They both miss each other.

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soloperson

K, now this one was one perfect update...loved every single detail in this..flawless narration...first of all a big hug for you for not sending Khushi alone with Shyam and Manav to the rescue, what a darling, I hope in future you will make his dream come trueWink...loved the convo betwn him and Khushi, how Khushi found out that he is in love with Anjali...I am also glad that he saw that SOS look on Khushi's face about Shyam...
mamiji revealing true colors with Payal being the PERECT mean saasu ma, and Akash spineless irresponsible boy still, BUT I am soo glad that Payal has Khushi to the rescue...
In spite of her dreams of having a child hindered running a NGO which serves the purpose,shows Anjali's heart...
Last but not he least,now what shall I call that passion, seriously K , can I just shoot Akash?..LOL...
Now why the heck is bitwa mad at her that she was a designer instead of a model? So now that bitwa is mad and filled with passion can we expect something roughEmbarrassed...
K seriously rocked with this update, very fulfilling update!!! One of ur best...

Hey Priya ! First you commented in thread 2 and I was searching in thread 3. 
I can really count on you to understand my Arnav ... you are seriously competing with B on this. you said bitwa is mad an filled with passion and can we expect something rough. See...that's how you covert anger into passion. 
Bitwa's anger is not very big deal Priya... I think I might have made it look a little more than what it is actually going to be LOL

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
thnkz 4 pm dr..!
js lvd it..
nd d dialog..i havnt been wit ria or anyothr aftr u stormd in2 ma life...!
muah lvd it.!

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by Soloperson

K, now this one was one perfect update...loved every single detail in this..flawless narration...first of all a big hug for you for not sending Khushi alone with Shyam and Manav to the rescue, what a darling, I hope in future you will make his dream come trueWink...loved the convo betwn him and Khushi, how Khushi found out that he is in love with Anjali...I am also glad that he saw that SOS look on Khushi's face about Shyam...
mamiji revealing true colors with Payal being the PERECT mean saasu ma, and Akash spineless irresponsible boy still, BUT I am soo glad that Payal has Khushi to the rescue...
In spite of her dreams of having a child hindered running a NGO which serves the purpose,shows Anjali's heart...
Last but not he least,now what shall I call that passion, seriously K , can I just shoot Akash?..LOL...
Now why the heck is bitwa mad at her that she was a designer instead of a model? So now that bitwa is mad and filled with passion can we expect something roughEmbarrassed...
K seriously rocked with this update, very fulfilling update!!! One of ur best...

Hey Priya ! First you commented in thread 2 and I was searching in thread 3. 
I can really count on you to understand my Arnav ... you are seriously competing with B on this. you said bitwa is mad an filled with passion and can we expect something rough. See...that's how you covert anger into passion. 
Bitwa's anger is not very big deal Priya... I think I might have made it look a little more than what it is actually going to be LOL

So from ur reply, can I safely conclude that the act which was left abrupt will be completed in the next update?.Embarrassed...btw La died of drug overdose, is it suicide or murder?..

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Posted: 17 October 2012 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Soloperson

Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by Soloperson

K, now this one was one perfect update...loved every single detail in this..flawless narration...first of all a big hug for you for not sending Khushi alone with Shyam and Manav to the rescue, what a darling, I hope in future you will make his dream come trueWink...loved the convo betwn him and Khushi, how Khushi found out that he is in love with Anjali...I am also glad that he saw that SOS look on Khushi's face about Shyam...
mamiji revealing true colors with Payal being the PERECT mean saasu ma, and Akash spineless irresponsible boy still, BUT I am soo glad that Payal has Khushi to the rescue...
In spite of her dreams of having a child hindered running a NGO which serves the purpose,shows Anjali's heart...
Last but not he least,now what shall I call that passion, seriously K , can I just shoot Akash?..LOL...
Now why the heck is bitwa mad at her that she was a designer instead of a model? So now that bitwa is mad and filled with passion can we expect something roughEmbarrassed...
K seriously rocked with this update, very fulfilling update!!! One of ur best...

Hey Priya ! First you commented in thread 2 and I was searching in thread 3. 
I can really count on you to understand my Arnav ... you are seriously competing with B on this. you said bitwa is mad an filled with passion and can we expect something rough. See...that's how you covert anger into passion. 
Bitwa's anger is not very big deal Priya... I think I might have made it look a little more than what it is actually going to be LOL

So from ur reply, can I safely conclude that the act which was left abrupt will be completed in the next update?.Embarrassed...btw La died of drug overdose, is it suicide or murder?..

all in good time my dear 

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
I think I am still a little dazed reading Arnav and Khushi's encounter. You have written it so beautifully, so sensually. And there are a select few writers who can write such scenes and make their readers feel the brimming passion, desire flitting in the atmosphere. Exquisite, truly.

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 11:41am | IP Logged
ok srsly can u plz give us a date or time of ur nxt update??
i m tired of checking it every now n den...hun plz dont do dis us...plzzz update soonn..

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Posted: 18 October 2012 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by BARUN-myladdu

ok srsly can u plz give us a date or time of ur nxt update??
i m tired of checking it every now n den...hun plz dont do dis us...plzzz update soonn..

I usually update within  a week dear 

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