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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 12)

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 5:36pm | IP Logged
ClapClapthanks,fantasticClapClap

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by shalini_s

DND?

my previous FF Dark Night Dawning ...was that your question?
 
yup.. thanks..

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
ok so I'm glad Arnav opened up and stuff but I'm worried about what his reaction will be when he finds out why Khushi went with him...but it wouldn't be a good story if we don't have fights right? Loved the update!! Thanks for the PM!!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
vow awaited chapter, very well writtenClap i hope he doesnt send her far from him once he realizes what he has done..or y khushi went out with him...super-like from meSmile

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Wow awesome update!! Hopin Arnav doesn't get mad at her after he finds out why she spent the day with him..

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ArShifan1997

RESSS*
EDITED*
 
AAHHH
 
I AM PERMANENTLY IN CAPS LOCK MODE RIGHT NOW. NO JOKE.
But, I'll stop Tongue
 
Holy mother of all thats Holy, what in God's name was THAT?
 
I'm not going to say I didn't expect it, becuase truth be told; I did. I did the moment Khushi realized that weren't heading back home.
 
What I did not expect, however, was how amazingly and mindblowingly you wrote this scene. The festival was beautifully described and I could imagine myself over there. Seeing every small thing you mentioned.
 
Frack. Woman. Frack.
 
My brain actually stopped functioning when I read their coupling. f**k amazing charlotte (Pun not intended) Just brilliant. Everything was just right. The urgency, the emotions, the arousal...it was all there. I could feel everything you wrote.
 
I have a slight query though,
Why was Arnav surprised when he discovered that Khushi was a virgin? Did he honestly think that she was a loose woman, or did he just forget in the heat of the moment? Confused
 
Anyway, brilliant char. Just wow.
 
Please dont torture us like you did for this update. Please. I will not be happy. -..- It'll be a vicious circle. Wanna know why?
When Im unhappy, I tend to screw up things in my Fic.
Which basically means that I kill everyone. Tongue Dont make do that. Because I shall direct a horde of angry readers to you LOL
 
Continue SOON. OKAY? SOON.
Yeah. Kay.
 
Cheers, Avi.

Hey Avi,

Why was Arnav surprised when he discovered that Khushi was a virgin? Did he honestly think that she was a loose woman, or did he just forget in the heat of the moment?

NO Arnav does not think Khushi is a loose woman...he is a Harvard educated broad minded man and knows that this is the 21st century and that just because a woman has had a physical relationship with a man doesn't make her "loose"
So why was he surprised? The answer to that will be coming up in the next chapter Smile


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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by srmirji

brilliant...

this chapter covered for the whole series...their first meet, arnavs past with La, khushi's love and emotions towards Arnav. It even explains the reason why Arnav finds it difficult to accept Payal or her child...

their love making was sensual...utterly satisfactory. But what's in store for tomorrow...? Arnav won't change his opinion ...but khushi is emotionally involved, it was her first time with the person she loves...it'll stay with her forever...this bit was written very well...

as always the description of Rajasthan and its culture is fantastic. You surely do research b4 writing. Maybe you have visited the place to know what to write?

thx 4 pm. Take care

sri.

When you want to make readers feel like they are in the place they are reading it is very important to put in the extra effort. I have seen many writers do that in the past and have been fascinated by it. But those were usually foreign locations. India has so many exotic locations and so I am trying to fulfill my fantasy of seeing my favourite pair in these locations. That is why Nainital, Mussoorie and now Rajasthan Smile... but then Raizada are supposed to be originally from Rajasthan so I thought of putting Arnav in his "roots"...trying to make him a sturdy character maybe?
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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
i don't know if arnav will ever acknowledge wat transpired bet him and khushi, she loves him but u have not mentioned if arnav has the same feeling too...i cant wait for the nxt update*holding my breath till then*...plz update soon...

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