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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 119)

zoyadarkrose Senior Member
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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Shyam is such an annoying asshole,isnt he? Angry That kiss was quite hot,so was the dance Embarrassed
Akash is such an irresponsible guy,isnt he?
I wish Arnav would talk to Khushi & clear the misunderstandings Unhappy

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charlotte74

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
I am so late. But nm. You sent the PM's late. Its good that I stalked our thread. That update was awesome. Just loved the description of the lehenga. I think it was Arnav's choice. I hope when the other material is ready with her suggestions, he will make another lehenga for her with it. Or may be a saree. Are you planning to make Arnav jealous by Manav and Khushi's friendship? And that kiss was hott. So hamri mange puri ki apne. Danyavad.It was really beautiful the way you weaved it in the story. Next to go will be the wall of pillows.This Shyam is more evil than the serial one and is creeping me out. Hope she locks the door every time she is alone. 

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
love this so much.  

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
awesome...superb update...loved it 

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Great update

Except I HATE shyam and ria

They both shud commit suicide 2gether

I got d perfect name 4 them; shia

Poor Khushi, she thinks arnav is # wid that *

I hope she realizes the truth soon

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Awesome update, waiting for next part

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Charlotte one little query how old r Arnav and Khushi?

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Posted: 11 October 2012 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by farheen75

Awesome awesome update... This story is getting better and better with every update... Awww u gave us a much awaited post wedding kiss and I can completely understands Khushi's frustration having such a hot husband and then not going further than a kiss is gonna make anybody irritable with the culprit in this case the hot hubby dearest.

Shyam Shyam Shyam haven't u heard the saying" when the cat's away the mice can play" so it's ok to have your philandering ways outside the house but lusting after your brother on law's wife is not only gonna get u a thumping of a lifetime but also will get u evicted from the rich household( although I am assuming that your Anjilli is not a desperado like poojali) but I am guessing Shyam's gonna learn the hard way... Arnav's gonna gonna for his blood if he tries to do any hanky lanky with Khushi.

Poor Khushi, I've got all the sympathy for her and Arnav should sit with her and talk to her rather than giving her mixed signals all the time... Poor soul she is so confused as to what should she make out of her marriage? The sooner they talk to each other the better.

Yes there is lot of confusion because of Arnav's dogmatic attitude. Only time will heal it. Glad you liked the update.

Answering your question - I understand that all the ages are weaved into a mathematical puzzle in my earlier chapters. So here it is.
Arnav is 29
Khushi is 22
Anjali Shyam and Manav 31
Payal is 24 and Akash is 25



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