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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 113)

bluewater07 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Awesome...please update soon :)

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM...
Today when I taking my classes I was thinking about your fic and wished that you will up-date and you did...Wow...Shocked lol

Ohhh That Mr.Snakewa...I want to KILL him right now...and this Ria...stupid cow...btw,Great up-date...can't wait for the next one...Big smile 

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hiahmed

nice update. let the relationship progress in the backdrop of a marriage
i dont know if u know urdu but just a verse for u
bari deir ki meharban aate aate

I understand the words but what is it supposed to mean? Is it about Arnav?
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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
THAT B@$T@rd SHYAM!!! I HATE HIM!!! WHat a mother f**#&ER!! ARGH!!! I just hope Arnav can clear out this misunderstanding quickly!! Khushi deserves all of Arnav's love! And Arnav deserves Khushi!! I LOVED this update! Especially  the part where Khushi clung to Arnav as the lights went out and everything that followed it! :) :P 
Thank you for the PM :) Can't wait for more! 


Edited by Nehasupnfan - 10 October 2012 at 11:48am

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by amritab

Two steps forward, one step back.  A caring, "heart-constricting" Arnav coming to the fore and I for one am in grave danger of falling for him :)  The description of the "dance" had me laughing out loud while the moments after the dance had me sighing - so well done you!  The choice of song is inspired - shayad yeh pyar hai, Arnav!
This Shyam guy is getting braver and Khushi needs to trust her instincts when it comes to him.
I hope that Arnav and Khushi can have just a friendly conversation soon - one in which perhaps Arnav discovers Khushi's design talents - I would love to see them working together so that Arnav can learn more about the real Khushi and vice versa.  Not that I am averse to some *ahem ahem* as well ;)
 

what you say would only be logical wouldn't it Amrita? Not averse to *ahem ahem* eh? You are part of a group then Wink


You're right - there is no room for logic in this relationship quite yet, is there? And I am happy to be an unabashed member of that group Approve

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Awesome awesome update... This story is getting better and better with every update... Awww u gave us a much awaited post wedding kiss and I can completely understands Khushi's frustration having such a hot husband and then not going further than a kiss is gonna make anybody irritable with the culprit in this case the hot hubby dearest.

Shyam Shyam Shyam haven't u heard the saying" when the cat's away the mice can play" so it's ok to have your philandering ways outside the house but lusting after your brother on law's wife is not only gonna get u a thumping of a lifetime but also will get u evicted from the rich household( although I am assuming that your Anjilli is not a desperado like poojali) but I am guessing Shyam's gonna learn the hard way... Arnav's gonna gonna for his blood if he tries to do any hanky lanky with Khushi.

Poor Khushi, I've got all the sympathy for her and Arnav should sit with her and talk to her rather than giving her mixed signals all the time... Poor soul she is so confused as to what should she make out of her marriage? The sooner they talk to each other the better.

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 11:59am | IP Logged

Nice update! Like the peek into Arnav's feelings:)

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Posted: 10 October 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM.

A kiss...I wasn't expecting it at all. Now I am waiting to see what happens between these two. Always some misunderstanding between them but their love is strongest. 

Awesome update and your fab writing. 

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