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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 11)

SapphireFlames Senior Member
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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Oh My God! That was scintillating. I could literally picture everything. And no, I'm no perve but still. I could picture EVERY effing thing in my head. Amazing you write. 

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
That was explosive... But Im thinking it was a little too early for them, they were both running high in emotions but why do I feel that Khushi is destined for heart break?
Lavanyas past was absolutely devastating...
Who was it that saw him and Khushi at the memorial? Can't wait to find out... Amazing update!

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update!
Both of them came to know that they are the man and woman of their dream.And khushi is Arnav's desert rose.
You beautifully described the festival and the culture. I see this in all of your writing that you go beyond the characters and depicts the surroundings where they situate. That is the individuality of your writing. 
So Arnav opened up to khushi about his past. Arnav past with Lavanya is not pleasing at all. i think Arnav never loved Lavanya.It was just a time pass. His actual love is always khushi.Now I'm worried after the sensuous love making what Arnav will react!. Will he fell in love with Khushi or he will reject Khushi.
Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
 very passionat and beautifully written part...

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Sensual and an exotic update.
 
WOW!!!That was 7 years ago he saw khushi on the highway. Arnav shared his past with khushi.  and that was sad to know lavanya faked about the child's father.
 
And rest of the update is so passionateEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
:o they did it.. oOh.how is arnav gonna react.. great update

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
Congrats..
Loved the update

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Posted: 07 September 2012 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
wow what an update!

I'm so glad you continued their extravagant trip

I wish you could continue till morning, by them having breakfast and all hehe

Finally he opened up about why he's being so protective over Lavanya

I can't wait to see their reaction after that hot session!

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