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Arhi: Desert Rose #2 Chapter 17 updated page 116 (Page 103)

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Do you know I hate shyam
Oh! Whom I m kiddin everyone here hate shyam Angry
But I loved the update

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 2:04am | IP Logged
Where was Arnav on his wedding night...in his office in Bikaner?
You writing is so beautifully descriptive, I can so well imagine Arnav's totally masculine room and bathroom, and the potpouri, scented candles and decorative towels in Arnav's bathroom, who put them? That does not quite sound like Mr. Raizada.
The scene in the close...short but blood-pumping...Khushi wanted Arnav to kiss her, do it already Raizada.
And Shyam , the evilness never stops, does it?

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 4:52am | IP Logged
I'm very curious to read about how Arnav and Khushi's relationship develops...and Shyam is just...can someone hit him over the head...or in the privates? Just a simple plea...don't worry I'll imagine I'm hitting Shyam...sorry I rambled...Loved the update!

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 8:13am | IP Logged
That was amazing! so beautifully written!!!!
loved ur writing style yaar...just too good Clap

Ufff..shyam!!!Angry...plzz koi iss shyam ka kuch karooo...I hate that snake!!Angry





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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 10:30am | IP Logged
awesome

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
EXCELLENT UPDATE...CANT U UPDATE MORE QUICKLY...I WAIT SO MUCH FOR YOUR EXCELLENT WRITTING...

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
The tiny interaction has my mind raging , your writing is so beautiful, so sensual. Then the intricate details with his room, the candles, everything, so beautifully written. I am a sucker for details and hence this story shall remain one of my all time favorites.

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Posted: 06 October 2012 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
ClapClapthanks...great jobClapClap

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