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WRITE A SCENE CONTEST: Completed (Page 2)

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 3:54pm | IP Logged

Entry 8

 
 
Abhijeet : Nahi karne waala main yeh firse ! Hargiz nahi...
Nikhil : Kya nahi karna hai aapko sir?
Abhijeet : Har baar mujhe fansa dete hain yeh channel waale. Mujhe nahi fansna isbaar kisi bhi jaal mein. Musibat se to mera janam janam ka rishta sa judd gaya ho !
Daya : Un logon ne firse tumse kaha apne aapko musibat mein phansane ke lie? Hey bhagwaan !
Abhijeet : wohi to! Tumhi batao, itne saalon mein kitni baar resignation de chuka hoon main CID se?... ! Ab aur nahi... fir se chakkar nahi aane lagenge mujhe, aur naahi kisi ka khoon karunga main. ateet mein bhi nahi aur naahi present mein !
 

 
Salunke : Ek baar bol diya na maine, ki main nahi karne waala aisa kuch to bas Pareshaan mat kar yaar Pradyuman.
ACP : Tere lie achha mauka hoga yeh ! waise bhi problem kya hai? bas kuch dino ke lie gayab hona hai tujhe...baaki hum sambhal lenge...
Abhijeet ; Haan haan... Aur nahi to kya !ACP sir bilkul theek keh rahe hain Doctor sahaab !
ACP whispering to Abhijeet : Maan jaega yeh...Magar shayad ungli tedhi karni padhegi..
Abhijeet to ACP : Haan sir. DCP sahaab se bulwa lete hain, maan jaenge yeh.
Salunke : Kya khusur phusur kar rahe ho tum dono. Jao yahaan se,.. dikh nahi raha main yahaan jaruri kaam kar raha hoon ! Aur waise bhi yeh Abhijeet ka department hai.. Mera nahi.. Mujhe mat phansai is sab jhamele mein. Jao ab !
 
 
 

Inside the qualis, everyone is thinking... silence inside the car.
 
ACP(thinking) :Pata nahi Salunke maanega ke nahi. Dekhte hain !
Daya(thinking) : Main to bach gaya .. warna Nik to peechhe hi padh jaata ! Sabke saamne meri izzat ka faaluda banata woh paagal.
Freddy(thinking) : 15 saalon se CID mein hoon aur saare naye purane logon ko special episode karne ko mil gaya siwwaaye mere. Mujhse to koi poochta tak nahi ek baar... huhhh
Purvi(thinking) : Main bach gayi !! Yay... Warna firse kidnap hona padhta hai... Shreya ko phone karke batana padega...
Nik(thinking) : Abhijeet sir nahi maan rahe hain to kahin woh channel waale Daya sir se na karwaaye yeh special episode ka series. Nahiii .. Aisa nahi hone dunga main.
 
(and without realizing he gives a loud shout, to which Daya brings the car to a sudden halt, and others look behind to see whats wrong in surprise Shocked! )
 
 
 
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:21am | IP Logged

 ENTRY 9

At the Forensic Lab

ACP: Kya hua Salunkhe... Kaafi pareshaan lag rahe ho????Tongue
Abhijeet: aap ko phir se overacting scene mil Gaya kya?? Kahin phir se Nikhil pe goli chalaani hai????Wink
 

Dr. Salunkhe : Arey nahi yaar... Singh Saab ne Abhie Abhie Mujhe aaake Bataya ki ek naya storyline yaani side track start karne waale hai... Love story!!!!

Abhijeet: kya ek aur love story ???? Ohh shayad daya ki hogi... Aakhir hum Dono ko ek saath Jo shaadi Karni hai... LOLChalo...accha hua... Daya ke saath saath Meri bhi love story Zara aage badegi... Kuch naye dialog bolne ko mil jaayenge...Wink

Dr. salunkhe : arey nahi yaar,... daya ki nahi... Meri love story...D'oh

ACP: Kya!!!!! Shocked

Dr. Salunkhe: Haan... Singh Saab ne kaha hai...ki story mein side tracks Kam hogaye hai... Waise abhijeet toh har baar forensic lab nahi aaatha... Toh Thoda side track add Karne ke liye nayi CID officer aayegi... Aur jab abhijeet forensic lab nahi ayega... Tab.. Woh nayi officer aayegi...

ACP: kya!!!!! Salunkhe .. Tum aur ek CID officer Shocked Hey ram D'oh



After sometime in Qualis

ACP: bechaara salunkhe ... !!!!Tongue
Daya: kyon sir... Dr salunkhe ko toh khush Hona chahiye... Thoda change milega unhe... Tarika aur abhijeet ko Dekh dekh kar bore ho Gaye honge...Tongue
 
 

Purvi: sir... Waise aapne toh Mujhe ek minute ka liye heart attack de diye tha...aaj subah Singh Saab ne Mujhe phone kar ke Bataaya tha ki unhe mere story mein twist ke baare mein baat karni thi... Mujhe toh ek minute ke liye laga... Ki woh lakdi Mein hi hoonPinch

Daya: LOLhaha... Acha... Waise story mein twist kya hai..

Purvi:. Kuch naha hai sir... Woh Bas ... Agle case mein mera ek boyfriend aayega... Aur Uske agle case mein mai kidnap ho Jaoongi... 

 Daya: aur agle case mein pata Chaltha hai ki ...boyfriend ne hi tumhe kidnap Kiya hai

Purvi:sir... Aapko kaise pata????Shocked

Daya: WinkLOL

Freddy: arey Daya sir ,... Woh sab chodiye... Aap sochiye... Salunkhe Saab ki toh Nikal padi... 

ACP:   Freddy...kya Nikal padi... Ab is umar mein use romance karna Padega...LOL

Freddy:  sir... Yahi toh sab kuch Chaltha hai aaj kal... Humaara CID chodke saare serials mein... do Saal mein ... teen chaar shaadiyaan... Chaar paanch affair... Aur Che saath Bacche toh ho hi jaathe hai...  sir Baat toh yeh hai... Ki Salunkhe saab Roz bar Roz Jawaan ho rahe hai...aur hum budde...D'oh

Daya: Tum apni baat Karo Freddy... Mujhe buddon mein shaamil mat karo... Meri toh abhi tak girl friend bhi nahi hai...Tongue

Freddy: wahi toh sir... Pandhraah saal hogaye... Ithne mein toh kisi aur serial ke main actor ki teen baar Shaadi aur saath aath Bacchae ho jaathe hai...

Daya: Freddy ... Tumhaari toh hogayi na...Mujhe yeh sab nahi sochna...Mai khush hoon... Mujhe abhijeet ke jaise dukhi nahi hona hai...woh toh soch Raha hai...ki Singh Saab se baat kare,,,...aur yeh flirting ka Kaam...sachin ya nikhil ok dede...

Nikhil: Shocked



At the bureau 

Daya: arey abhijeet ... Tum yahaan... Tum toh lab mein the na... Kyon salunkhe Saab ki nayi girlfriend acchi nahi lagi tumhe ...Wink

 
 
 Abhijeet: Daya ...tumhe mazaak sooj raha hai...Mujhe toh ithna gussa aaraa hai... Yeh DCP Saab... Yaani Singh Saab Bhi na,.,.. Pandhraah saal hogaye hai yaar...Logon ko toh yeh bhi bata Diya hai ki hum log chalees saal ke hai... Make up kar ke chote bhi nahi lag sakthe

Nikhil: yeh Kab Bataya sir... 

Abhijeet:  Jale par namak mat chidko nikhil... Yeh Singh Saab Jo sab ko bataathe hai ki CID pandhraah Saal se chal raha hai... Matlab...Mai aur daya ab chalees saal ke hogaye hai... Indirectly yahi toh declare Kiya hai...pachees (25) saal ki umer mein joining aur pandhraah saal...yaani... Chaalees saal hue na...

Daya: toh problem kya hai...

Abhijeet: problem ... Tum pooch rahe ho???? Mai Singh saab se yahi Kehne waala tha ...ki... Yeh Tarika Ji ke saath romance acha nahi lagtha hai...koi chaalees saal ki umer mein college me bacchon Jaise flirt kartha hai bhala????? Tumne kaha...Thode din rukjao... Shayad kuch change ho jaaye...kya khaak change hua... Abhi Salunkhe Saab se is umer mein flirting karwa rahe hai... Toh Mujh se toh abhi ped ke irdh-girdh dance karwaange... Pinch

Daya: TongueROFL



Edited by astonish - 16 September 2012 at 4:14am

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Time up. Voting starts NOW. Smile
 
Please vote for 2 of your favourite entries.
 
Eg : No 3 and No 9
 
 
Voting closes on Friday 21 Sep 6PM.
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 4:54am | IP Logged
My vote-
#1
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Lovely entries !! very difficult to choose two Star <

Entry 6 and Entry 9 


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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 2:47pm | IP Logged
All the entries were so good, but I still chose 2:

4 and 9
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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
OMG what an entries !! each scene is awesome...!! Actually difficult to choose... was confuse betweet 1,4,6... umm.. ok... my vote goes to #1 & #4 !!!
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5 and 9 Smile

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