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Ok

in one of the chapters before there was a sequence where Arnav in car tells khushi that she cant avoid taking out the ring  given by rohan becoz she is  a middle class girl who has never seen such precious gifts in her life

and Khushi hearing that takes out her ring, weeps and tells  that yes she being a middle class girl doesnt deserve.

I thing that scenes was hugely  emotional and sensitive.I really liked your grasp over that scene.in detail. I wanted that  scene should be utilised by arnav to make him  hell death repentful. But  somehow things were rushed in the FF to move towards love story eagerly. bUt well written scene was thatClap

Another scene which i loved  very much and  that had huge potential to explore more was the scene when khushi screams and tells that it was better she would die  oneday. Arnav's reactions to it were awesome but i wanted that plot to be expanded to see the variations of asr.   That scene has a huge reference point for arnav to decide that he should  make Khushi go back to her family forever. Just so that she never thinks of killing herself.  That dialogue was so powerful that  arnav wud be ready to bend down on her knees. Even  it wud be great if one day he came home and saw Khushi trying to write an emotional suicide letter  not blaming anyone and trying to pull a rope from the fan to make preparations.

Arnav wud be awestruck...and realise the damage he has caused her by creating such situations.

In your earlier FF's atleast sympathy with arnav stayed becoz  khushi was naturally in need of money so it was well balanced but in this FF.arnav himself created the situation..so it paints him black and the repentance had to be special. 

so those two scenes i mentioned really had the  potential to be explored more for arnav to beg for love..I loved those two scenes a lot.it was  emotional.

neways u r writing fabulous.Keep it up

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Yopee I am progressing
Lovely update
Hmm what is in that box may be lingerie 
This dadi want to bit her to pulp
Hope Arnav and Khushi clears all foul air and be together


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