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fab update i got excited with the shooting and Muskaan trying to hide and asking for her gun license 
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hi's part nine...enjoy!!!!!!!

Part 9:

"what the hell?!" she exclaimed.

"What happened???" asked khalid bhai.

"This...this guy...this is...this is Shyam Jha!!! The one who told that arnav was thrown out of his house...that liar!!!" she fumed.

"That means the raizada's are in trouble too!!!" khalid bhai sighed.

"Ya...i guess they are!!!" exclaimed muskaan as she looked down at the photo again.

"Damnit...i should have known this...if he is working for abbu then..." she didn't complete her she saw a wave of fear , wash through khalid bhai's face. "He is a dangerous man now..." he whispered.

As they were discussing this an old man , came in. "Sahab...the evening pooja has started...lets go..." he said and went away. "What...wait...your going???" khalid bhai asked as he saw muskaan getting up to leave. She nodded.

"Don't go...stay here for the pooja atleast..." he pleaded. Muskaan didn't know what was there in this man , which would always pull her towards him. As if he needs his a family...

"Ok...i will stay here for the pooja..." she smiled.


"Thank you beta!!!"

As they walked down , muskaan saw a huge Ganesh statue covered with lots of garlands and the priest chanting mantras. As he saw khalid bhai he called him bengali "Babu...aashun taratari (babu come quickly)!!"

Muskaan was scanning the place. Everyone was carrying a thaal and everyone was chanting the same she was about to look ahead of the crowd..she heard a voice...

She turned around and saw khalid bhai singing..."SRI GANESHA DEVA"

                                                                 Deva Shree Ganesha
                                                                 Deva Shree Ganesha
                                                                 Deva Shree Ganesha
                                                                 Deva Shree Ganesha
                                                                 Deva Shree Ganesha
                                        Deva Shree Ganesha (repeat more than 15 times)

Muskaan looked here and there. Everyone was engaged in their prayers. She just came near khalid bhai and started praying. She heard him chant the mantras aloud.

                                                                     Jwala si chalti hai
                                                                 Aankhon mein jiske bhi
                                                                 Dil mein tera naam hai

                                                                   Parwah hi kya uska
                                                                    Aarambh kaisa hai
                                                               Aur kaisa parinam hai.. ye..

As he sang , muskaan could feel her past coming up to her again...first her family dies , then the survivors are separated , then her own now...trying to track her down to kill much for her...and to top it all...her older uncle (Rashid bhai) is a maniac who just wants revenge from her family for...don't know her...everything is to blur...

                                                                     Dharti ambar sitare
                                                                     Uski nazare utaare
                                                                    Dar bhi usse dara re
                                                                      Jiski rakhwaliya re'
                                                                         Karta saya tera

                                                                 Jai deva Shri Ganesha
                                                                    (Deva Shri Ganesha
                                                                    Deva Shri Ganesha
                                                                    Deva Shri Ganesha
                                                                    Deva Shri Ganesha
                                                                    Deva Shri Ganesha')

Khalid bhai pointed at her. He knew that if anyone could bring justice to her was her. She had to fight for the people she has lost...and God is always with her. Taking some safron power , he drew a tika on her forehead and told muskaan to fold her hands. "Aleayah...fold your hands..." he whispered. As she did , she heard some of the women whispering. 

"Hey...did you hear...Dada's(khalid bhai) niece is arriving..." asked one women.

"yes...i too have heard...i also heard that is a doctor and lives in australia...she is very beautiful too..." the other women said , not acknowledging the fact that their topic of discussion was standing right in front of them...

                                                          Teri bhakti ka vardaan hai
                                                     Jo kamaaye woh dhanwaan hai
                                                         Bin kinare ki kashti hai woh
                                                          Deva, Tujhse jo anjaan hai
                                                         Yun tto mooshak sawari teri
                                                          Sab pe hai pehredaari teri
                                                          Paap ki aandhiyaan na kaha
                                                             Kabhi jyoti na haari teri
                                         Apni taqdeer ka woh, khud sikander huaa re
                                          Bhool ke yeh jahaan re, kiski silien ya haare
                                                                Saath paaya tera hey

" a diabetic!!!!" he exclaimed. Khushi remembered how he fainted one day due his diabetes. But she also remembered when arnav had gifted her a payal after their re-marriage. Their trance was broken by none other than arnav.


"These are sugar-free...i made them especially for you!!!" khushi exclaimed in a hurry. Arnav was even more confused now.

"How do you know that im a diabetic????" he exclaimed.

Khushi was flustered. How will she tell him that she is actually his wife who would always check upon his diabetes. She was tongue-tied but was saved by aakash.

"Ummm...Mr.Rathore...actually Dr. Bharadwaj told us about your that's why we took extra pre-caution..." he tried to smile.

"Oh...ok...but when did she..." but arnav was stopped by sid. "Oh come on should be happy that they didn't kill you with real sweets...but they are actually caring about stop interogating..." huffed sid.

"Oh just butt out of it Sid..." arnav said while narrowing his eyes.

Sid came closer and said " least i had the guts to butt in...but don't even have the guts to talk to a women properly..."he sneered.

"Oh!!! toh ab tu mujhe sikhayega aurat se kaise baat karnte hai...(oh!!! so now you will teach me how to talk to a woman)" arnav said while gritting his teeth and taking hold of Sid's collar. Sid had a smug smile. 

"Kya kyun gaya...mar na...(what happened...why did you stop...come on...beat me)" he said in a challenging voice. Aakash came in between and stopped them."Stop it...both of you..." he pleaded and arnav jerked away sid's collar.

Sid cocked his eyebrows and looked at the other side. The Raizada family now understood that they really had a big responsibility in their hands...

Khushi came up to Sid and gave him some gulab jamun. "Thanks..." sid said. 

"Umm...where is Dr.Bharadwaj????" asked nani. She had also called a priest for a small pooja in the house.

This time...sid and arnav looked at each other..."Shit!!!!" both of them exclaimed and everyone wondered what happened...ovlivious to the fact that a pair of eyes were scanning each and every move of theirs...

                                                                  Ho teri dhuli ka teeka kiye
                                                                      Deva jo bhakt tera jiye
                                                              Usey amrit ka hai moh hai kya
                                                           Hass ke vish ka woh pyaala piye
                                                                 Teri mahima ki chhaaya tale
                                                               Kaal ke rath ka pahiyaa chale
                                                                  Ek chingaari pratishodh se
                                                                   Khadi ravaan ki lanka jale

                                                     Shatruo'n ki qataarein ik akele se haare
                                                                     Kann bhi parvat huaa re
                                            Shlok bann ke jahaan re naam aaya tera hey!

Khalid bhai told her to go and hold their ancestral sword. " can't..." but before she could complete...she found herself standing the Ganesh statue's feet where the sword was kept. She held it and took the sword out. As soon as she did it...the priest got and blessed her. " are the slayer of will kill all evil and be truimphant...". Muskaan was dazed. 

                                                                  Ganpati Bappa Moreya

                                                        Twameva Mata cha Pita twameva
                                                       Twameva Bandhu Sakha twameva
                                                       Twameva Vidya Dravinam twameva
                                                       Twameva Sarvam mum Dev Deva

                                                   Achutam Keshavam Rama Narayanam
                                                  Krishna Damodaram Vasudevam Harim
                                                  Sridharam Madhavum Gopika Vallabham
                                                  Janki naayakam Ramachandram bhaje

                                                Hare Ram hare Ram, Ram Ram hare hare..!!

As the question still remains...whether everyone will survive this storm or not...muskaan decides to go the Raizada mansion as of now. She bed goodbye to khalid bhai and headed towards the raizada mansion...

As she entered the main door with her car...she saw a weird shadow near the meter box. Not knowing the surroundings , she decided not to go there. 

"I think we should call her..." as sid was about to call her , arnav stopped him. "Dude...she is here!!!!" he said. "How do you know that???" asked sid...

Arnav turned around and said "becoz i can feel her presence" and he smiled. Sid nodded his head disbelievingly , whereas khushi and the raizada family was shattered to hear this...

As muskaan entered , she didn't notice a sack of sugar infront of the door and actually kicked it , resulting in a mess. The pandit saw this and smiled. "Ghar mey laksmi ayi hain...(the divine goddess lakshmi has stepped inside the house)" nani and khushi looked upto him.

Muskaan came in with an apologetic face. " so sorry...i didn't notice the sack...i can help in cleaning the mess if you want..." she whispered.

Both arnav and sid broke in laughter..." are such a disaster..." exclaimed arnav making sid laugh more harder...

"Ya...thanks for being so...pathetic guys..." she gritted and they tried not to laugh but...couldn't stop their giggling...

Muskaan then noticed arnav's outfit..."wow...arnav your looking good man..." she said and punched him lightly on his biceps...

"Thank you!!!!!" came the answer in chorus...

Muskaan was confused..."who was the other one...???" she asked. Arnav rolled his eyes and pointed at Junior ASR...muskaan widened her eyes...she looked back at the family... "seriously????" she exclaimed and looked at junior ASR again...

"Hey junior...she gave that compliment to me...not to you!!!!!" arnav sighed. 

"Whatever...this didi looks more intelligent then you so...i shall talk to her first..." Junior ASR declared and stood infront of muskaan...

"Wow...guess its not just you two who has ego problems now??!!!!!" muskaan exclaimed while looking at sid and arnav.

"Didi...please do help me with the science subjects...i want you to teach me..." junior ASR requested...muskaan smiled and agreed...

"Ok now...there are only 2 guest rooms so...Dr. bharadwaj and sidharth can stay in those rooms...and nan...i mean can with junior arnav..." exclaimed NK.

"WHAT???!!!!" both of them screamed.

"Ouch...this is gonna be so much fun..." sid exclaimed...

"Chottey...please...let uncle sleep with you..." exclaimed khushi...arnav was horrified..."who are you calling uncle???? sid is his not!!!!" he exclaimed.

"Ofcourse she called you arnav...uncle!!!!" sid exclaimed...

"oh shut up..."

"Fine...he can sleep with me...but tell him to promise that he won't kick me in the middle of the night..." junior ASR exclaimed...

"I shall get you all something to eat..." exclaimed khushi and went away...arnav too...followed her to the kitchen...

" doing????" asked khushi nervously...

"Im preparing food...for those two monkeys out there...any problem...????" he asked. He was pretty much irritated becoz of sid and now khushi was irritating him...

"Im sorry...i know im very disturbing..." khushi whispered and went to take the flour box. 

"You...might not like it but...i love cooking for...her..." arnav exclaimed while looking at muskaan. 

"She did a lot for me...she is saviour...and this is the least i can do for her..." he said , without even noticing his own wife , standing near him , her eyes brimming with fresh tears...

Khushi now understood the bond which muskaan , arnav and sid shared. Muskaan and arnav are frends...arnav might like her too...and sid...well...she might be the reason behind their heated arguments...the three cannot live without one another...and they were each other's strength...even if they refused to agree with the fact...

"Will i be able to make a place again in his heart????" khushi thought...

"Anyways...umm...can you please pass me the ketchup...???" asked arnav...but then he noticed that khushi was busy with the flour dough so he decided to take himself. As he moved , khushi's pallu's end got caught in arnav's arnav looked back , he saw that his watch was stuck with her pallu...he quickly untangled it...and looked up at was then , when he noticed that she was wearing sindoor...but no mangalsutra...

"Where is your mangalsutra????"

ok guys this is and my sister both of us are having exams so , this crappy update...sorry if you are disappointed...will update after my exams get over...and thanks for reading this...!!!!!!!

Edited by arshifan2012 - 20 February 2013 at 1:59pm

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
poor khushi
when will arnav remember khushi?
it is just l feel very bad for khushi
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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
poor khushi...its so difficult to behave like this infront of ur own husband as a stranger...poor thing...

he noticed abt the mangalsutra????..i wish he helped her to wear itDay Dreaming

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Awhhhi feel sooo bad for khushi like her thinking if she'd ever be able to make a place for her in his heart again sooo sweet, thnaks for the pm can't wait for the next part :) 

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